We are overzealous
For each other,
As we osculate,
Our lips launched napalm
Our bodies started
Getting strafed together
And we became the
Parched Destroyer
to each other.
-SumitOfficial
Napalm means a jelly-like flammable gasoline which is used in incendiary bombs to destroy everything. It sticks to wherever it lands on and burns it for a long time. 🙂
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Wow.. wonderful 👌👌
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You’re writing some good on this genre these days…is it genre shift?
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No Sangbad. I’ve not shifted my genre to erotica. It’s just I keep on writing on things until I don’t feel contentment. 😊
I hope you’re enjoying the posts?
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Yes…actually am learning…enjoying coming later…soon am going to post one on this genre…
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Wow.. I’m waiting for that then. 😍😅
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So how is it?
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It’s great but the alignment did not let me read it completely. It’s very disturbing.
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so the alignment should be nominal…okay, will correct it tomorrow…can you check on it whenever you get time…
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Definitely. You make some correction then I’ll read it again. 😊
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okay..done…a thumbs up…
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The post name is Rhythm of Passion (or it is Lust)…will wait for your review in the comment box of the post
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Sure.
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Sounds destructive
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Yes, completely.
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Damn this is top notch. ❤️
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Hombre de pequenas palabras … pero palabras de poder 💋👌💕
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😘😘😘😘😍
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Woah Sumit, great work!
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Thank you Devanshu. 😊😅
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Sumit Bhai I am highly impressed with the vocabulary. Awesome work.
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Aapko maza aaraha hain na😍😍😍
Bas wahi chaiye. 😊
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I believe sabko hi majha aa raha hai Bhai, sahi jaa rahe ho 👍 😊😊😊
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Bas pyaar milta rahe Aap Sab logo ka.. 😇🤗
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Beautiful!! I loved it!
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Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Great post 🙂 🙂 This is beautiful x x
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Thanks so much. 😀
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Your most welcome 🙂 🙂 x x
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🙂
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🙂 🙂 x x
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Last me dono khatm hi na hojaye.. Thoda samhal k likho 😂😂😆
Anyway, it’s extremely beautiful piece of love and lust. 💖
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Jo aag hain, wo to chah ke bhi Nahi bhuj paegi😉
Yeh lust nahi aasan bas itna samaj lije,
Bas hath chalte Jana hain, aur hume likhte chale Jana hain😁😍😋😘
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Hath chlte jana h.. Hume likhte jana h😂💖😜😍
Trying to analyse your emotions. Lol
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😁😂😂😂😂😂🙈🙈🙈🙈
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Powerful stuff, Sumit. Tearing apart those we love is in our nature — unfortunately.
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Yes.. it’s extreme. 😉
Thanks so much Rumnager 😘😍😇
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Your vocabulary game is too strong. 😍
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Hajiraaaaaa😍😍😍😘
Thanks so much for the compliment. 😁😊
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Sumiiiiiit!
Haha, anytime! ❤🤗😊
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