As they said it right you have to die a lot to be a poetry. I’ve never officially shared any of my poetry whether in Hindi, English or Urdu. But few of my fellow bloggers and my close ones asked me to do so. So here’s a little piece of it:
Some parts of the story will always be too hard to write about – I’m hoping I’ll write them anyway..
जब माथे पर लकीरों की शिकस्त आ जाती है,
तब अक्सर होठों की मुस्कुराहट खो जाया करती है।
रिश्तों में आ जाती हैं दरारें,
तब अक्सर रुह कांप जाया करती है।
जिंदगी जीने के लिए चंद चीज़ों की नहीं,
बल्कि सपनों भरी आंखों की ज़रूरत हुआ करती है।
कैद हो जाए जब ये नज़र उस कातिल के सामने,
तब अपने ही आप में डूब जाने की कसक हो जाया करती है।
कोई हो जो समझ सके मेरे दिल की आरज़ू और मेरे दर्द को,
बस इतना कोई मिले तो दिल से आह निकल आया करती है।
January 21, 2016, that day has taught me a lot of lessons of life. I’m frightened to think about that day now, at the same time I’m grateful for that incident to happened with me, as it has made me stronger today.
Beautiful memories will hurt you the most. Few things are better when they are unsaid.
–SumitOfficial
P.S. – Thanks Akhila for suggesting me to write it in Devanagari Language.
P.P.S. – Thanks Chandni Asnani (Chandu) for the Conversion 🙂
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the point for ” bas itna koi mile..” ,the worst part of it.. when they leave you.. humans should not get addicted to each other, beacuse when they leave us.. it hurts a lot. 🙂
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That’s the truth Divya. We know that ‘love’ always hurts in this way or in another way. But we can’t help ourselves to do that. We are trapped in it, aren’t we? 🙂
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True.. but we need to take charge of ourselves. Apne mann ko khud hi samjhana padta hai.
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Haan, aur iske liye pehle bahut thokre khani padti hain mann ko. And I’m glad Ki me wo khaa chuka hoon!! :
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Me too. 😀
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Yay!!
Kudos to us!! 😎😎
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“even true love can turn selfish at some point of life” buddy 😂😂 cheers \n/
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Hahahaha…. Bahut sahi 😁😁😁
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Ha.ha… 😂😂😂
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Beautiful lines Sir! 😍 Thankyou soo much aapne ye post kiya. And btw, nice DP! 😇😇😇
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You know that right? Who suggested me to post it!! 😜
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Hehe, kaun kaun?? Batao mujhe! 😂😂😂
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Hain Ek pagal ladki 😁😁
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Achhhha! 😏
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I mean acchi hain, caring Hain!! 🙂
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Achhha! 😇😇😇😂😂
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Haa 😎😎😎
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Thankyouu Sir! Huh, itnni taareef! 😂😂😂😂
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😊😊😊
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I would love to comment but can only speak English, sorry.
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That’s OK Eric. 🙂
I’ve shared my experiences in Hindi Language. 🙂
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superb summu… excellent
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Thank you Gappu :*
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Hey..lost somewhere? Come on cheer up..
And why don’t you try to post in Hindi itself, not in this English- Hindi style.
In between lovely lines even though struggled a bit to read and understand
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Hi Akhila. Lost. Yeah. I was. But thankfully not anymore. 🙂
Did you like it? I wasn’t sure of posting it. I was not confident of you people would like it or not.
And yes, I guess I should try it in proper Hindi font from next time. Thank you Akhila for such a wonderful idea 😀😀😀
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You are most welcome friend and come on post more and more in proper Hindi
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Sure sure I shall fr next time. And this friend’s name is Sumit 😉
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oh.. you are Sumit..;),Mr. Official..
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Haha… Yeah!!! 😀
Nice name nah😂😂
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🙂 no comments 😉
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Is it too bad Matlab 😦
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Oh..no no..
what’s there in a name while it belongs to a good character. .😉
Anyway not as good as my name.. lol..
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Haha.. Thanks.
Anyways, I like yours too 😉
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Check out my that post in Devanagari Language now 🙂
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Yes..now it’s perfect
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Thank for the suggestion Akhila 😎😝
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☺
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Hi I’ve nominated you for 3 days Quote Challenge. 🙂
3 Days Quote Challenge : Day 1 – http://wp.me/p641ku-6P
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Is it..Thank you. Let me see if I can do it.
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Yeah. Please have a look 🙂
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You are too good yar……..
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Thank you Kajal. I hope you liked it. 🙂
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Loved this. 🙂
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Thank you Rupali :*
But the comment is too late huh!!
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I told you naa, ki I didn’t login to WP at all.
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Par kyun? Itna busy kidhar?
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Wow! Bahot acha likhtey ho tum 🙂
Good luck..keep writing 🙂
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Thank you Karuna. Muje accha laga tumhe accha laga 🙂
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🙂
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I relate so much….not just to the poem….but to the heading…..but a slight change it was “words that were left unsaid..”…….
Omg….it reminds me of someone who left me forever….
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Haha.. Really? Are you OK now ! :p
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Kinda shocked…….memories…..
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Beautiful Sumit! 😊
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😀😀
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I don’t have words to admire it. Kitna deep and intense h.. The usage of words. I loved it, Sumit. I actually feel it’s worth spending my time visiting your blog. ❤ You are a great writer more than anyone can imagine. 📝👏👍👌
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When life gives you a hard on, you feel fucking awful in this world. All one can do is vent out the pain either by taking drugs, cigarettes, and liquor or simply write down to vent out our pain. Thank you Shreyu for all the words you said. ❤☺
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And you chose the prefect one, to write it down. I appreciate you again.
PS: Sorry, but thanks for reminding me this *hard on* 😁
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Hehehe… I got one comment today from a girl, she said o liked the poetry except that ‘Hard on’ part. 😂😂😂😂
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Lol !! But That’s the most interesting part baby. ❤
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Hahahahah🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈
It was you only who insisted me to publish na. 😂😍😘❤🙈
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Han or kya.. And vese b, Ain’t girls like the hard on? Girls are so pretentious na. 😂
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Oye..paglu. 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈
Apne raaz yun kyu kholri😂😂😂😂
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Haha. Sorry
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😂😂😂😂
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You write really well in Hindi too
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I tried back then initially.
If you read now, it’s improving now. 🙂
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I will read them soon
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Done!
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