We sit under the dark sky
where coruscating lights fall on us
Our breathes become warm-hearted
by singing trees and whistling of train
This is where the magic is created
Our heartbeats come to dance together
Where saying “I Love You” holds the glory of an entire night sky…
the dark sky..
where You and I forgather again. . .
-SumitOfficial
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OMG!!!!! Sumit!!! Marvellous post!!! Heart-warming lines. ❤ loved it 💖
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Shreyu, this reminds of yesterday’s ‘Beautiful’😂😂😂😂😂
Ok sorry. 🙂
I know you loved it. 😻😹😜
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Huh 😒 ab itna acha comment kia fir b
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Arre😂😂😂😂😂
I already said sorry na😂😂😂
😘😘
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Huh fine 😁
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Capturing work.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
I tried to focus the light here this time. 😃
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Very nice, a romance under the dark sky! Loved it ☺️👍👍
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Thank you very much. 🙂
A romance has always underestimated at few places. Hence I try to happen it under the dark sky. 😃
PS Eva had told me your name but I forgot, can you please🙈
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Hahaha… You’re correct, some places are underestimated! My name is Advaita, and it is difficult to remember for many, so no worries bro! Just call me Addy or A, I’m cool with it! 😂👍👍
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Oh yes yes.. I had a clue it starts with A…😆
Thank you very much Advaita for your kind words. 😃
Eva, always appreciate you and your work. It’s nice meeting you after a long time. 😃
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Hahaha…. Yeah, it starts with an A 😂 And Eva is such a sweetheart, she always has nice things to say about everyone 👌💕
I’ve been away only two weeks, guess that’s a long time on WordPress 😜👍
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Yes yes.m but I hope to read from you more and more Advaita. 😃
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Sure thing buddy! Cya around ☺️👍
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Have a great weekend. 🙂
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You too mate! Cheers ☺️👍
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Beautiful. Nicely written.😆
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Thank you Gomez.
Delighted to know that you loved it. 😝😆
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Gorgeous poem, Sumit 🙂
xoxo
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Thank you Mopana. Glad that you liked it. 😃
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😀
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:))
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Another beautiful piece!
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Your comment always make me smile. Your few words brings a big smile on my face. 🙂
Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it. 😃
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Holy Shit! this is perfection.
You write so well ❤
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It was the dark night which made them love each other. 😆
It was that night and Coruscating Lights which made me write this, Tanya. 🙂
I’m elated that you liked it. ☺☺
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Well, I am glad that the night and those playful Coruscating lights made you write. I am glad I get to read this. 😅
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You’re a sweetheart Tanya. Thank you so much for your kind words. 😊😊
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Well written dude 😍😍
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Awww…you loved it nah😘😍
Thank you very much Jovita. 😃😘
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Yes .. It was really good.. Damn nice 👍🏻👍🏻😉
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Like your as usual comments😘😅😊
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Hahaaaa..lol..🙈🙈🙈🙈 as usual lol’s
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😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Beautiful words written to its perfection😀
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It is making me happy to see your lovely comments on the blog post. Thank you for your time Kamal. 😃
I appreciate that. 😃
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Beautiful line……
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Thank you Preeti. I’m glad you take out some time to read it. 😃
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you so much Pranabaxom😃😃😃
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What is the meaning of forgather? 🙂
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Hi Shoaib,
Forgather means to gather together. 🙂
In the last verse of the poem, both the characters forgather again, means they meet each other and become one. :))
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Thank you 😊
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:)))
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🙂
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Absolutely beautiful ❤️
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Thank you very much Rhapsody.😃
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Wao
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Thank you Kajal. 😃
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In my story initially I never said I love you
You know why it’s old fashioned. I think one should change these lines. Isn’t is something you feel like you borrowed something from the system.
Pyar bhi karte ho aur shabd dhundhte ho,.
Abhivyakti ka ye kaisa falsafa hai,
Main rahta hoon aur vo sab samajh leta hai,
Vo udas hota hai to main samajh leta hoon vo kuch khafa khafa said hai.
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Rakesh, I am cent percent agree with you here.
I love you means nothing until and unless you don’t feel from inside. But I’d say there are zillion of ways to express our love to someone.
Borrowed something from the system, iss par to bas itna kehna chahunga –
“Itna aasan nahi shehar-e-mohabbat ka pata lagana,
Khud bhatakte hain yaha raah batane wale”
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Once again
इश्क के बाज़ार का अजब दस्तूर देखा,
जिसको भी सबक याद हुआ, उसे छुट्टी न मिली
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Ishq ke hee bazaar ka ye bhi manjar dekha
Kabhi jise sapno me naa socha tha, aaj usse bhi pate dekha. . .
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प्यार भी करते हो और शब्द ढूंढते हो,
अभिव्यक्ति का ये कैसा फलसफा है।
मैं मौन रहता हूं और वो सब समझ लेता है,
वो उदास होता है तो लगता है कुछ रफा-दफा सा है।
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😃
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Yes sumit….👍
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Yes Preeti. 😉
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Alright Sumit now you’re just showing off how good are with words. LOL this is a very lovely poem. I like ie=t a lot nicely written well done 🙂
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Awww… thank you so much Morgan😘
Is that so because these days I’m working more on a little hard vocabulary? Is it the reason my poetries touch everyone’s heart?
😂😉
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Hahaha 🙂 It could be the reason. Lol 🙂 it is very lovely poetry.
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I must work in that way then 😝
Thank you very much Morgan. Your genuine comments always inspire me to write more. :)))
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You’re welcome, keep showing your off talent. Poetry is a beautiful gift you carry. And I as well as many others love your poetry. Never stop writing I enjoy your work it is full of your genuine soul. 🙂
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It’s early in the morning here Morgan, and I’m so delighted to having this beautiful conversation with you. 🙂
As always, you made me inspired and I promise you I’ll keep writing and sharing what comes into my mind in order to make you all smile. 🙂
Thank you Morgan. I really appreciate your words. ☺😘
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You’re very welcome, I am only stating what is true. You truly are great with words. I wish you all the best with your writing and everything you do. Prosperity is yours, I believe in supporting people and encouraging them. The world would be so much better if people would uplift each other.
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You’re actually are uplifting people with your blog posts Morgan. It always speaks truth from your view. 🙂
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I hope so I don’t ever want to have a negative effect on someone. And thank you very much Sumit. 🙂 Be safe and have a great day, blessings to you 🙂
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I wish you the same Morgan. 🙂
Have a great day too. 😊😊
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Enjoyed the read!! Nice one sumit:)
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It was a normal night, but it did magic to both of them by forgathering them. 🙂
Thank you Sumith for liking the poem. 😃😃
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Sumit your blog is a rich man’s playground😂
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Hahah.. thank you Sumith. 😀
May I know how a rich man’s playground is?😉
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I am a fan of Manchester United⚽. Bit less than that. You have all the celebrities in your ground😂
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Oh my God! I’m constantly smiling. 😉😂😂
Thank you for your kind words Sumith.
PS- One of the celebrities’ name start with my name only. The only difference is it ends with ‘h’ 😉😅😊
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Another amazing work. 🙌
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Gayatri😍😍😍😍
I’m sorry yaar, I tease you all the time to read my work. And all the time you manage to take out the time.
I love you for that, Gayatri.☺ 😘
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😡😡😡😡😡 I didn’t expect this. Blogs padhne ke liye kuch manage nhe karti. I love reading your blogs. 😜
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Awww…. you’re too sweet Gayatri😘😘😜
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Hehehe thank you 😉😉😂
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:)))
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As usual it was amazing
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As usual, loved your comment. 😘😍
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Thanks
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:))
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Beautiful poem. I had to Google the definition of coruscating though. So now I learned a new word. Thank you.😊
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That’s really great thing to know. 😉
I’m glad I could be the reason to gain your diction😉
And thank you for your kind words on the poem Kira. 😘🙈
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Damn!❤ This is perfect man!👍
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Thank you so much, Spectrika! 😀
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Boht sohna likhya 😍😍 words and feelings ne ghaa hi pata 😋😋
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Thank you Deepika 😍😍😘
Bas kade maan jeha ni kita 😋
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Hahaha… 😂😂😁
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😅😋
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I am enjoying this emotional journey of yours Sumit Bhai.
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🙂
Thank you Dheeraj Bhai.:)
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😊😊😊
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You’ve captured such imagery, such romanticism. Very lovely!
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Hey, Meg! Thanks so much. 🙂
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wow sumit ❤ every line was b'ful escaping me from real world. You know, i was lost in some other world while proceeding with each line ❤ . I really loved it ^_^
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Ratika, day by day your comments are even more beautiful than the actual post. Thank you very much. 🙂
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actually, i wish to be as good enough like u 😀 that’s the reason Sumit ^_^
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You are already a sweetheart Rati. Even better than me. 🙂
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Submit, this is absolutely stunning 🌹🌹 La perfección en su mejor 👏 Tienes el don de barrer la mente los recuerdos del corazón 💕💋
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Yayyyyyyyyyyyy! Thanks so much Jenn. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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🙂☺🙃 yay submits here🤗
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Hahah! Jenn, Its is Sumit. Hahahahah!
But I love it anyway from you. This SUBMIT. Hahah!
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Lol that’s my phone !😊😊 pero, Eso es bueno también 😉
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Hhaahhaha
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Your still awake? Does that mean your going to post a beautiful poem ?? ☺🙃☺
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Oh yes.. it’s 3:00 am here.
And I’m just done with this beautiful post for one of my friends, Sadhna.
Please read you’ll like it, Jenn. 😊😊
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I will now.. I just got home and it sounds like you need some 😴… You know your becoming a night owl like me 😉😊
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Hahaha.. oh that’s true.
My daddy is scolding me from another room. He wants me to sleep now. 🙂
Good nigh, Jenn. 😊😊
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Night night 💞 I already started reading and its great so far – “Brene quote is pretty” – as always – we’ll talk soon… 🙂
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^I love you^finally has meaning.
Amazing piece of poetry.💝
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Oh yeah! It is different than just three words. 🙂
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Indeed💗
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lovely poem sumit
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Thank you very much. …..☺☺☺
May I know your good name please?😊
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I m ranjeeta
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Yes yes.. I just saw your about me section.
I’m so happy to see that you’re a publisher author. 😊
I really liked the Title as well.
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Thanx …launched my book 4 months back and with God’s grace getting pretty good response😊
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That’s really great. So did you go for hardcopy or you posted on Amazon first?
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Publisher did all the formalities…hard copies were also available in book stores and for distant frnds and relatives ..It was online…apart from this I got bulk order of my book from different sectors…which made the difference.Still working on promotions..
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I can imagine how wonderful you must be right now to see such response from people. 😋😍😊
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Beautiful! Great job!
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Thanks!
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You’re welcome.
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🙂
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Where saying ‘I love you’ holds the glory of an entire night sky!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What???? This is so incredibly beautiful!!!! Wow….
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Thank you. 🙂
I could sense your astonishment. I am so happy that you liked it. 🙂
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It’s perfection… astonishment is the right word. Really incredibly written.
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Thanks so much. 🤗😇😉
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Nicely Written!!!
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Hey, thanks!
I really like your domain name. 🙂
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Nice. ❤ loved it.
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Thank you Neetika 😇💖
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