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Once Upon A Time (Part3/4)

There were millions of emotions

emerging out from both of them

he asked her in her ear

Will you look for me

when I disappear

from your dream?

Will you crave for me 

when the ache

becomes unbearable?

Will you be wanting me

To come closer to you?

Will you allow me to be

Your everything?

Will you be mad on

Me when you’ll see me?

Will you remember me

For years?

Will you be mine forever?

Will you?

-SumitOfficial

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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82 thoughts on “Once Upon A Time (Part3/4)”

    1. Haha… I’m glad that someone could recognise that. 😉

      Actually, I’ve written this series a long back. I could not find anything to write onto. But when I saw this picture with moon on it. I suddenly decided to make a Blog post of it and it’s time to show to the world. ☺😆😋

      Thank you for liking the poetry too. 😃

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    1. Not at all Tanya. It’s really a big word for me you have appreciated me with. 🙂

      It’s great to hear that I am a part of your inspiration though Tanya. 🙂

      I wish you all the best for your write-ups. 😃

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    1. Haha… at times we have to speak a lot but you won’t find the audience to listen to.

      Though, thankfully I’ve got a family here in WordPress (including you Vivek😃) which loves to read my work. Hence the motivation comes from with to show case the love. 😉

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  10. I think he’s a tender romantic that craves for his Goddess to be safely protected and loved correctly in limitless forms. I wonder if he’s going to settle her fears in the next post. From your words, I can calculate them as one. So if he settles her fears, he eliminates his own. I’m anxiously waiting for the next part.

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    1. Your wait ends here Bellamy. I’m really shocked to see your perception on this series. How wonder you’ve analysed each and every words of the poem. I’m really impressed Bellamy. 🙂

      Yes. You’re cent percent right.
      In the next part she felt the love in his manly chest. She rested on it for the entire life. And their life is filled with love. All over again. 🙂

      Your comment is one of my favourites Bellamy. Believe me. 🙂

      And do read the next part. 🙂

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      2. No Payel😝. I read your last comment on 2-3 post before. I was actually missing your view there. 😅😍

        Accha have you read Lecherous Gleam series?🙈🙈🙈😻

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    1. Thank you so much Shreyu. ☺
      It is great when you have something in your mind, and at the same time someone is residing in your heart which helps you to write. Write fluently. Write fearlessly. Write expressively. It’s wonderful for the Writer to get an inspiration for. And at the same time it increases the love from both the sides. Isn’t it? ☺

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  17. OMG!! Hay Main mar java!!😍😍😍😍😍😍Super se bhi uper waali post, I loved it sooooooo adorable😘I seriously started imagining a couple in ball room😍Aha this was one of the best pieces from you😍

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  19. Such precision of words and emotions. Also, the background sets the mood of the poem and I’m imagining them standing near a window and looking at the open sky. And I love how ” millions of emotions” relate to the millions of stars in the picture. Loved every bit of it. Can’t wait for the next one. 🙂

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    1. I am so happy that it could make you picturize the entire scenario. 🙂

      Basically that’s what I had thought before writing the series. It starts with the love, then sex and romance, now comes the commitments and promises, and in 4th part….

      Well, for that you gotta read it 😉

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