अक्सर बातों ही बातों ने कुछ बातें बिगाड़ दी
तो अक्सर दोनों के बीच की खामोशियों ने बातें संवार दी
अक्सर ख्यालों में आने वाले हकीकत हो गए
तो अक्सर हकीकत में रहने वाले आँखों से ओझल हो गए
अक्सर बुलंदियों की चाह में रिश्तों की कीमत खो दी मैंने
तो अक्सर रिश्तों की आड़ में बुलंदियाँ हासिल कर ली मैंने
अक्सर दिल में आयी बात होंठों पर नहीं आ पाती
तो अक्सर होंठों पर आयी बातें दिल को चुभ जाती
अक्सर जीती हुई बाजी हाथों से खोयी है
तो अक्सर अपनी हार से उनकी खुशियाँ पिरोयी हैं
अक्सर खूबसूरती ने उनकी हमें ख़ाक कर दिया
तो अक्सर चाहत ने उनकी हमें बेबाक कर दिया
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sumit this is amazing. I really want to see more hindi/urdu poems from you. Totally swooned by your Versatility.!!
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Hi Krati,
कुछ कहानिया बस बातो-बातो में ही बन जाती हैं, इस छोटी सी कविता की ही तरह 🙂
but I promise you will see more such piece of writings from my side if you really like them 🙂
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yaaay… thanks sumit… ❤ ❤
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❤😘😊
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Very nice yar
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thank you Kajal 🙂
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Bht khoubsurati se likha hai aapnay
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Jo aaone likha wo hum bhi chahhenge ki aap post kare aur duniya ko dikhaye, kitna pyara nazm aapne bhi likha hain, iss padh kar 🙂
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Jaisay aap kahay janaab.. 😉
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😋😊
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I always admire hindi poetry and this is wonderful.👏👏👌
Baaton se hi rishtey bante hain bigadte hai aur sawarte hai.
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That is true Prashan, Hindi poetries are awesome too. It will force you to think beyond the limits. 🙂
बाते ही हैं जो बाते बनाती हैं या बिगाड़ती हैं, और रिश्ते सँभालने वाली ही यह बाते हैं
दरारे तो तब आती हैं जब रिश्तो में बाते खो जाती हैं
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Bahut khoob…well said!! Apni bhasha ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai. Though i am not well verse with hindi poetry but written some pieces do check it 🙂
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Great work ✍👌
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thaank you very much 🙂
I am glad you liked it. 🙂
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अक्सर इस दिल की लापरवाही ने हमें उऩ से दूर कर दिया
तो अक्सर इस दिल की बे इंतिहा चाहत ने हमें अनसे मिला दिया
Sumit Sumit Sumit!!!!! I have nothing to say. You have stolen all words of appreciation from my side. But still I’d love to say.. You are a well-skilled and intense writer. You excel at English, Urdu , hindi writing. Your writings are eclectic. ✌👌👌👍💖
I’m in awe with your writings.
God bless you baby. ☺😊
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अक्सर चाहत की भूख ने उन्हें चाहत से दूर कर दिया
तो अक्सर प्यार के समंदर ने दोनों को एक दूसरे की ओर कर दिया
Hahah! Itni sari taarife, Oh my God! Itki koi jaroorat nahi hain shreyu :*
मेरी हिंदी में दिलचस्पी हमेशा से रही हैं, या फिर यह कहना सही होगा की मुझे उन साडी भाषाओ में लिखने का शौक हैं जो मेने आज तक सीख कर कमाई हैं 🙂
आने वाले वक़्त में (હું ગુજરાતી માં પણ લખવાનું વિચારું છુ, કારણ કે મારા મન માં કઈ છે જે હૂં લખવું ચાહું છુ) I’ll be writing in Gujarati too, don’t worry you will be explaining you everything. 🙂
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Sarass!!! 😄☺
I’m waiting! 😍
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Haha 🙂
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Nice post
मुख्तसर टुकड़ों में अक्सर मिला मुझे चेहरा परेशानियॉ बदल बदल कर
छोटी छोटी खुशियॉ उखाड़ फैंकी खरपतवार समझकर।
मुख्तसर short , brief
खरपतवार unwanted plants . सही मायनो मे वो कोइ भी फूल, झाड़ियॉ जो फसल के
अलावा होती है उसे किसान उखाड़ फेंकता है।
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Nice lines..
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Thank you Arti 🙂
Of course I want to thank you for all the hepl you provided in Hindi matras. And who would be better in our National language than you. ::)
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Hehehehe.. Sumit…😅
Don’t mention that here….
🙈🙈🙈..
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hhahah… Kyun na karu, meri dost ne meri madad ki hain to sabko batane kesa darr. 🙂
Bol to blog post me edit kar ke name daal du tera 😉
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Hehehehe..
Sumit..a frnd in need is a frnd indeed..
Mene to bs apna farz nibhaya…pglu.
That was not a big deal…😅
Don’t edit… Wese hi rhne de…
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😘😘😘
You’re too sweet. Tuje pata hain :))
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Hehehehe.. That I know .😅
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Aksar tukdo me kharpatwar samaj kar fenka gaya muje,
Aksar aansoon bhari aankho me lapeta gaya muje
Bahut shukriya Rakesh Saheeb aapke iss khoobsurat se nazm ke liye 🙂
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I initiated my poetry with this word
Kharpatwar and titled as kharpatwar
Shortly I m going to print this
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That’s really great Rakesh Sahab.
Please let us know, we would love to read from you. 😃
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Very nice Sumit..👌👌👌
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You were the first person to whom I sent after writing this piece of wrting. 🙂
Thank you Arti.
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Awww..welcome Sumit..👌😘😘
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अक्सर बयाँ नहीं होते मेरे खयालात मेरे अलफ़ाज से,
ताे अक्सर मेरे अलफ़ाज मेरे खयालाताें मे ही दफन हाे जाते हैं।
Appreciation is already sended 😂😊
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अक्सर मोहब्बत बयां करना मेरी जबान को कभी आया नहीं
तो अक्सर मेरी खामोशियो को समझना उन्हें कभी आया नहीं
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अक्सर उनसे गुफ्तगू यू ही रुक जाती है मेरी,
तो अक्सर यू ही रातें बित जाती है उनसे गुफ्तगू करते हुए।
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awesome…
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Thank you Riya 🙂
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Wow! I always appreciate Hindi poems, and this really is a wonderful creation. Beautiful thoughts, beautiful rhymes and beautifully penned. I love this Sir. ☺☺👍
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Hi Chandu,
Thank you for your appreciation 🙂
If this is the case, then I will keep penning down my Hindi thoughts like this 🙂
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Definitely. ☺👍
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Lovely! 🙂
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Thank you Niyati. 😀😊
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वाह क्या बात है सुमित जी बहुत खूब
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Bahut Shukriya Sagar. 🙂
I’m trying to be good at Hindi and Urdu as good as you. ☺
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Aapka Swagat Hai Sumitji. Believe in Hard Work.
Ek Din Aap Bahut Behtar Ho Jayeinge.
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Bas wahi koshish hain. 😃
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Ishwar Aapki Koshishon Par Hardam Yunhi Meharban Hota Rahega Smit Ji.
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Great work Sir
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Thank you Garima for reading it. 😃
I’m glad you liked it. 😃
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Aksar aapki Kavita ne sochne par majboor Kiya
Aur Aksar aapki soch Kavita ban kar aa gayi….
Simply wonderful Sumit😊
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Simply awesome Sumith. Loved every bit of your poem. 👍 👍 👌👌👌👍👍👍
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Thank you very much for reading it Kamal. 🙂
I think I need to try my hand often at Hindi-Urdu poems. 😁
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For sure Sumit. Do whatever pleases you. Take care.
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Mashallah! Your Hindi poetry is as good as the English ones….More of these please 🙂
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How do you write that?
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✌😘
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Thaank you Azhar!
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💐
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Well done Mr. Official!!
Where are you these days… No reply!?
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Thank you Fairy 😀
I am here only. TU kidhar thi haan itne dino se 😉
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Arre I am here only, posting after every week😺 Mr. Official!!
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Hahahahahahha! accha sorry bas
haa wahi tu yaha hain me busy tha
Kaha tha me haan? Itte din baad aaya tu aa nahi sakti thi bulane haan 😀
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I called you sooo many times, sent you links of my recordings but you…
😢😢😁😁
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Amazing ☺
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