Lie down with me under the sky full of stars in a full moon night.
Let me entangle my fingers in yours,
Now look into my eyes and tell me
What made you so quiet that you hold the storms inside you?
Let me release the pain which you’re holding in your heart.
And let me calm down your tremulous soul by kissing your forehead.-SumitOfficial
Copyright © 2015-2018 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
very nice poem feelings weaved beautifully..read my latest poem and leave your comment.
my book STRAIGHT FROM THE HEART is published this early month read it .http/notionpress/read/straightfrom the heart./
regards
Brij kaul
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Thank you so much Brij. 🙂☺
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All the best
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☺
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Beautiful Sumit. I love it. Adding this one to my top five favorites. Just beautiful. Great job. Bravo sweetheart. Bravo!!
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Thank you Kaw.
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You’re welcome Sumit darling!!
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Oh Kaw! You’re always being missed. I hope you and your family members are doing great and safe at home.
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Hey Sumit darling. Aww thank you so much. I have missed you my darling. We are all doing well. Just lots going on, but we are all good. I hope you and your family are doing well and safe at home.
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well, well… :o)
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❤☺
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This is soooo wonderful❤ soo much love in these beautiful lines..
You have poured your whole heart in these beautiful words❤i just loved it …
You always made me fall in love with your every writeup 😍❤❤😘😘😘
Muuuuaaaaahhhhhh❤
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Wonderful bhaiyaji…
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Areee Shukriya Sangbad.
New DP looks different 😃
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Without specs…a symbolic one…no writing these days…check my recent posts…
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Why no writing?
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These days am out of inspiration…though had posted few in last few days…
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Though inspiration may come from anywhere, isn’t it?
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Yup…but I am not feeling to write…the poems I am writing all are depressing one…not posting them all though…if you read them you will feel blue also I think…
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❤💋❤💋❤💋❤💋
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❤ ❤ :*
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Powerful, insightful.
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Thank you so much. 🙂 ❤
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The reasons behind my silence cannot be told. Just know that your kisses are bringing me back to life, stopping the storm inside me. I need nothing more than just to be with you, hold me and love me tonight and forever.
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WOAH! What a wonderful response. ❤
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Absolutely lovely!
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Thank you, Clark. 🙂
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Wow have I told you just how incredible your poems are? Because they are truly beautiful and heartfelt. You are a one of my favorite bloggers . Your soul pours within evey word and makes the piece that much more of a remarkable piece of art.
I admire your gift of poetry thank you for sharing it. Poetic Sumit I will have to call you that from now on. You say my curves inspire you to write about them but it is your poetry that inspires me to keep writing poetry. Blessings to you poetic Sumit 🙂
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Wohooo!
Is this true what I’m reading?
I am so happy to read this, Monique.❤
You’re one of my regular readers who always gives her genuine critic on my work.
I’m blessed to receive that from you, Monique. Thank you so much for the honour. ❤
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Yes it is true Sumit,
You are a inspiration
And I adore your poetry
And you’re sweet too lol
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And so are you, Monique. ❤
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ohh pretty Monique is still stuck on her curves!
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So nice Sumitji.
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Bahut shukriya aapka. 🙂
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Sawagat hai Sumitji.
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🙂
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wonderfully written ..:)
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Thank you so much Manoj 😊☺
It’s great to see you after a long time. 🙂
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Touched my heart Real Deep 🙂
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I am so happy to know this 🙂
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Lucky girl
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Hahah.. is she? 😉
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Sounds like lol
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Hahah.. yes, she is. 💞
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Beautiful…no words💖💖
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Yayyyy! Thank you, Jenn. 🙂
Good to see you back with a bang. 🙂
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Always love to read your work my Sumit!🤗🤗
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Eeeeeeee! ❤
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Your words are so beautiful this is one my favourite so far whatever i have read uts just i don’t have words for it ❤❤❤
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Yayyy… I’m so happy to know that. ❤❤😅
I hope you enjoy other writings too 😘
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Bliss 💞💞
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Hahah! Liked it? 😉
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Yeah ❤
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😊😊
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😍😍😍…speechless !!
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😃😍😍😍😘
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Hello Sumit, I have nominated you for Unique Blogger Award. Please check it here:
https://gauravsk98.wordpress.com/2017/07/29/unique-blogger-award/
🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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Awesome
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Thank you so much, Anand. 🙂
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Oh my God! Sumit, this is one of the best of yours❤️ I loved it…. I have no words for this. Keep writing more of such pieces❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, Sans for loving this piece so much. 😘😍
And I assure you until I have great readers cum Friends like you, I’ll always write and share. 😘😘😘😍☺
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😍😍😍❣️😘
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❤
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This is beautiful ❤
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Yayyy! Thank you Sohinee 😍😍😘
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😘😘😘😻
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😍😍😘
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First pic is so nice..
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Thank you. 🙂
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I am always in awe of you. Mind blowing yar! Though, I don’t really think I am much aware about this genre but I love reading your posts.
They make me want to bring your words into reality at times! Beautiful to extremes! 👏👏
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Even I was not aware of the genre I write about, it was great readers (including you) who made me realise that I can write on this.
And that’s so so so sweet of you to say, Bhaaavika. I’d really want to read something from this genre if not then at least once in this lifetime. 😄😅😘
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Oh I’ll give it a try! Till then I would love to read yours and learn constantly. 😊
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Yes yes please do that soon 🙂
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Aaahan it’s just so my kind of date😍💓❤
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Haha! Yes yes!
Thanks you Annu. 😍😘
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❤
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Thank you, Anushka. ❤☺
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I love this!!!!!
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Thanks a lot, Mandy.
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This is sweet Sumit….loved it..👐😘
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Woaaah. ❤
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Beautiful…👌
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This is 😍❤amazing
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Thank you so much for such lovely comment, Roshni. 😍😘
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Coz u write such beautiful ones 😇
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And they can be only recognized by the readers who understand Art. 💙❤
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Every time ur writing gave me new sock, how beautifully u write, my eyes stuck wd the beauty and wanting to read again and again😇😇😇😍😍😍👌👌
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OMG! This is beautiful! ❤
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So happy to know that you loved it, Kat ❤
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Absolutely!
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❤❤❤
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Half of it I’m saving and half of it I am taking screenshot I don’t know what to do. This is so wonderful.
Sumit yaar……
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Haha! Yes, Rashmi…
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I don’t surf Pinterest now.
I simply write Sumit official and it’s there💛
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Damn! You’re poetic in your own way. Do you know that?
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No, please elaborate 😅
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The kind of version I could see you today, I found you mysterious.
As I say, there are multiple layers on you. And all of them are beautifully flawed. ❤
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You don’t own the right to make me blush my dear….
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I don’t?
Well, I do. It’s my right to make my rigorous reader smile who’s making me smile all day long.
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Smiling Is still fine.
But the smile must not change its form…
Getting me😅
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Hahaha! I’m not getting, please elaborate 😂
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You ain’t dumb alike me. I need not elaborate 😅
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Haha! Being too intelligent is a sign of stupidity. You see. 😂
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I agree😅
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I like that! You get all the ups and downs so easily.
I feel as if I’m naked to you. No face. No cross-talks. Nothing pretentious. Nothing absurd. Completely open and real self. Where there are stories going on through the eyes.
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We are just two individuals who are honest to one another.
I am having a real talk here.
Though it’s my nature I never sugarcoat anything.
I feel connected here
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The second last line is so true. I respect that. In fact, I respect you since the day you had said, “Sumit, I want to read your work but not just to like them just for the sake of liking, I want to actually read them.”
I’m sure your decision was right on that day.
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You’re doubting my decision..
Afcourse I meant it there and I was fair enough deciding that
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You cannot be wrong. I am grateful for your intuitions.
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Thanks Kaw. ☺
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Shukriya, Prachi. ☺🤷🏾♂❤
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