I want to go somewhere with you,
Where there would be no hindrance
Maybe on top of the world
Holding your hands in mine
The look in your eyes
While putting a gentle kiss
On your finespun lips
Where we can go catching
Stars and the moon
Where the world would drown in Hue
And again I’ll paint my words for You.
–SumitOfficial
Copyright© 2015-2017 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
It’s miraculous. 😍😍❤
Kudos to writing skills. 😘☺
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Thank you so much Shreyu…
As I always say, “The beauty is in the eyes of beholder.”
Your words always inspire me Shreyu. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Always sweetheart! ❤
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:* 🙂
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Good yar
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Thank you Kajal. 🙂
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It’s just beautiful. I love it!
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Aww.. thank you Kaw. 🙂
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You’re welcome love!
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😘
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Heart-melting! I wish there would be another world without any differences. Where people can love without any restrictions!
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True that 😃
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Heartfelt. Thanks for sharing!
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Happy to know you love it Sudarshana. 🙂
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Summit you’re still a great poet with those words handsome beard
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You know what, I am just blushing. 🙂
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Haha. 🙂 well it is true you are doing great. And so is that beard of yours
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HAhah… it has grown more now. I will show you some day. Hahah 😀
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Haha you must have a face full of hair. Nothing with that
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Hahaha… you know me better now. 😍😊😋😘
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Hahaha 🙂
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Sumit, you already painted words beautifully..writer,poet,shayar ab painter bhi😊
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Hahahah…. awwww thank you Medha. You’re an inspiration. You are. 😘😊😊
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Thanks Sumit.
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B’ful
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Loved every word… Mr. Official😺👌👌
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I loved every part of your comment Fairy. 😉
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Haha!!😎😺😺
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😉
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Listen to Saiyaan… by Fairy Kumar #np on #SoundCloud
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You did paint your heart out! 🙂
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Hahah.. thank you Prakash.
It is really great to see your comment over here. 🙂
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Pleasure! 🙂
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This is so beautiful!😍
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Alas if we can get there.the beauty of any poem is when the reader also sailes with the rhythm of the poem.
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FELL IN LOVE WITH IT…JUS AMAZING SUMIT…….KEEP IT UP…GOD BLESS
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*sigh* I’m swooning. 🙂
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😍😍😍
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Perfectly written.
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hey, thanks so much. 🙂
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PAINTED BY BEAUTIFUL WORDS
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Thanks so much, Naren! 🙂
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You know exactly how to sweep someone off their feet. (; And hey, convey my fascination for the sketch to the artist, will you?
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Thanks so much for your beautiful appreciation, Hirva. 🙂
Oh yes, I will. 🙂
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Thank you. (:
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😊
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I need to dedicate this one to someone special 😍
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Oh wow! Please let me know his response haan, Pritu. 🙂 😀
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He loved it 😊
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Yayy.. 😘😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! 😀
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You’re welcome.
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The title and the writing. 😍
Will I ever get enough of your beautiful words?
I don’t think so. 💥
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Hajiiiiiiiiiira! 😀
So happy to see you! 🙂
Awww… I would really not want you to get enough, else how will I get your lovely comments, haan?! 😀
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Sumiiiiiiiiit! 😁
Trust me, I’m not going to get enough of these ever. Haha. Woh toh hai. 😜😊
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Hahah 🙂
Yayyyy! Fir to I should jump with joy haan 😀
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Haha, ofcourse. 😊🤗
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fascinanté … Your words are music to the heart! 🎶🎵🎶💕
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Aww! And these beats will make you dance. 😉
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más de lo que sabes …😉🤗💞
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Oh lo se. 😉 🙂
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Tan seguero que eres !! 😄😄 con confianza !! 😉😏
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Hahaha! 😀
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Intenté hacerte sonreír, Jenn. Jaja
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Siempre haces … con no esfuerzo 😉😉🤗
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Jaja gracias Jenn 🙂
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Both are beautiful Sumit…the world you described as well as your poem.
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Yayyy! Thank you very much Lavanya. 🙂
Have you ever imagined a different world like this? 🙂
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Yaa sometimes I think it would be better if we could live in a world hvng no restrictions no rules..Where ppl won’t confuse love with lust or infatuation..Where one can feel the magic n purity of love..Love dat last till eternity..Smtms i ponder…
But never thought to give my imgntn such a beautiful form as your poem..it’s awesome..👌
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Wow! So true, Lavanya.
I could relate to what you just said. Loved it. 🙂
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So very romantic! Beautifully expressed!
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Hey, Meg! Thanks so much. I am so happy that you liked it. 🙂
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I really did ❤
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:* 🙂
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😍😍😍💗
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Kirraaaaaaaaaaaannnnnn. 🙂
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😸😸🙈🙈🙈
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😍😋😊
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😍💓 loved it
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Thanks so much Deepika 😘😘😘😍😋😊
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That would be a world free from those negative emotions: the first one being fear 🙂
Amazing 🙂
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Very true, Dhwani. 😇🤗
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🙂 🙂
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This is just beautiful! ❤
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Thank you so much Karuna. 😋😊
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Nice poem
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Thank you very much for reading. 🙂
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Amazing beautiful 😻 😻 😻 I loved it 🙂
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Yayyy! Thank you so much Mayaaaaaa ❤
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Beautiful amazing! 😊✌
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hey, thanks a lot, Richa. 🙂 🙂
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This was beautiful Sumit. More power to you 😊
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Wohoo! Look who is on the blog ❤
Thanks a lot, Rohit. 🙂
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OMG! I sooo love these lines. Your words painted a vibrant image in my mind. It’s like, a second back I was so irritated, 😹 and then I read this poem, and everything became so colourful and sweet again. It’s rightly said, reading something good can change our outlook on life. ☺
And, such supercute imaginations, and the way you related it to nature, the Stars, Moon, top of the world, that was the best part! 💙
What a positive and lovely vibe this poem has. Every girl wants a partner like that. Great work, Sir. 🙆
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Awww, that is so so so so sweet of you to say after reading this poem, Chandu ❤
I am so happy for the fact that it could bring a smile on the face. Keep smiling. Muah. ❤ 🙂
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Beautiful amazing as usual 😊✌
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Yayyyy! Thank you bada wala as usual, Richa. 🙂 :d
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Very nice
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Thank you so much, Kajal. ❤
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😙😙❤❤❤❤
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❤❤❤
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Sumit, I loved it. You wrote a long composition after a long time and I literally was waiting for it.
You’re amazing at this. Keep writing more of such pieces.😍
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Woohooo! Surely, I will keep on writing big ones now 🙂
Thanks a lot for your love;y views, Sans. 🙂 ❤
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You’re welcome😘
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❤
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I was reading and visualizing it at same time. I don’t think you are just writer, you have become an artist.
And your art is breathtakingly beautiful. ☺️
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OMG! You just gave me goosebumps with your words, Bhavika. ❤
Indeed, it takes a lot to think and paint(pen) the thoughts on the Canvas(paper) to make the words understand it, and the entire process can be completed when it reaches to the audience. And you just made me feel like that. 🙂
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Mesmerising and lovely😍!
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woohoooo! Pehli baar meri Shivee ka comment 3 words me kahatm hua! Hahahahah
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Haha😂Isn’t that an achievement?😂I didn’t notice only 3words😯
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Hahahah! But thank you so much Shiveeeeeeeee 🙂
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What a coincidence I just came back from school and most welcome❤
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Wohooo! How was it?
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School is fun for me and its just because of my friends😂How are you doing?
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Hahaha! Is it?
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Wow, you KNOW what I am dying to ask 🙂 🙂
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What what? :p
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Who is this lady that’s got your heart???
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Ah! That is a secret imagination. 😉
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Why am I not believing that?!😉
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Haha! Is it that hard?
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Yes! I think there is someone… come on Summit you can tell us 😄 if there really isn’t then do tell what would create a proposal from you? I’m very surprised you haven’t already got a ring on your hand to be honest as you seem such a nice guy and can win over a lady with your words too. Or do you choose/prefer single? Nothing wrong with that either but I’d think you’d be quite the hit with the ladies nearby!
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Hahaha! Elizabeth you are witty.
Ok, so first of all I would not like to have a ring on my finger as I just turned 22 😉
And yes yes, there are many inspirations I seek from my surrounding, who inspires me to write more and more, you know… 🙂
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Oh yes 22 is still so young I was barely 18 for my first marriage – have fun being single!
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OMG! Really?
Did that happen with your will?
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Yes, we don’t have arranged marriages here. I was young and in love, but sadly we had issues that I wasn’t ok to raise a baby with, but we’re still friends and had our perfect daughter together😊. I later married hubby#2, had my son by age 24, divorced by 28, we didn’t talk for long talk or see each other for like 15 years at all, had some issues with my son and been back living together for 2 years now. Weird right?!?
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I don’t know is it weird or not bu one thing is so sure that the love and wittiness is a;ways there in you which makes you so lovable, Elz
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Aw, thanks my sweet friend❤️
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❤
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I am melting almost with your romantic words😇
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Ohho! I am smiling after reading this :p ❤
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Marvellous❤
The words you have painted was just beautiful 💟 you have painted a mater piece with full of love❤love you to the moon and back❤
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Aww, I am so elated that you loved it so much, thank you so very much Prachi. ❤
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❤❤
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Nice 👌😋
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Thank you Sweara 🙂 ❤
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my pleasure 💯
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😃
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I have nominated your lovely blog for One Lovely blog award.
https://sweetscanblog.wordpress.com/2017/07/18/one-lovely-blog-award/
Keep writing such amazing blogs!
Much love
Sweta x ❤
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Hey, thanks a lot Sweta for the nomination. 🙂
But my blog is an award-free blog. 😛
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Thats kool sumit..I reckon you are a follower of Aamir khan who believes in award free work 😛 lol jk xx
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Hahahah! No no, I don’t watch movies much nor follow any actors 😀 😉
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Heavenly Romantic ❤❤❤
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🙂
I am delighted to know you liked it.
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😊😊
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Kaha se lata hai itna pyaar:D
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Bas log hain na mere pass sab acche acche padhne wale :p
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Aye hye.. Pagal na ho jana khushi mein😀😀😀
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yeh bhi sahi hain! Hahahah
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I m too good😀😀😀
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Accha beta? Wo kese?
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Aree talent hai apna.. U don know me abhi😀😀
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Achaa Hahahah! Bata fir tere talents 😀
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Aree bht hai.. Kitny btau😀😀
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:O
Itte kitte hain huh
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Ab kbhi ghmd nhi kiya na islye chord jane de
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😂😂😂😂😂❤
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😀😄😄😄😄
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😀😀😀😄
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❤
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This is sweet….
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Thanks a lot, Vera. 🙂
You liked it?
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Yes. It’s lovely!
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Have you addressed it to anybody personally? I mean if you have a muse?
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Umm, what do you think after reading this? 😉
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You touch the delicate and sensitive parts of ones’ soul and conveys the untold and unimaginable. Keep up the good work and inspire us.
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I’m happy for the fact that you could see the sensitive and how deeply it is meant to convey the meaning through words. ❤
Thanks a lot, for your encouragement. 🙂
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It was fully deserved on your part. I just acknowledged what many others have been meaning to say. Attaboy!
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Much Appreciated.. 🙂 ❤
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