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Her Aglow Eyes, Like a Neophyte Child


My favourite kind of a world revolves

Close to you with a halo behind you.

As if howling colors circularised around you,

My poetries for you became sanctified.

And your aglow eyes seems to be the

Eyes of a neophyte child.


-SumitOfficial  


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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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106 thoughts on “Her Aglow Eyes, Like a Neophyte Child”

      1. I’ve just begun to touch back with what I love and it’s so unnerving. One day I can have all these thoughts to put down and then; when I start- I go blank 😏 How do you do it?

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      2. Hahaha.. you’re so sweet Jenn.
        I’ve read your previous write-ups. They are fantastic. 😍
        Like they are full of energy and positivity.

        How do I do? I fall in for the imagination and words. 😅😅😊

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      23. Wah!!! hmm i knew indore is in Madhya Pradesh hahaha… Yups i live in Vadodara.. Now i hope you know its in gujrat actually i was born in lucknow stayed in Delhi living in Vadodara currently nd i speak too much so …mm…sorry ..gn neend nj aari par sona padega… Gn sd tc!!!

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  21. I don’t believe I have commented on how lovely this piece is. Unlike the last one, I reblogged it for my immediate desire to speak to female writers. As a gay man, I do not have the proper pull from my own words that can help readers that need a female tug on their heart strings. When I saw this, I knew that any lesbian writers that might glance at my site would feel more comfortable immediately. It is because your words, written to seduce a woman, could be written by anyone that could describe the feeling of love for a woman. I love my mother. I have many friends and cousins that I love like sisters, but I can’t draw a woman in with my words. You can.

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