मगर …



इश्क़ के समुंदर में शायद लाश तो डूब जाये,

मगर जिंदा इंसानों को  मैंने डूबते देखा है।

रातों को सितारे रौशनी तो जरूर देते हैं,

मगर सुबह होते ही मैंने उन्हें टूटते देखा है।

सांस होती हैं सीने में जब तक वो साथ होती है मेरे,

मगर उसके जाने के बाद मैंने साँसों को छूटते देखा है।

इंसान ही इंसान के काम आता है सुना तो था मैंने,

मगर जब मेरा घर टूटा, तो सबको लूटते देखा है।

लाख दफा चाहा कि ज़िन्दगी को खुल के प्यार करूं,

मगर हर मोड़ पर मैंने ज़िन्दगी को रूठते देखा है।


Special thanks to my friend and a wonderful poet Arti Manekar for proofreading and editing. 🙂

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Published by: SumitOfficial

Sumit (23) passionately follows his dreams by writing his heart out for more than 3 years now, and have been into many creative fields including- VJ, singer, who’s appeared on National TV, done radio shows, conducted Literature events, written articles for newspapers and magazines. Professionally he’s delivering his services to one of the leading companies in Mumbai being an Asst. Manager. You’ll find many emotions through his words which will dagger your heart and you’ll relate it with yourself. Writing about untouched emotions human feels, poetry, life journey, sex, erotica, and BDSM is what attracts him the most. Welcome to SumitOfficial’s Blog. 😊

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96 thoughts on “मगर …”

  1. रूठना, टूटना, डूबना, लूटना, और छूटना-
    सब ज़िंदगी के वो पहलू हैं जिनके बिना मेहनत के फूल खिलते नहीं; बग़ीचे के फूल दिखते नहीं।

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  2. Khoob kaha hai kisi ne…
    Jab koi likhta hai shabdo ko khojkar..
    Vo sagar ka dariya bana leta hai…
    Magar jb koi dil se likhta hai..
    Vo motiyo ko bhi ek nam de jata hai❤you are amazing❤

    Appreciate you by heart❤all those meanings which is deeply embedded with bitter truth..u nailed it…!!!

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  3. “Then the corpse might be immersed in the sea of ​​love”…”There are nights when the stars light, But that morning, I saw them break.”..Sumit this is…Transcendent! The figurative language is perfect my dear!

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    1. Oh my God! I can’t thank you enough for your efforts, Jenn. You actually translated the words and came out with a wonderful thought process of mine. You’re such a wonderful gem, Jenn.

      Your efforts to read my words made me feel so good. 😊😊😚

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      1. Sumit… Don’t you know me already??? I will always make effort my friend! I enjoy your words daily! 😄 I meant what I said… I just love love love it! I had to read a few times just becasue it’s that damn good! 😃


  4. Aaj se 4 saal pahle likhi poem….
    uske hatho ki lakeero me tera nam alag.
    umar bhar ka chahe sath rahe ye bat alag.
    uska dard fna karne ka andaj alag.
    ye to naseeb ki bat hai…
    “warna is tarah k halaat alag.”

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  5. Kisi ne kaha tha ki har mod par zindagi ka rukh badalta hai,
    Hum to hamesha he samandar mein tayrana jante the!

    (You have written the piece fantastically and my these lines are inspired from your words Mr. Official😘)

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