इश्क़ के समुंदर में शायद लाश तो डूब जाये,
मगर जिंदा इंसानों को मैंने डूबते देखा है।
रातों को सितारे रौशनी तो जरूर देते हैं,
मगर सुबह होते ही मैंने उन्हें टूटते देखा है।
सांस होती हैं सीने में जब तक वो साथ होती है मेरे,
मगर उसके जाने के बाद मैंने साँसों को छूटते देखा है।
इंसान ही इंसान के काम आता है सुना तो था मैंने,
मगर जब मेरा घर टूटा, तो सबको लूटते देखा है।
लाख दफा चाहा कि ज़िन्दगी को खुल के प्यार करूं,
मगर हर मोड़ पर मैंने ज़िन्दगी को रूठते देखा है।
-SumitOfficial
Special thanks to my friend and a wonderful poet Arti Manekar for proofreading and editing. 🙂
Copyright © 2015-2017 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
Bahut khoob..👌
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Bahut Shukriya Neetika. 😘😊
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It’s a bitter truth! Life is an illusion and the death is the only Fact! 😦
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That’s true Pritu. 😊😊🤗
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Waah waah..👌🏻
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Thank you Mayank. 😊😅
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Ek no somu
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Thank you Kaju.☺
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Nic… Bhai
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Thank you Jeetu. ☺
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This is amazing❤❤. Chagaya tu 🙌🙌🙌
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Bahut bahut dhanyawad, Gayatri 😍❣😄😊
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I have no words, Sumit. I don’t stand anywhere to appreciate the intensity and hidden meanings behind this poetry. Wonderful!
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As I say, they are not just words, they are more than that. Thank you Shreya. ❤😊
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Nice line sumit ….aati sunndar..👍
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Bahut Shukriya Preeti.😅🤗
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रूठना, टूटना, डूबना, लूटना, और छूटना-
सब ज़िंदगी के वो पहलू हैं जिनके बिना मेहनत के फूल खिलते नहीं; बग़ीचे के फूल दिखते नहीं।
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Kya baat hain.. kam shabdon me bahut kuch bayaan kar diya.☺
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Yeh to aapka nazariya hai
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☺☺
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I like it 😃
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Bahut Shukriya Sapna.😊☺
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Sumit…good job!! Yeh bahot acha likha hai tumne.
Arti 😉😉.
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Thank you Karthika. Muje bahut accha laga ye jaan kar. 😉😊
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Mujhe acha laga yeh jaan ke ki aapko acha laga 🙂
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😘😘😘😍
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wah…
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Thank you Shonel. 😄😊
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Waah bhai 💐👌👌
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Thank you Raja. 😅😊
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Khoob kaha hai kisi ne…
Jab koi likhta hai shabdo ko khojkar..
Vo sagar ka dariya bana leta hai…
Magar jb koi dil se likhta hai..
Vo motiyo ko bhi ek nam de jata hai❤you are amazing❤
Appreciate you by heart❤all those meanings which is deeply embedded with bitter truth..u nailed it…!!!
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This is really heart touching for me l, Prachi. Thank you so much for saying so and I’m glad that you felt good after reading this poem.😊😍💙❣
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If only I understood what you are saying😢…
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Awww.. Karen, I’ll keep this in my mind from next time. I’ll translate them in English as well so that you can understand it. 🙂
Btw, Jenn has translated a bit. You can read them in the comments. ☺☺
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😀 yay! Thanks.
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🤗☺
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“Then the corpse might be immersed in the sea of love”…”There are nights when the stars light, But that morning, I saw them break.”..Sumit this is…Transcendent! The figurative language is perfect my dear!
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Oh my God! I can’t thank you enough for your efforts, Jenn. You actually translated the words and came out with a wonderful thought process of mine. You’re such a wonderful gem, Jenn.
Your efforts to read my words made me feel so good. 😊😊😚
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Sumit… Don’t you know me already??? I will always make effort my friend! I enjoy your words daily! 😄 I meant what I said… I just love love love it! I had to read a few times just becasue it’s that damn good! 😃
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Jaisa ki humne aapko bataya tha, ye kuch behtareen alfaazon mein se ek hai. I loved this one. 🙂
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Bahut Shukriya Ankita aapki iss taareef ke liye. ☺☺
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Acchi he👍👌
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Shukriya Dheeraj. 😊
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Like that it was translated – thanks Jenn and Sumit 🙂
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Hurray! I’m so glad that you read the translated part. 🤗
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Yes, sadly I’m monolingual but trying to learn a little Spanish at least but it’s so hard to remember!!! Age sucks sometimes 🙂
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Haha. but mine was Hindi and not Spanish 🙈🙈😅
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Yes but that’s as close to any other language as I know 😢
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😄😃
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Aaj se 4 saal pahle likhi poem….
uske hatho ki lakeero me tera nam alag.
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umar bhar ka chahe sath rahe ye bat alag.
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uska dard fna karne ka andaj alag.
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ye to naseeb ki bat hai…
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“warna is tarah k halaat alag.”
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Wah wah.m kyaa baat hain 😄😄😌
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amazing👏👏👏very insightful
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It has some deep meanings of life Shivee. Thank you. 😊❣
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true bhai!! very well conveyed 😇😇😇and your welcome
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Khoobsoorat👌👌
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Thank you Amit. 😀☺
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Hamesha ki tarah bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapnay 😍😍😍
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Bahut Shukriya Anshi. 😊
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😄😄
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What??
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It is in Hindi l
anguage 🙂
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Realy? Cool
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from next time I will surely translate it in English. I am sorry for the inconvenience. 😦
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O, no. This realy cool
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🙂
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Please visit my website please and, if possible, recommend to others
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Sure.
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Thank you
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You visit my website?
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I tried but it’s not opening.
I guess, you’ve changed the URL of your site.
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My site Konleeblog.wordpress.com
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Ok. Let me check now.
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Ok.
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You check?
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Yes. 🙂
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How can I fix this?
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Can you try more
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Ok
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Recomended me your friend
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I did just now. 🙂
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Thank you. Can you recommend me to friends?
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Can you send a message to a few more people, your subscribers?
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I’d recommend you to focus on your writing, everything else will fall into place automatically.
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Thank you. I’ll do it
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🙂
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Hello! Can you post on my blog my link to my blog?
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Sorry I don’t do any promotional things on the blog.
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You can post on my blog my guest post. You are welcome. It is very important
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Kisi ne kaha tha ki har mod par zindagi ka rukh badalta hai,
Hum to hamesha he samandar mein tayrana jante the!
(You have written the piece fantastically and my these lines are inspired from your words Mr. Official😘)
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Awww.. Fairy how lovely your lines are, they are so inspiring. 🙂
Magar poem se bhi achhi likhi tu to Fairy. :* 🙂
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Awwwwww…. 💚💚 Thank you soo much but yours were my only inspiration for these lines!
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:* :* :*
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💚💚💚
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Very nice lines 👌👌
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बहुत शुक्रिया, स्मृति। 😊😊
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बहुत धन्यवाद आपका 😊
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