Her Aglow Eyes, Like a Neophyte Child

My favourite kind of a world revolves

Close to you with a halo behind you.

As if howling colors circularised around you,

My poetries for you became sanctified.

And your aglow eyes seems to be the

Eyes of a neophyte child.


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Sumit (23) passionately follows his dreams by writing his heart out for more than 3 years now, and have been into many creative fields including- VJ, singer, who’s appeared on National TV, done radio shows, conducted Literature events, written articles for newspapers and magazines. Professionally he’s delivering his services to one of the leading companies in Mumbai being an Asst. Manager. You’ll find many emotions through his words which will dagger your heart and you’ll relate it with yourself. Writing about untouched emotions human feels, poetry, life journey, sex, erotica, and BDSM is what attracts him the most. Welcome to SumitOfficial’s Blog. 😊

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106 thoughts on “Her Aglow Eyes, Like a Neophyte Child”

      1. I’ve just begun to touch back with what I love and it’s so unnerving. One day I can have all these thoughts to put down and then; when I start- I go blank 😏 How do you do it?

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      2. Hahaha.. you’re so sweet Jenn.
        I’ve read your previous write-ups. They are fantastic. 😍
        Like they are full of energy and positivity.

        How do I do? I fall in for the imagination and words. 😅😅😊

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      1. Wah!!! hmm i knew indore is in Madhya Pradesh hahaha… Yups i live in Vadodara.. Now i hope you know its in gujrat actually i was born in lucknow stayed in Delhi living in Vadodara currently nd i speak too much so …mm…sorry ..gn neend nj aari par sona padega… Gn sd tc!!!

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  1. I don’t believe I have commented on how lovely this piece is. Unlike the last one, I reblogged it for my immediate desire to speak to female writers. As a gay man, I do not have the proper pull from my own words that can help readers that need a female tug on their heart strings. When I saw this, I knew that any lesbian writers that might glance at my site would feel more comfortable immediately. It is because your words, written to seduce a woman, could be written by anyone that could describe the feeling of love for a woman. I love my mother. I have many friends and cousins that I love like sisters, but I can’t draw a woman in with my words. You can.

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