Her Tremulous Soul


Lie down with me under the sky full of stars in a full moon night.
Let me entangle my fingers in yours,
Now look into my eyes and tell me
What made you so quiet that you hold the storms inside you?
Let me release the pain which you’re holding in your heart.
And let me calm down your tremulous soul by kissing your forehead.


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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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112 thoughts on “Her Tremulous Soul”

  1. very nice poem feelings weaved beautifully..read my latest poem and leave your comment.
    my book STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART is published this early month read it .http/notionpress/read/straightfrom the heart./
    Brij kaul

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      1. Hey Sumit darling. Aww thank you so much. I have missed you my darling. We are all doing well. Just lots going on, but we are all good. I hope you and your family are doing well and safe at home.


  2. This is soooo wonderful❤ soo much love in these beautiful lines..
    You have poured your whole heart in these beautiful words❤i just loved it …
    You always made me fall in love with your every writeup 😍❤❤😘😘😘

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      1. Yup…but I am not feeling to write…the poems I am writing all are depressing one…not posting them all though…if you read them you will feel blue also I think…


  3. The reasons behind my silence cannot be told. Just know that your kisses are bringing me back to life, stopping the storm inside me. I need nothing more than just to be with you, hold me and love me tonight and forever.

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  4. Wow have I told you just how incredible your poems are? Because they are truly beautiful and heartfelt. You are a one of my favorite bloggers . Your soul pours within evey word and makes the piece that much more of a remarkable piece of art.

    I admire your gift of poetry thank you for sharing it. Poetic Sumit I will have to call you that from now on. You say my curves inspire you to write about them but it is your poetry that inspires me to keep writing poetry. Blessings to you poetic Sumit 🙂

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    1. Wohooo!
      Is this true what I’m reading?
      I am so happy to read this, Monique.❤

      You’re one of my regular readers who always gives her genuine critic on my work.

      I’m blessed to receive that from you, Monique. Thank you so much for the honour. ❤

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  5. I am always in awe of you. Mind blowing yar! Though, I don’t really think I am much aware about this genre but I love reading your posts.

    They make me want to bring your words into reality at times! Beautiful to extremes! 👏👏

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    1. Even I was not aware of the genre I write about, it was great readers (including you) who made me realise that I can write on this.

      And that’s so so so sweet of you to say, Bhaaavika. I’d really want to read something from this genre if not then at least once in this lifetime. 😄😅😘


      1. I like that! You get all the ups and downs so easily.

        I feel as if I’m naked to you. No face. No cross-talks. Nothing pretentious. Nothing absurd. Completely open and real self. Where there are stories going on through the eyes.


      2. The second last line is so true. I respect that. In fact, I respect you since the day you had said, “Sumit, I want to read your work but not just to like them just for the sake of liking, I want to actually read them.”

        I’m sure your decision was right on that day.


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