I’ve got the sea within my soul,
People disturb the
core of my silence
That makes me feel
like screaming
Like raindrops fall on me
day in day out.
For days, weeks, and months.
Or maybe decades?
Perennially.
-SumitOfficial
Copyright © 2015-2019 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
Nothing like the sea to inspire your verses.
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you, Shivani. 🤗
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Beautifully written*
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Hey, thanks, Shivani. 💕😀
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I already feel like I’m learning your craft.It’s a stellers💖🌸
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That’s a big compliment, Samyak.
Always there to give you something or the other to read. Keep reading, keep writing. 😃
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Thanks for writing such splendid stuffs.🙂
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It’s not the writing but the reader who makes it splendid. 🤗
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That’s very humble of you🙂
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This is so serene! I love the comparison. Proud to say I’m one huuuuge raindrop always disturbing the calm of that sea. 😹
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Serene. Wow. 💕
Hahahah! And no. You’re not the one who disturb me. Never. 💕
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Why do I feel like you heard this word ‘serene’ for the first time? So shocked I am. 😂
Anddd, how sweeet. Keep writing more like this. 😄
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Haa naa😂
Mene suna par use ni Kiya kabhi
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Calm cheez ko serene bolte huh.
Ab is word ko use karke likhho na please. ❤ I want to read.
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Accha Accha. Hahahahah
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Beautiful… Sea is always an inspiration…
Ocean is so Vast and Deep
Same is our life
If we follow and peep
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Absolutely, Ameet.
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Nice…
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Thanks
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Serenely beautiful!
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I hope you could have felt the same way unlike other writers.
Thank you, Diana. 💕
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It was my pleasure. 😄
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Absolutely breathtaking. I feel this in many ways. ♥️♥️
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I completely understand and truly believe that you’re too much connected to nature. Aren’t you?
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On so many levels, through more than 1000 ways, connected and I can feel it in my soul! Haha it’s true though.
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I’m really delighted to get connected to you. Believe me, people who love nature are so pure.
And as you’ve already read the poetry I’ve posted on Instagram about my love for trees and forest.
I’m gonna share it soon here. 💥🙏
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Oh yes, truly your poetry is moving. I’d love to read it here as well! I apologize for the influx of likes and comments! Haha I just really enjoy your writing! Love connecting with like minds like yours!😀🤗🤗
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Hahah! I am smiling. Thank you for loving the words so much.
And believe me, Steph, I feel the same way for you. We’re like minded people. 😃
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There is nothing deep like sea, and so are you❤️
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And, of course, the one who’s reading this. 😘
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Not intending to disturb your silence…
But this is nice… Sea within me🙂🙂
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You know there’s a thing with people when all they need to charge themselves is by being in solitude.
I guess, I’m one of them.
You think so Rashmi?
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You define are one of them. You not only recharge yourself with knowledge you derive from books, you use it to unlift people like me…
And you are improving lives… What better could you do ..
I definitely think so..
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To whomsoever we care and have our affection for, we always want to see them uplifted. You’re no less.
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I am glad
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🙂
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