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Tonight!

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How true is that love where there is less of lust in the eyes of a person, but all he wants to see is a smile which spreads through her tender lips.

How can he see the husky trembling voice of hers, who always wanted to see her happy?

This poem is an amalgamation of all the emotions of love, care, affection, and lust.

I’ll not be talking about the
world with you tonight,
Instead, I’ll make you
feel you’re my entire world.

I’ll not be talking about
the big stuff of the world,
Instead, I’ll be taking care of small
happiness of yours to make you smile.

I’ll not be smooching you tonight,
Instead, I’ll put a gentle
kiss on your forehead tonight.

I’ll not let you sleep on
your pillow tonight,
Instead, I’ll make a pillow
of my arm for you tonight.

I’ll not be having sex with you tonight,
Instead, I’ll wake up awake
all night with me

I’ll not just wish a good night tonight,
Instead, I’ll make you believe that
you mean the world to me tonight.

-SumitOfficial

 

Thank you so much for reading. 🙂

 

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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89 thoughts on “Tonight!”

  3. Such heart touching amalgamation of love, lust, care and emotions. I don’t think, it can be described any better through any words.
    And you did it in such simple words. Loved the post. ❤️😊😊😊😊😇

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  8. Sex, if done out of love for the other person, is, I feel, just an extension and expression of love. Nothing taboo or shame worthy in it. But that kind of love, alas, is on the verge of extinction. Too rare to come across that kinda love.

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  13. I love this poem💕 reminds me of those special nights of pillow talk…we listen to bachata reminisce on our story and just before the sun wakes; we head out for pancake’s… True companionship, speaking for myself, is it makes his love so irresistible☺💕💝

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      3. I sure did🤗 He wanted to know what I was talking about when I said, “How sweet .” ( he was passing by to make coffee)🤗🤗 he’s read some others – Don’t don’t be surprised.😉 You’re a beautiful writer and I always share great pieces of art.😏

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    1. That’s what I wanted to convey Lavanya. Here, even the sex is not considered because the love is so extreme that it forgets everything and all it wants is the affection.
      Thanks so much for you lovely comment​, Lavanya. 😘😊

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  27. Bonjour

    Cette nuit je me suis reposé dans mon lit

    Aucun bruit n’est venu me déranger

    j’ai fais un rêve

    Et une personne m’a dis de venir te saluer

    Alors un énorme BONJOUR Pour la semaine

    Profite bien de celle-ci

    Passe un agréable journée

    Bisous amicaux Bernard

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  28. A very delightful poem full of essence and character.
    Keep writing…….I’m right behind to follow your trail.
    Every stanza comes to life in its own expressiveness ! !
    Great work !!
    Keep it up!

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  30. if there is no sex there is no true love. sex is the essence of love. Yes, there are some exceptions are there. I am talking about in a broader sense and in a realistic and scientific manner. beautifully written.

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    1. I agree with you Apera. Sex is an essential part of life. A relationship between a two people can’t be completed without sex.

      Though, this poem defines the plan for one night where having her in his arms is even more lovable than having sex.

      Thanks for your great comment. 😊

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  35. How gentle is that.🙂

    I actually am reading you like an addiction Sumit…
    I’ll tell you I took my phone in the afternoon for some official work. I was uploading online content. And for some reason there was an error. I was getting so frustrated,I was trying and trying and I finally succeeded by 7 in the evening.
    I was uploading it on website and meanwhile as I told you the tab of your blog was open as well .
    So every now and then I started reading you and I am actually dwelling into it…

    And for so long I was thinking let me not rush with your content because I wanted to read it very smoothly. But it is not letting me keep my phone aside. I am still surfing you with almost dead battery
    Let me actually give my phone some rest now😅

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    1. Very gentle and caring. After all, sex is not one always wants. At times, we want more than that. Intimacy.

      Being an artist, I shouldn’t be sorry for spoiling your time. Because that is what I wanted. To make you dwell into the search of your own self with my words. And you did. I feel sorry for the work which could have been happened.
      But I’m happy that you phone got tired but you didn’t. ☺

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