शोर… हाँ तुम्हारी आवाज़ का शोर आज भी तो वैसे ही गूजँता हैं मेरे कानो में जैसे आधी रातों तक यूँ ही सुबह होने के इंतज़ार के साथ हमारी फोन पर बातें ख़त्म हुआ करती थी.. कितनी जूठी थी ना सब की सब।
किसने सोचा था की जिस किताब को इस बेताबी से पढ़े जा रहे थे उसके पन्ने शुरू होने के पहले ही ख़तम हो जायेंगे.. काश.. की तुम उस हार्डकवर बुक के कवर की तरह होती, तुम्हें बस सवारां होता.. बिन खोले.. बिन पढे बस निहारां होता।
बेशक आज भी तुम मुझसे दूर नहीं गयी हो, हां खो जरूर गयी हो भीड़ में कही की आने का नाम ही नहीं लेती…
याद आती हैं मेरी?
सुनो! नहीं आनी चाहिए, आखिर अब हम वो जो न रहे जो कभी होने वाले थे न…एक दूसरे के।
मगर, मेरी जान, कभी यह सोच कर उदास न होना की तुमने मुझे खोया हैं, तुम मेरी पहली मोहब्बत थी और भला पहली मोहब्बत को कोई कभी भूल पाया हैं क्या?
तुम आज भी बसर करती हो मेरे जहन में, कुछ इस तरह की तुम्हारे प्यार का बयां में जहान भर में करता फिरता हूँ, तुमसे इश्क़ करके सबसे कहता हूँ, तुम चाहे दूर हो आज मुझसे, मगर मेरी लिखावट में तुम सिमटी हुई हो, और हर पढ़ने वाला देता हैं सदा की तुम कितनी खुशकिस्मत हो की तुम्हे में मिला।
और मैं? मैं इन सबसे दूर कही तुम्हारी यादों में पड़ा..लिखता हुआ तुम्हारे होने का एह्साह मेरे पास कही… हाँ यही इश्क़ हैं जो सबको मुझसे हुआ, और मुझे हुआ तुमसे।
मेरी लिखावट से लोगों ने मोहब्बत
शायद इसलिए भी कि
क्योंकि…
उन तमाम प्यार के किस्सों में
आज भी जिक्र बस तुम्हारा होता हैं।
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Great… 👍
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Thank you, Kajal. ☺
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Waah,waah Bhaut khub Sumit…👌
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Thank you, Preeti. 🙂
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Bohotttt hi khubsoorat rachna! Dil ko chhu gayi aapki kavita. Ye panktiyaan kitni sundar hain.
“काश.. की तुम्हें उस हार्डकवर बुक के कवर की तरह होती, तुम्हें बस सवारां होता.. बिन खोले.. बिन बढे बस निहारां होता।” 😞♥️ Likhte rahiye ji.
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Hota Hain na? Jab Kisi nayi cheez ko late Hain to pehli Baar Wala experience. Bas pakde rahe. Dekhte rahe. Kuch bhi na kare Uske sath.
Aur ek din sab khul jata Hain.
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Haaan. Like glass ka showpiece. 🤣 Dekhte raho bas, ek din tuut jata wo girr ke.
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Exactly. 💔
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Meri jaan ka tukda comment kar ke khush kar deti… 😘
Thank you for always motivating, Chandu..
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Jaan ka tukda? Tukda hu bas? 😦 Meko tukda nai banna. 😛
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Humesha zidd na😂
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This was something else! Every word touched a nerve and struck a chord. Laga ki apna dil khol k rakh diya hai bas. Beautifully written, beautifully portrayed. Just when I have seen the best of your work, you go ahead and do this – leaves me dumbfounded. Take a bow Mr. Sumit 🙌🏼
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Just when I think* I have seen the best of your work….
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💖💖💖
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An open-hearted person, maybe that’s one of the reasons why I have just written the entire post in less than 8-10 min before leaving from my office last night.
I do that many of the times, and mostly, k don’t post them anywhere at all. After all, a few things are best kept secrets. But your view on this made me feel really happy. 🌼
Rukshi, thank you so much for your lovely appreciations. 🤗💕
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Heartfelt.
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Thanks!
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You have nailed it with such deepness and soberness, one could surely fall in love with you, this is something which everyone can feel it if this could be read by heart by them❤️
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You’re a sweetheart, Prachi. You’ve always been. Thank you. 🤗
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❤️😘
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Sumit, rulaoge kya? 💔
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Shreya, this is the most beautiful line ever said. ☺❤
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🤪🙈🙈
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Aapka dil bas khush karna chahte hain hum.. Aap padho to mast ho jao..
I’m glad that some of the bad things happened to me.. That made me go so deeper into the brokenness of love.
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Girte, sambhalte, … Aise hi tu aage badhte hai hum… Aap likhte raho, hum padhte rahenge… ❣️
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Bahut shukriya, aapke hausleafzahi ka. 🌺
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😊🥰
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Have a good night. 🙂
Dhyan rakhe apna.
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Good night. Take care!
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A one year old post, but I am sure, the feelings must be the same. “मेरी लिखावट से लोगों ने मोहब्बत
शायद इसलिए भी कि क्योंकि…उन तमाम प्यार के किस्सों में…आज भी जिक्र बस तुम्हारा होता हैं।” Waah! Acha matlab that is why your handwriting is so good. Got the connection! 😀
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Hahaha! Is it?
Aap bolte ho to man na padega. After all, I’ve an expert with me. 😋
And yes, kissa purana hain, Nanchi, magar dil ke bahut kareeb.
Hum writers ka bhi na bahut galat usool hain, agar kisi chiz par likhna hain na to usme ghus jayenge pure. Chahe wo aag ho, ya logon ka diya dhokha.
Aur fir jo nillega, wo hoga sona, jo hum likh ke bayaan karte hain.
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Aag se haath aur Dhokhe se Dil jalte hai janab, zara sambhal kar kijiye kaam.
Beshaq wo dard aapke likhne me bayan hota hai.
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Bas nahi nadani ki thi humne.. Kya hain ki dard ko hawa me likh kar betuka sa lag raha tha. Socha dard ko mehsus kare.. Tab uski qadar hogi, aur jab qadar hogi, to shabd niklenge nahi bahenge..
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Hey hey! Excellent work yet again.
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Hey, thanks a lot! 😃
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Oh my God, the way you ended it.
I’ll love to include lines in my next draft, if you permit…
It’s just beautiful
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I’d love to see that, Rashmi.
Go ahead. Being writers it’s our duty to encourage each other.
Thank you for your kind words 🥰
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I will soon do that and send you the link.
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Great.
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Bahut khubsurat
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Bahut shukriya, Ranu.
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