ग़म के समंदर में कब ऐसा डूबता गया जैसे कुछ पता ही न चला, इस कदर घबराहट से जी मचल उठा था। न कुछ सुनाई दे रहा था, और ना ही कुछ दिखाई। खुशीयों के पल जैसे लबों से बिखरते जा रहे थे। जैसे कोई खिला फूल मुर्जा रहा था, सपने भी मानो ओझल होते दिखाई पड़ रहे थे।
रहकर शराब से दूर रहा कोई पाक बा-वजू,
हम पी कर शराब रहे हमेशा मस्त कू-ब-कू।जो पीया शराब वो खूब हुआ हमसे रू-ब-रू,
जो न पीया वो बचाता रहा अपनी जूठी सुर्ख-रू।-SumitOfficial
(१- पवित्र, २ गली गली ३ सामने ४ अच्छा नाम)
(Inspired by “Nazeer Akbarabadi”)
शराब पीने का आदि तो न था कभी मगर अब तलब कुछ ऐसी लगी की रोके नहीं रुक रही थी। वक़्त कुछ ऐसा भी आया कि तन्हाइयों में इंसानों का साया भटके या न भटके मगर चंद शराब की बोतलें हमेशा साथ देती थी। मानो कोई हमसफर सी बन गई हो।
काश मोहब्ब्त के सबब का कुछ ऐसा मकाम होता,
शराब के कतरों में न पाया आराम होता,
जशन मनाते हम भी विसाल-ए-यार का
गर शराब की लत में यूं न बदनाम होता।
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All Rights Reserved.
Hi Sumit. I need a translator program for this and would like to know which one do you suggest. Thanks.
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Hey, I really liked when you say you want to read this what I just written. It is on sadness, liquor and many more things.
You can use Google Translator to read this by converting from Hindi to English. 🙂
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I appreciate that. I thought you had written in one of your other post we could use google to do so. But wasn’t sure. 🌸
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Yes, yes! You can surely Google it. 🙂
And I am waiting for your review on that 🙂
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That was interesting. I am going back to read it again. There is a story to be heard.
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Yayyyy! 😀😀❤
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The alcohol addiction is celebrated or the alcohol is used because of the celebration. The sink of Gham. Is that a town.
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No. Gham means sorrow.
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Okay. The sink is the metephorical hole you are drowning in.
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Yes, that’s what my words say. 🙂
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I like it.
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Thank you so much. I really loved you put efforts to read and understand the piece. ❤
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Lovely.
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Thank you so much, Shaktiki. 🙂
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Flawless! ❤️
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Thank you so much :)/\
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Kya baat hai! 🙏
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बहुत शुक्रिया 😅😊
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Wow… I don’t read hindi… but I did read your post!! And it was awesomee!!! 😊
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Yayyy! I’m happy to know that you read it. 😍😍😅
But why don’t you read Hindi, Pritu?
I suppose you’re from South India na?
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Nope! I’m an odia… 😊 and I don’t read odia that well too… I mean, I can read and write in both the languages but not SO well.. Heheheh!!
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Haha! Aree wah! Then it’s a great opportunity for you and us too nah?
You write in Odia language and we’ll get to learn that too😅😅
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If i write a sentence of 5 words, then there would be 4 words with a wrong spelling..do you still want me to be your odia teacher? 😂😂
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Oh my my! Hahahahahah! I just can’t stop laughing. Hahahahaha
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This is what I got from Google Translator…
When there was such a sink in the sea of Gham, as if something did not come to light, then there was a tremendous amount of turmoil. Neither was listening, nor did anything appear. The moments of happiness were being shattered like lobbies. Just as a feeding flower was roasting, the dreams were also seen as oozing. It was not so much like drinking alcohol, but now it was not stopped to stop such a thing. At times, it was also possible that in the suburbs, people would not have been able to stray or run away, but a few wine bottles were always accompanied. Suppose someone has become a friend.
There was such a thing that there was a lot of excitement for Kashash Mohabbat
Alcohol was not found in the cloth,
We also celebrate the festival of Visal-e-Man
Due to alcohol addiction, it is not bad.
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Beautiful and sad.
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Thanks Kaw, my love. 😘
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You’re welcome my love.
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🙂
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Smiling! 🙂
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Haha! It’s not the exact meaning of this entire post. But I hope you could understand what I was trying to portray. 😅😅
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Yes, I got the message at least 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Alcohol is not good for health, in that context many other foods are also not good but are we going to stop other foods? No, then drinking alcohol is good unless there’s an addiction or if the person doens’t know his/her limits. Consume it for fun and not to live the life.
Sad thing is many people are addicted and the family suffers due to it.
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Definitely, this is one of the reasons one should not consume it.
PS- Kindly don’t go to this post.😂 A writer can do anything as long as he’s using his imaginations.
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😂😂😂
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🙂
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Mujhe pine ka shok nahi piti hu gam bhulane ko 😔😢….
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Hahahah! Nautanki :p
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Those four line has been beautifully expressed by you..and the deepness of each word os so pure and touched my heart..
Sukoon jhalak raha hai sarab bn kr…
Roob -e-rooh ho rhe hai khudi se hum khud ban kar❤❤😘😘😘
Loved it❤
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OMG! You’re such a sweetheart, Prachi. ❤😊
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Because you are love❤
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🙂
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How do you write it ya? I mean it is so awesome. Its expressed so beautifully. summing it up -you are awesome 😇👍❤
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How do I write such things? Because I have great readers and lovers like my Shiveeeeeee. ❤
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Haha, that’s really sweet😘.
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😘🙂
Kesi hain meri chhooti si Shivee? Schools acche chalre na?
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Bohot acche .😀Just thoda zyaada pressure hogaya hai .And all is just going how I want it to.👍😊And how are you?
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Yayyy! Main bhi accha hoon, Shivee. Thank you.
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😇❤Most welcome!
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😘😘😘
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Haha you its so awesome when the other person replies immediately😁😘
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I’m yet to reply on many views, but mari Shivee aave to mane jaldi reply karvu j pade be..😊
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Ae saaru che ke mane waiting list meh nathi raakhvu😁 and how’s your life going?
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Tane kai rakhay gandi☺😇😘
Tu jaan Cho Mari❤❤
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Effortless writings are the most difficult to write. Yun hi chand lamhon mein kaagaz par haal e dil bayaan kar diya, Syaahi nahi thi paas mein, Sharaab ne izhaar aasaan banaa diya …
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Bahut h khub ,aur shayri 👌
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Bahut shukriya Shayra, is shayri ko pasand karne. 😛
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😂,bilkul.Most welcome
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Aapse tips lene padenge hume acche shayar banne ke 😉
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😂😂😂,nice joke
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Aree sacchi. 😉
tera to naam bhi Shayra hain delh
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😂😂😂😂
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😉
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Hey,I have nominated you for Unique Blogger Award again.Congrats.and yes,I have written some Shayari . Check Random thoughts.Shayra k shayri as you have said . Hhaa!
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Let me see then😘😘😍
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Nice…..
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Thank you Preeti.
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Nice
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Thank you
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क्या जज़्बात बया किये है !!
सही में सारी यादो की धज्जियां उड़ाई है।
Directly throw out in heart SumitBhaiya ! ❤️
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Bahut Shukriya Vivek. 💙💙💙
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Bang on❤❤
I thought Your forte is on those english post but then I read this and its astonishing!
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I just tried my hand. I do that at times, when I feel English won’t give the thoughts enough justice.
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And you did justice by listening to your thoughts and penning it down in hindi❤
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Thank you Adi. I’ll keep on writing then. 💕💕💕
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शराब को ऐसे मत पियो जिस से जिंदगी ख़राब हो जाये ।
शबाब को ऐसे मत छुओ जिस से जिंदगी शराबी हो जाये।।
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Kya baat hain hain Jeetu.
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I wish you added a Translating option. Would’ve loved to read some indian Work, since i am a fan.
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I guess, you are from Pakistan right?
Can’t you read Hindi?
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Haha. I can understand Hindi Obviously. (Grown Up like a Cliche, watchung Akshrah and gopi Bahu) 😂😂😂 But I cant read it, except for a few words.
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😂😂😂😂😂
Accha means Hindi me likhunga ese to it’s understandable na 😆
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Exactly. Is tarhan, its understandable 😂
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Hahahahah! Fir thik Hain 😂
Mene Kai sare write-ups post kiye Hain Hindi wale on Instagram.
If you want you can read them. It’s @sumitofficial3 on Instagram.
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क्या जज़्बात बया किये है !!
सही में सारी यादो की धज्जियां उड़ाई है। ❤❤❤
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Bahut shukriya, Geno. 🙂
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