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Coruscating Lights


We sit under the dark sky

where coruscating lights fall on us

Our breathes become warm-hearted

by singing trees and whistling of train

This is where the magic is created

Our heartbeats come to dance together 

Where saying “I Love You” holds the glory of an entire night sky… 

the dark sky.. 

where You and I forgather again. . .


-SumitOfficial 


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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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      1. Hahaha… You’re correct, some places are underestimated! My name is Advaita, and it is difficult to remember for many, so no worries bro! Just call me Addy or A, I’m cool with it! 😂👍👍

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      2. Oh yes yes.. I had a clue it starts with A…😆

        Thank you very much Advaita for your kind words. 😃

        Eva, always appreciate you and your work. It’s nice meeting you after a long time. 😃

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      3. Hahaha…. Yeah, it starts with an A 😂 And Eva is such a sweetheart, she always has nice things to say about everyone 👌💕

        I’ve been away only two weeks, guess that’s a long time on WordPress 😜👍

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  15. In my story initially I never said I love you
    You know why it’s old fashioned. I think one should change these lines. Isn’t is something you feel like you borrowed something from the system.
    Pyar bhi karte ho aur shabd dhundhte ho,.
    Abhivyakti ka ye kaisa falsafa hai,
    Main rahta hoon aur vo sab samajh leta hai,
    Vo udas hota hai to main samajh leta hoon vo kuch khafa khafa said hai.

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    1. Rakesh, I am cent percent agree with you here.

      I love you means nothing until and unless you don’t feel from inside. But I’d say there are zillion of ways to express our love to someone.

      Borrowed something from the system, iss par to bas itna kehna chahunga –

      “Itna aasan nahi shehar-e-mohabbat ka pata lagana,

      Khud bhatakte hain yaha raah batane wale”

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  16. प्यार भी करते हो और शब्द ढूंढते हो,
    अभिव्यक्ति का ये कैसा फलसफा है।
    मैं मौन रहता हूं और वो सब समझ लेता है,
    वो उदास होता है तो लगता है कुछ रफा-दफा सा है।

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  18. Alright Sumit now you’re just showing off how good are with words. LOL this is a very lovely poem. I like ie=t a lot nicely written well done 🙂

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      3. You’re welcome, keep showing your off talent. Poetry is a beautiful gift you carry. And I as well as many others love your poetry. Never stop writing I enjoy your work it is full of your genuine soul. 🙂

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      4. It’s early in the morning here Morgan, and I’m so delighted to having this beautiful conversation with you. 🙂

        As always, you made me inspired and I promise you I’ll keep writing and sharing what comes into my mind in order to make you all smile. 🙂

        Thank you Morgan. I really appreciate your words. ☺😘

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      5. You’re very welcome, I am only stating what is true. You truly are great with words. I wish you all the best with your writing and everything you do. Prosperity is yours, I believe in supporting people and encouraging them. The world would be so much better if people would uplift each other.

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      7. I hope so I don’t ever want to have a negative effect on someone. And thank you very much Sumit. 🙂 Be safe and have a great day, blessings to you 🙂

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      4. Oh my God! I’m constantly smiling. 😉😂😂

        Thank you for your kind words Sumith.

        PS- One of the celebrities’ name start with my name only. The only difference is it ends with ‘h’ 😉😅😊

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  27. wow sumit ❤ every line was b'ful escaping me from real world. You know, i was lost in some other world while proceeding with each line ❤ . I really loved it ^_^

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      9. Night night 💞 I already started reading and its great so far – “Brene quote is pretty” – as always – we’ll talk soon… 🙂

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      5. Publisher did all the formalities…hard copies were also available in book stores and for distant frnds and relatives ..It was online…apart from this I got bulk order of my book from different sectors…which made the difference.Still working on promotions..

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  32. Where saying ‘I love you’ holds the glory of an entire night sky!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What???? This is so incredibly beautiful!!!! Wow….

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