Maybe I don’t write poetries on you
May be I write about broken pieces of myself hoping
someday it’ll meet you in your way
Maybe I’ve been waiting for something
Maybe love
Maybe death
Maybe I don’t know the difference
between the two
Maybe I do
Maybe I’m searching for someone
Maybe it’s You.
-SumitOfficial
Okay, so this is one of my most favourite little poetry till now. It is simple, it is sober but it describes all, what one needs to tell. It’s a story of a lost soul who wants something in his life. And he describes how he feels and ended up on You. 🙂
Also, it was published in a newspaper some time ago when I had recited this poetry in one of our events on Heart day. ☺
Copyright © 2015-2017 by SumitOfficial
All rights reserved.
Wohoooo. ❤❤❤
Tujhe pata hai mujhe kitta pasand hai ye. 😍
Flawless. 😉
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Hahah.. muje approval dene wali hee meri Eva hain. 😘❤💃
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Nice…:-)
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Thank you Kajal. 😃
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I am laughing 😁
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Why are you laughing?😉
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“May be its you”
Superb !
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Maybe it’s your lovely comment. :))
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:))
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Beautiful it is ☺nice work
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Thank you so much Rekha for stopping by:)))
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yeah.. it’s me sumit..he he lol
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Akhila. 💃
You’re so sweet. 🙂
Thank you. 💃😊
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ha ha ha…
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😉😉😉😉
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Superb Sumit Bhai!@
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Thank you so much Dhiraj Bhai😃😃
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From the first post of your’s that I had read and this, you’ve grown up a lot in your writing Bhai. Congrats
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I just talked to Mana Didi about our incidence. How I had said those words and felt bed later. 🙂
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Indeed a wonderful mentor she is 🙂
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😃😃😃
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Good 1 buddy!!
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Thank you Tanay. 😃
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Enjoy 🙂
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😃😃😃
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Not maybe,definitely its me.😁😆 You weave magic with your words Sumit,maybe you are a magician,and maybe i am under your cryptic spell.😉
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Hahaha… yeah! Now I think my D…. spoke. 😍😍😘
Thank you so much pratishtha for always appreciating the efforts. 🙂
I wish you come back soon after finishing your work. :))
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Your D spoke.😉
Arrey notifications mein gayab hi ho gayi apki email id 😅 firse bhejna 😅
Coming back noww! 😘😊
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Huh😞
Kya yaar!
Accha le ab. 😉
SumitOfficial3@gmail.com
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Krdi mail.😖
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Yay😃
Mil gaya. 😉
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😊*
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😃
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Beautiful 😍😍
I love this sumit!
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Thank you Aanchal. .😘😍
I’m glad you liked it. :)))
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Good one! 🙂
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Thank you Ishita. 😘😊
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Very lovely poem Sumit poetry has a suave way of touching people, and your does just that. You have Nice beard by the way.
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It’s you beautiful people and lovely readers Morgan who think what little I write good. 🙂
I’m happy that you liked it Morgan. 😃
And thank you for noticing my beard. 😉 I’m in love with it. 😃
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You are welcome 🙂 it’s the soul of the person writing it that makes it feel good and makes people want to read it and love it 🙂
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Then I must thank God for showering the love on this soul. 🙂
Your comment made my day Morgan. 😊😊
Thank you so much once again. 😃😃
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🙂 You are welcome Sumit Kisses
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I loved this Sumit! Your surprise ending gave this poem a really nice touch…Awesome!
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I’m glad that you could sense that surprising ending 😉
Thank you Tanya. 😃😃😃
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I loved it. 🙂
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Thank you so much Pratik for your kind words. 🙂
I appreciate that. 😃
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Maybe you do write poetries ..
Maybe they are great..
Maybe they liked by me and maybe just Maybe you were quite good up there 😂😂😂
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Hahahaha…. MAYBE this is one of the best comments I’ve received on this post.
Maybe my posts are good
Maybe readers are great
Maybe you’re the best. 😂😂😂😂😂
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For sure the posts are good ..they are always better and new and so profound ..with depth lots and lots of it …😊
Thank you last wale compliment ke liye .😄
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Hahah.. wo exclusively tere liye Tha. 💃😘😋
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Okay..🙈😄
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😍😅😅
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yehe i love this one ❤ . May be someday u will find "you" in your writngs. Somewhere, in between the way
May be u find her in her writings,
May be u will want to spend your entire time with her ,
May be the feeling will be out of world,
May be u will once more believe in love.
And, once more u will be alive. ❤ 🙂
I am always in love with your writings ❤ :* ^_^
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Thank you Rati. 😃
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Welcome sumit 🙂
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Absolutely…
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😃😃😃
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Wow, this is really lovely! Powerful, in a kind of sweet subtle way.
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Oh well, it’s my pleasure that you liked it. :))
Yes, this feeling is kind if confusing and powerful too. 🙂
May I know your name please😃
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You can call me Vic. 😊
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Ok Vic. 😃
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This one!!! 😍😍
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Thank you Kiran. 😍😍😊
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May be It’s only her you are writing poetries for.
May be it’s her who’ll come and fix the broken pieces of your heart.
May be it’s her who’ll never let you die and will meet your soul.
May be it’s her who’ll be the music of your life.
May be she also does not know the difference between the two,
She wants or not.
May be she is in on the way.
May be it is the destiny who will make you two meet. ❤
Great poetry, SumitOfficial. Your poetries are intense. 🙂 ❤
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Oh my my! This is a beautiful piece Shreya. Thank you so much. 😊
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It’s my pleasure. ☺❤
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Maybe it’s both of you😀😀
😯😯😯 I will not say much😜
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No. It’s not us Fairy. You can say anything😋😝
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Heheheh! Maybe it’s both of you who can be the best collaborators on WordPress! Rest is your choice😉
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Maybe or maybe not😉
You haven’t seen the other ones Fairy. 😉
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I have seen some, it’s kind of collaboration fever going on on WordPress!
But till now, you guys own it✌✌
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Well, thank you so much for appreciating it Fairy. 😃
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Pleasure is all mine Mr. Official😺
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😉
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You already said too much, Fairy 😱😂 But No, It’s not us. ☺
And thanks for appreciating our collaborations so much. You are so sweet. ☺❤
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Too much! I guess it’s fine between friends😏😜😜
Your welcome! But on a serious note, keep on doing this nice thing.
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Hmm! Fairy. Would like to talk to you personally. Love ya. ☺❤
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Yes, we can. But don’t scold me😜😜😟
Facebook? My link is there!
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Why would I scold you. 😱
Ok I’ll look for you on fb. I’m not much active on fb but would contact you asap. 🙂
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Just kidding! I am too not much active there😝 so, tell me some other option! WordPress should have a chat option too!
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Heheheh!! 😜😜😜 shall we do on Hike??
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Not there.
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Ohho!! Then download it😉😉
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Pre installed. Searched for you on fb. There are already many pixies. 😂😂
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Go to the bottom of my blog and click on Facebook! You will reach there directly!😄😄
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Mujhe bat hi nhi krni ab 😂😂
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Hehe send me your Facebook name! I’ll add you!
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@Shreya phone number public kardiya.
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Please check Sup.
I’ve deleted the comment. 😅😁
Please do check if it’s still showing our not.
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My profile name is Pixie Sparkle on FB
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Beautiful poem
Hey !
Btw. Thanks for stopping by my blog and liking my post of
Weekly Writing Miracle Challenge’ Week – 4 :
https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/05/miraclechallenge-week-4-dated-5th-july-2016/
If the prompts inspire you to write, you are welcome to join us anytime ☺
Happy Blogging !
From,
Miracle ☺
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Thank you so much. 🙂
I’ll have a look. 😃
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Oh ! That’s great. You are welcome 😇
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Beautifully written… < 3..
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Thank you so much Aki. 😃😃
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Welcome..! 🙂
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Where my Eid’s party?😉
Where is my Saiywaiyya Aki😍
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Hahah! In the morning!!! 😀
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I’m waiting for the morning then. 😉
Meri Eidi aane wali hain Aki ke ghar se. 😊💃
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Hahahah 😀 ….
Sure …:D
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टुकड़ों में मिली पिकनिक स्पाट सी ज़िन्दगी।
I like it ha ha
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Thank you for liking it. 🙂
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कुछ लम्हे पूछता हैं तेरे पास्ट का फसाना।
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Bilkul Rakesh Sahab. 😃
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Thanx a lot
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Beautifully penned ☺☺
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Thank you Gayatri for liking it. 🙂 😃
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You’re welcome ☺☺ you write beautifully so there’s no way to dislike it. ☺
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Awwww… tu kitti cute hain Gayatri😇😊😘😍
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Hahahahaha 😂😂😂
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Nicely put together. #thumbsup
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Yes. Indeed!
Thank you so much for your lovely comment. 🙂
May I know the name please😃
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It’s Nishika
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😃
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I especially liked the Art…did you do it?
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No Alok. This art isn’t by me.
Although, I’m learning this Art called- Pen and Ink. 😃
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Happy for you 🙂
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Thank you Alok. 😃
I read your post on Datsun car. I loved it. 😃😃
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Thank you 🙂
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That which you are attracted to is attracted to you. Maybe it’s…
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Wow.. this is beautiful. 🙂
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This was beautiful
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Like your comment Ritu. 😉
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Maybe love will come to me and it will have your face 🙂
Just another line!!! :))
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Awww.. This is perfect end Mopana😉
Thank you so much. 😃
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I am glad you liked it, Sumit 🙂
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Beautiful words flowing through a beautiful soul!
Loved it ♡ Well done Sumit 👍 :))
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Awww .. what can be best than getting a comment from a pure heart :))) thank you Antra. 😘😊
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You deserve every bit of it, Infact even more 👍
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Thank a ton yaar. 😃😃😃
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:))
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you Manu. 😍😅😊
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Your welcome 😉💕
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😃😃
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Sweet and romantic. 🙂
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Like you Rumnager. 😉
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One of the best I liked….simply good
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Thank you so much Sakshi. 😉
I love your writing too. 😃
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Ur welcome
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😃😃😃
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Have a look at my new blog….I hope you would like it….tell me how’s it
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Sure 😃
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Tell me how’s it??
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Yaar I’m not able to open the link.
Please yaha send karna link. 😞
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I’m also not Able to open it I’m not getting what had happened
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Arre yaar😞
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I’ll send it soon
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Please do. 😃
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http://wp.me/p7H2Rj-4 this is it I got it
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Ok thanks. 😃
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How was it….did u liked it??
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It was a great one Sakshi. 😃
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Thanks
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Mr. Official it’s may be… 😂😂😂😂
Nice one!!
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Fairy😛😛😛
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😁😁Mr. Official😛
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😒😒😒😒😒
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Have you heard???
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Haa. Bahut maza aayaa. 😉😍
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Keep this “Maze Lelo Mode” on!!! 🎤🎤🎹🎹🎹🎹🎧🎧🎧
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😂😂😂😂😂
Tu bahut funny hain Fairy. 😂😂😂😂
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Heheheh!!!😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂
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Your Gravtar is looking great 😉
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Thank you Mr. Official😎😎
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😃
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I learn hope is only possibility in life but it gone we never get any thing in life.
🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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That’s true Harshit. 😃
Thanks for stopping by!😃
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I need some help can u support
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Yes. Please go ahead.
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Can U tell me how we can decided which is right or wrong in view of nature
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Like what kind of nature you’re asking for?
Who’s nature? A normal human nature or you’re talking about someone particularly?
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The real nature
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Maybe I can write a poetry on you. Maybe I’m actually writing knowing you just inspired me to try writing one in hope that somewhere SumitOfficial will read this.
Maybe I’m waiting for this..
Maybe love? Yes.
Maybe friendship? Yes.
Maybe death?
NO!
Maybe It’s you..
..LIFE? Yes. More Life. So I can meet SumitOfficial one day.
Maybe.
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Pricilla😍😍😍
Maybe you are knowing writing a poem.
Maybe you already knew
Maybe I’m overwhelming right now
Maybe I definitely do
Maybe I’m loving your poetry
Maybe I’m being crazy for this
Maybe we’ll meet someday
Maybe we’ll definitely meet.
Maybe I’m in love with Pricilla’s words
Maybe I love Pricilla too. 😉
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Haha lol loved this.
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Me too Pricilla. 😃
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A curious mix of optimism and pessimism. May be or May not be. Good read.
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Haha… thank you so much for reading. 🙂
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Nice One Sumit ji.
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Shukriya Dilkash sahab. 😃😃😃
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Swagat hai Aapka.
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😃😃
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Thats a great poem friend!
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Thank you so much Mr Movie Guy. 😃
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I liked it 🙂
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One of your best. Lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you Arohii. 😘
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welcome 🙂
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This is soooo beauuutifullll……….!!!!!!!!!!! 😎
I can actually relate to it! 🙂
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Awwww…. you liked it Ananya?
It is my pleasure. :)))
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Yes, I did! 😀
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😃😃
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Thanks for posting this…!
I’m reblogging this one..! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Reblogged this on AnanyaWorld and commented:
This is a lovely poem..!
A must-read, guys! 😀 😉 🙂
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😘😘😘😍
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Hahaha!
Thanks a MILLION for posting that one, though…! 😎
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:)))(
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It’s a sweet and adorable verse!
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Very nice,wonderful post!
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The real nature
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So what we have decided that it is wrong or right
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Well, it completely depends on the perspective of person. There’s nothing right and there’s nothing wrong in the world, all it depends is up to us. How we feel about that thing. 🙂
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But I think if decision is not follow the rule of natura then nature not allow this decision to sustain in nature
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Yes. That’s also true.
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Can u help me in making website creative
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Well, I belong to management so can’t tell you about websites and all. 🙂
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OK then fine
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Can u accept me as a friend
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Have you share your any social media account for contacts you as friendly
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Yes. You can find that in my earlier posts.
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No I mean can allow me to contact you through WhatsApp, Facebook
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Yes. Facebook – SumitOfficial.
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I am not able to find
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hey, how have u been? i hope all is well. im here to let you know that i nominated you here: https://wordsofgabby.com/2016/07/22/liebster-award-full-circle/
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Thank you. 🙂
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Thank u
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For reading because it about the one of most unsolved problem in world history …
Please you have to support Zee news awake your friend and follower that Kashmir is a part of India and we have to support
Please share for making awareness
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May be I am late
May be it is OK and
May be it will do
To just give u a Compliment or two😊
Nice one Sumit
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Maybe it is a bit late
Maybe it is never too late
Maybe I’m smiling broadly
Maybe I’m elated too
Maybe I’m lucky to see Medha here
Maybe I definitely do 🙈😄
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😊😊
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This is lovely!😘
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Like you, Luxandrea😅🙈
Thank you so much. 😘
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Very well written. Last two lines are awesome 👍👍
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It just came up with the flow Hargun. 😃
Btw, I always wait for your lens posts. 😉
And yes, I still remember that colourful clips😍😍
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👍
And thanks a lot for being a supportive reader. About Those clips, they are still preserved neatly in that picture.
And yes , they say ‘hi’ and appreciate your recalling them. 😝
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Hahahaha…. please convey my Hi too to them. 😍😍
They’re lovely Hargun. 🙈🙈😘
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“Maybe I’m searching for someone
Maybe it’s You.”
Well written ❤
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Thank you very much Vaish.😃
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Very nice. 🙂
waiting to read some more.
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Thank you so much Madhavi. 😃
I took a break of a month for some reasons. And in between I’ve written a lot of poetries. I hope you’re gonna like them. 🙂
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wonderful.
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😃😃😃
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One day I meet my queen. I knew, because my heart told me it was her. This reminds me of this poem.
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Lovely post and wonderful art. Hope the sadness lifts.
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Yes Mark. The art form is made up of pen and ink. Thank you for liking it. 😃
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You seem very talented…and very popular. I like your work!
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Thank you so much for your kind words Mark. But I’d say, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. ☺😊
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Ah ha, my good eye then!
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😉😉
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#maybe its outstanding !! Loved it @sumit 😊
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Haha.. less than yours though😉
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Naah urz is Evn better indeed 😊
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Oh thank you for your kind words Tanya. I’m elated to get that from you. 😃
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Beautiful – 😊
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Thank you Jenn. It’s one of my favourite poems. 😘😘😘😘
I should say most favourite. 😅😅
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In love with your write ups 😊
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Awww… Thank you so much Deepika. 😍😘😊
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Simple feelings….great poetry..big heart.paola.
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Thank you Paola.
I’m glad you love it. ☺☺
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Absolutely….;-)
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😊😊
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You have a wonderful gift…thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thanks so much for your lovely words ❤☺
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My pleasure 🙂
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😌☺
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So beautiful!
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As usual a big thank you Kaw.❤☺
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You’re welcome!
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❤☺
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M soooo happy for you now bancho! 😊😊😊😊😊😄😄😄
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Hahaha ☺😘
Thank you Nisha 😊😍👦
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😎😎😘😘😘
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Mine would be 250th comment? That’s really a wonderful poem Sumit..
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks so much. 😊😊
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Beautiful poem 🌺🌺
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Thank you Anju 😊❤
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💛💛
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This is to inform you that I have shifted my blog to shiningtheory.com and you could have received a subscription mail which is not a scam.
Please follow me again, and I regret the inconvenience caused to you.
From My Theory.
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Oh Sumit so beautiful and flawless and loved the apt pic too. Great 👍 penned poem.
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Oh thank you Kamal for your presence. At times, I actually expect your comments and views on the blog. Thanks bro for your kind words. 😊😊😊
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Welcome as always Sumit and you r a great poet. Simply adore your work bro. Have a great day.👍👍👍👍
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I appreciate that you found them worthy. I wish you a great day too. ☺
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🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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WoW!!! Good One SUmit. Loved it 🙂
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Thanks so much Tanu 😘😊
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very nice post brother
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Thanks Sami.😀
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dil ko choo lenay ali poetry hay boht berhya
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Bahut Shukriya, Tanveer 😊
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my pleasure
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😊
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Ohhh god this is so so so so damn sweet. Wow yaar. How do you do tha it’s like magic
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Incomplete comment sorry for that.. And yes if someone would ever tell me that it I would definitely faint or maybe if I know that person i would pull his cheek.. Haha hopefully *he* haha.. Wonderful man!!💖
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Hahahahahhahaa… You’re too too too cute Shivee. I’m so happy to have met you here. Btw there’s one more post waiting for you to read. 😍😝😘😊
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Ohh wow!!!😁😁😊😊😊surely will checkout n comment soon.!!!😊👍.. Nice to meet u too!!! Well sab kehte hai i m cute n sweet😎😇but i m always like main itni v kuch khaas ni😎😇haha..
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😂😂😂😂
Bhav khane Ki aadat hain na😝😝😛
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Haha nice guess again… Haha my dad says the samething😉
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😂😂😂
Acchi baat hain..Khaya kar. We’re here to climb you on chane Ka jhad.😂😍😘
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Hahaha wah wah!!✌✌👏👏u r great so what do i call you?
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Sumit aur kya. 😁😊
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Okay sumit aapki age hope you are elder to me as i m expecting u don’t go to school
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Though I learn every day. So it’s one in the same thing. 😁
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Age poochi thi bhai India wants to know😁dont change the topic
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Hahaha… I’m 21. 😌
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Ohh 7 years elder to me
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Yayyy💗
You’re too intelligent at this age means. I really appreciate that Shivee.
Keep growing like this. 😘😘
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😇😇sab sangat ka asar hai😎👍😉
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Hahaha! Kiski Sangat 😀
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Aap jaise logo ki😁😁😁😁
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Haha! Pagal! 😀
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Haaha haan main toh pagal hu dekhko bhai aape kahin sangat ka asar na hojaaye… I mad like Albert Einstein and Christopher Columbus and all the great people… Hahaha
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,😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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😁😇school khatam? haha i mean abhi main aayi schools se…
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Ha Mene wahi socha.. abhi 😅😅😅
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See i can read minds😁😇😇😇😂
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Ha actually 😃😅😂
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😉Kabhi disagree v kardiya karo… Ni ni mat karna main Arnab Goswami seh inspired hojaati hu kabhi kabhi… Haaha
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Khud hee sawal puchti, khud hee jawab de deti ye ladki 😂😂😂😍
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Hahahahahaha… Maine kaha tha na pagal hu… Haha waise q ni karte aap disagree?😉
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Tu mauka to de. 😇
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You are so adorable😍hahaha
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😋🎠😀💕
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😁😁😁😁Aap kyu roz seekhte ho waise do u go to college or school? Well don’t tell me life is a school…
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Fir se question me answer free 😂😂
Hahah.. no no I don’t go to neither school not college regularly. It’s an MBA and exams are going too. So yeah! 😊
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Ohhh wow maine hei answer kardiya by default smart hu main…. Wow acha hai i wish aapko blogger of the year jaise student of the year ki v trophy miley😇👍 and best of luck…
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Awww.. you’re being too kind Shivee. 😘😊
You loved it? ☺
It’s my favourite too. 🙈🙈🙈
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There’s no such thing as ‘too kind’ none of us ever can be ‘too kind i think’.😇 N yes very lovely piece. Actually comments are my immediate reaction on something i read .hope i m not being too buttery and if yes I m really younger to you so pls maaf kardo😊😇
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Why can’t we be too kind? It’s our mindset that we want to doubt on things. If we accept it the way it is. It would definitely be too kind for us. 😊
No, you’re definitely not. Keep on doing that. That is what makes you who you are. Shivee. 😅☺
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😁😁😁seems like you love my name. Wow. Shivee❤❤❤. Yups v can’t be too kind because kindness has no limits I guess…. There’s always someone more kinder but that’s not the only reason… I think being good in todays world simply means not being bad n being too good or too kind means being kind enough… Well i could write a long essay on this lemme stop here warna aapke patience ka test hojaayega
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Hahahaha… Esa kar na.. just write one blog on it. 🤓😝
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Hahahaha wow u are as witty as me…*High five*😁✋
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Haha.. no.
You’re even more. 💗😘
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Wow… Ab main itni v kuvh khaas ni… Haha ty ty😁😁😁
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Papa ki baad yaad aagayi muje. 😂😂😁
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😇😇😇😇😁😁😁You have such a gud memory👍👍😁😁i m impressed 😇😀😇haha….
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Hahahaha!
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😂😂😂😂
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Beautiful… 😘😘😘
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Thanks so much. 😍😘😊
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The poem was simply superb and having it recited and getting published deserves triple congratulations 👏👍
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Yayyyy…. Thank you thank you thank you Medha😘😊
I’m happy that you loved it. And your comments mean a lot to me. All the them. 🤗😊
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Sumit, the pleasure is mine.Keep writing for all of us to appreciate more and more😊
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Yayayay! Definitely Medha! I am going to make an announcement on my next post please read that. Your love and motivation worked for me. 😉
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😊
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It is beautiful💝
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Thank you so much. ☺
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Pleasure is all mine.Thank you for sharing 💝Love to you💖
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🙂 :*
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This is great. Really love it
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Hey, thanks so much. ☺☺
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nice..
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Thank you Anupam😊
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It’s Beautiful Sumit. 🙂
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Thank you so much Lavanya. 🙂
How are you doing? 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine😊.
Well, I’m pretty good. What about you?
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I’m doing great too, Lavanya. 😊
Thank you. 😀
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Beautiful… maybe more… 🙂
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Thank you. 😘😍
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Maybe I don’t know the difference
between the two
Maybe I do
Maybe I’m searching for someone
Maybe it’s You.
Maybe😅
I am awestruck trust me.
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Acchaa? 🤷🏾♂
Hain na.
Would you believe me, I didn’t know it rhymes so beautiful until I had published back then and someone told me. Then I checked it out and I was like.. Woah.
If you see, I never write to rhyme anything. It’s always a freestyle.
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Yaa you never bound yourself to rhymes…
But this was good enough.
You should try at times.
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Haha! Yes, I try out of peer pressure. You know, when I read great poets like you. 😏
Such a pro, and look at me. I can’t even think of any after 2 lines.
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But you’re creating wonders with freestyle nah
You want everything? Let me Excel somewhere
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Huh! You be everyone’s favorite teacher.
Why can’t you become my favorite? 😏
Should you not teach me ki, “Chalo aao Sumit, I’ll teach you to rhyme. ❤”
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Awwwwwww Sumit🤗
I’ll teach you 😂
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Yay! Look at me world, who’s beside me now.
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