उस खरपतवार को भी अब क्या दू
इल्ज़ाम मैं अपनी बर्बादी का
कि जिसके हर एक कश में
मैंने उसकी यादों को जीया है।
-SumitOfficial
English Translation-
Why should I blame the weed to
destroy my entire life,
After all, that is the only resort I have now
when you and your memories are lost. Forever.
Copyright© 2015-2017 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
Nice 😃
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Bahut shujriya, Sapna. 🙂
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Mitoooo…. kinna sai likha yr
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Bahut bahut shukriya Deepu. 🙂
Me sirf erotica hee nahi likhta dekh 😉
Hahah! 😀 🙂
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“jiske har ek kash meh maine uski yaado ko jiya hai” this line was a killer bhai✌👏Very well written💞💞
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Chooti si Shivee, itti sab baate kese acche se samaj leti hain. 🙂
These are just words for me or you, Shivee, but I can see a lot of people who are actually living like this.
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A lot of them, they are never just words bhai, they are impression of experiences of stories, of thoughts, of the feel that maybe no felt, they never are just words, they are maybe someone’s stories wanting to be heard… maybe the stories that only your imagination could read, the stories that your heart could feel in the way no one did…..
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I don’t know that Shivee, but all I know is people around me inspire a lot. And that is what I try to convey through my words. 🙂
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It is really nice to have your thoughts in this way bhai😘😘
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🤗😇😘
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Pyaar hume kis mod pe le aaya, ke dil kahe haye, koi ye bataye…. Kya hoga…… I guess, you just gave the answer!! Love ke chakkar mein kabhi nahi padna chahiye…
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Hahaha! Yaar essa bhi nahi hain ki nahi padna chaiye, bas hamesha yeh yaad rakho ki kuch chize sacrifice ho sakta hain, magar kuch jagah nahi.
All in all, be neutral. 🙂
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Sumit baba ka official gyaan…. hahahah😂😂😂😂Bhai ki jai ho👏👏👏
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aree, pagal. Hahahah! :*
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hahahahaha,😂😂😂
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Hahaha…. aag ka dariya nhi samundar hai ishq! Ishq ka chakkar just makes you a ghanchakkar!!!
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Hahahah! Well, that’s what weed does too.
So one can conclude-
Love=Weed=Addiction
😉
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So one can conclude
Say no to fall in love!!!! 😁
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Do you think it will be in your control to not fall in for? 😉
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Everything is possible!! 😜
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Yeh bhi sahi hain haan 😉
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Baat th mai hamesha sahi hi karti hu…😜😂
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😆😂😂😂😂
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It is possible .. but once you are into that trap, trapped forever😉
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You mean shadi? 😂😂😂
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Not exactly.. I meant once you start to love someone from the bottom of your heart, never ever you can have a rethink.😉
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😌 itti badi baate 😶
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Ya ya.. Mein bahuth badi ho…tho badi batheim kahna hein, atleast once in a while😉
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Absolutely right
Heheheeeeeeeee
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As I said, baat th mai hamesha sahi hi karti hu….😁
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Right yaaaar
Actually we girlzzzz are always right
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Haha… Btw What do you do Samayra?
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Yaaaar I am student……
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Okay! That’s nice!! 😃
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Thanks yaar
And what about uh?????
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Same!
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CLG going???????
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Hahaha.. Yeah! I’m a college student! What about you?
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Me toooo
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Great!!
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Hmmm
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Ohhhhhhh Gawddddd!!!
MATLAB KAHA SE YEH JASBAAT AA RAHE HAI?? 😂😂
I am damn sure… Kuch toh gadbad hai DAYA😂😂😂
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Hahahahha! Yaar me BDSM pe likhta hoon to kya iska matlab…… XD
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MATLAB?
I am not getting you!
I didn’t knew what BDSM is, so I googled it but??
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Hahahha, and what did you get by Google>
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Crux are:
Bondage & Discipline
Domination & Submission
Sadism & Masochism.
Are you on Instagram, we can talk there. On WordPress, comments keep on going on!!😂
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Yes, Fairy.
It’s @sumitofficial3 😊
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Okay😊😎
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Bahut dard h bhai!!
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Ji.. 🙂
Bahut shukriya, Neetika.
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क्या खूब लिखा है ज़नाब👏👏👏
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Bahut shukriya, Mukansu. 🙂
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😊😊😊🙏
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U nailed it so beautifully…
Hidden feelings which cant b xpressed by everyone…❤❤❤
Superb
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Aww, so sweet of you to say that Prachi, but no I am not that good as much as people out their describe things.
But thank you so much for your words. :* 🙂
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Nice 🙂
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Thank you Pratyu. 🙂
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Weed is one of the wild meaning of kharpatwar. Otherwise its an unwanted
Plants grown automatically with agriculture products
Mere blog ka title rakhne ka reason bhi meri zindgi ka ek sacha kissa hai.
Mein ek din khet mein apne uncle ke sath ghum raha tha. Sabhi kuch na kuch
kaam kar rahe the to maine kaha mujhe
Bhi kuch kaam do. Vo bole achcha aise karo tum ye kharpatwar ukhad kar khet
se bahar fenk do. Maine puchha vo kya hoti hai. Uncle bole is khet mein
gehu(wheat)ke elawa jo bhi poudha ya ghas ug rhi hai ukhad kar fenk do.
Jab mein ye poudhe ukhadne laga to unme itne sundar sundar pahadi phool the
jo mera todne ka man nahi ho raga tha. Uncle samajh gye bole “pet ki bhukh
ka jo nasha hai vo har nashe se bada hai. Ann hai to jivan hai.” Tabhi
maine vo sundar phool todte hue do line likhi thi jo
Baad mein maine modify ki hain
मजबूरियों के खलिहान
और
खुशियां खर-पतवार सी,
क्या उखाड़ना था, क्या उखाड़ बैठे।
मुझे रोशनाई की ज़रूरत थी,
वो शम्मा जला बैठे ,
क्या संवारना था, क्या संवार बैठे।
कितनी दरारें हैं
मकान और रिश्तों के बीच,
इक लकीर सी अब भी दिखती है,
कई बार मिटा बैठे।
शीशे में जो बात है,
आईने में कहाँ,
एक छवि को संवारना था,
खुद को उतार बैठे।
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Bahut hee khoob Rakesh. As I told you you were the only motivation for me to write this. Kharpatwar. I just love this word.
Your stories are always fascinating. And may be that’s the reason that I always wait for your view on my posts. You make them complete. 🙂
The poem you have written is outstanding.
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Thanks
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The last line ❤️.
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Thank you, Tanya. 😍😘❤
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Those lines 😍😍
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Thank you Karthi. 😘😍❤
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Welcome sumit 🙂
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Good poem but sad people turn to harder drugs and booze to drown their sorrows and many never come back to who they were.
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That’s absolutely true.
It’s better to not go that way where you can’t come back to your real state. 😊
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Thanks Sumit! You’re the best for the English translation.
Very much appreciate it, because u r such a great writer and now I can really enjoy everything you write!!
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I’m honoured with your words Karen. As I promised you to share the English translation, I did it. ☺
I’m so elated that you’re enjoying the posts. 😊😊
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Girija. 😇
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So powerful, raw an outcry, filled of pain and unanswered needs. I felt every word and I guess it is how an amazing writer captivates his audience. Well done
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That’s so sweet of you to say Rhapsody, I guess I’ve got this inspiration from people around me. Thank you so much for your words. 😇😍😘
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Yes I believe so took that it comes from people and experiences. But still not everybody can convey it so beautifully making others feel through their words.
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Whoa! Beautiful
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Thank you Pradita. ☺😊
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You’re welcome.
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☺
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💓😊
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Is this the weed post you were trying to write?? The green goddess 😀😀
It’s nice 💗💗👻
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No baba. Aayega wo bhi🙈🙈🙈🙈
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Hey! Sumit…. I’ve nominated you for the Blue sky tag! I Hope you’d accept the nomination. Have a fantastic day!!
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Surely, I will see. Thank you, Deepika. 🙂
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Great!
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Wow, it never hit me but sometimes one needs more than a ton full of weed
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Really? How is your experience after consuming it? 🙂
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Better to sleep, weed or no weed
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Hhahah!
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Amazing Lines!!!
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Thank you so very much. 🙂
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Welcome 😇
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