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She enraptured him alive; She’s a killer.

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Her luminous eyes are scudding atoms
Her exquisite lips are made up of infernos

Her smooch is liquefied volcano

Her touch always gives him a hard on
Her presence is enough to take out life and limb

She’s a killer.


-SumitOfficial


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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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146 thoughts on “She enraptured him alive; She’s a killer.”

      1. I know the feeling but I just did it anyways because it was a piece of my work I wanted to show. You did excellent

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  10. The words you used are not only beautiful but also arousing. This piece of literature is called ‘smut.’

    When it comes to writing, you should definitely try new genres and in this process, you may have few ups and downs but no problem. You are an amazing writer and you improve by leaps and bounds.

    I would love to do a collaboration with you in this genre. Please don’t be unsure about anything. We need someone to bring forward such piece of work.

    When so much raunch and inelegance making rounds on this planet, this piece of writing ooses sensuality and grace, which I truly appreciate.

    Everyone should understand the difference between coarseness and Eros, this perfectly does that.

    Thank you Sumit for taking a leap of faith and going ahead with this. For your second thoughts, I am always there, you know. 😉

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    1. Awww Antara… this is one of the supporting words someone has ever told me.

      There’s this problem with us here in India, that we are taught about love and sex in theory subjects only in our schools and colleges. We’re surrounded with orthodox people. They are always afraid of the change.

      Anyways, we shouldn’t give it a damn. Readers will read if they want to, and I’m glad that my WordPress family is loving it. 🙂

      Thank you for the support Antara. We’ll do something together. 😃

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      1. India is the land of Kamasutra and yet topics like sex and sensuality are taboo.
        And about us, Sumit, I want to tell you a line of a very old song.
        “Tu hai kaun, tera naam hai kya, Sita bhi toh hui badnam yeha.”
        So, let’s keep up the good work and make our readers love us more. 😉

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  11. Sensuous, touching and turning on! The fire of passionate and intense love. It is something I can relate to.
    Top work buddy. You have portrayed the intensity and depth that made me nostalgic. The last line – She’s a killer” is perfect.
    Writing exists in all forms. This is one such form. Do not hesitate about continuing at all. I know we barely know each other but you will have a supporter in me. Keep writing. Onward and upward 🙂
    YNWA

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    1. Hi Saketh! You know what, I was not at all sure of sharing such piece of work here. In our literature, it has given a particular category which is known as ‘Smut’. I shared it here. Thankfully, readers and supporters like you supported me but the same thing I posted on Facebook, one of my friends got offended with that word smooch.

      Well, I really don’t know what did she not like about it.

      Anyways, thanks for the support 🙂

      I’ll keep posting😃😃

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      1. If everybody thinks I will not write on this topic, then who will? Well, somebody has to start right? As far as a few people not liking it, do not worry about them. The topic is still a sensitive one because it is initimate. So, sometimes it might rub people in the wrong way. So, do not get disheartened and keep writing 🙂

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  12. Hi! Thanks for stopping by my blog and liking my post on Melatonin and the importance of sleep. I am enjoying my visit to your little corner of the blogosphere.

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      2. Arre yaar😞
        Kitne sare names hote hain Ishita, Ishika, Ritika, Ratika, Pratishtha, Pratyusha. Sab mere hee friends hain aur sab ke names me gadbad karta hoon me all the time. 😂😂😂

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  31. Once again as I read your piece I was taken a back. Heart racing ; anticipating the next word… So intense; yet accurate. You have a special eye to recognize the multiple dynamic levels of exchanges between two people…I hope to one day write in such a riveting, mesmerizing way.💞💕💞

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  32. What a beautiful concept. To realize that moments in our observations are in fact snapshots that we catalog somewhere deep within this…I always sit to the side and observe. I’ve never minded letting someone else take the spotlight. I guess that’s why those closest to me view me as being the rational point of contact. When they need someone to take an unbiased approach to a situation. Such a shame that most only come to me for help but never make an effort to truly know me.

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      1. From time to time, can I email you some of my works? As a way to get a fresh perspective …It’s for a novel I’m writing…I promise not to bombard you with a lot of emails or spam!

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      3. Thanks; I have a great flow right now; I’m sure at some point I’ll get stuck again…🤔 and of course I want complete honesty! No holding back; if not I’ll never perfect my craft… Promise? 🙂

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  34. Deste modo, seu sonho de ter um pênis grande poderá ser atingido, sem a premência de recorrer a caras cirurgias invasivas que podem, até, caso não tenham uma boa cicatrização, diminuir Pênis em vez de aumenta-lo ou comprometer seu ângulo de ereção, devido a secção do Ligamento Suspensor do Pênis.

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