She can’t be yours
If you try to own her
If you’re loyal and lucky enough
She might surrender herself to you
Just make your intentions clear
Tell her what you want
Show her where you want to take her
Let her know what you’ve
always dreamt of
And she may gift you
something which you might
never forget in this lifetime.
Copyright © 2015-2020 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SOUNDS LIKE THE WISEST COURSE OF ATTITUDE AND ACTION 🙂
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It’s the reality, Jonathan. Isn’t it?
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Sure is! 🙂
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🙂
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Great..as always!
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Hey, Pritu.. 🙂
Glad to see you on the blog 😀
Thanks a lot haan for reading it.
Ha=ow are you doing?
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I just suddenly wanted to post a tiny piece in the middle of my exam schedules..😂😂😂😂😂 it’s getting really hectic! I’m rarely getting time.. anyway, the holidays r coming! Yayy!! I will get a lot of time to read your posts, I will post too. 😊😋
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Arre wah😻😻
That’s the biggest obstacles we have being a blogger to come randomly on WordPress and read and post. 😸😹
Btw what examination? 😅
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Semesters ☹️I am an engineering student..😢😭
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Arre to sad Kyun par. 😹
Galti sab se Hoti hain 😜
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Lol!! Hahaha!!! Apne bachhe ko arts kaun padhataa hai aaj kal… 😂 I mean.. my mom n dad..🤣
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Toh Kya kuch bhi padhaenge 😹
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Ab kya kare…😂😂 Leave it.. i gave an aptitude exam and i got 50% arts and 50% science suggestion..😂😂🤣🤣 hopless Condition i am.😂
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👌👌
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Thank you Preeti 🙂
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So lovely!
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Thank you so much Akanksha 🙂 ❤
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most welcome
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Carefully chosen words… Like it.
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Oops! I’m so sorry, Poonam.
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Sorry, that meant:
Thank you, Poonam.
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😊👍
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Thank you, Kajal. 🙂
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Beautiful as.always..
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Thanks a lot for your words, as motivating as always. 🙂
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😊😇😍
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Arre say something 🙈
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Hehhe
Love you! 😜😚
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Arre… Poetry pe bolne bola 🙈😹😻😗
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😬
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😂😂😂😂
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Actually nobody can.., but they can choose to be by our side and us in their hearts…
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Absolutely true. 🙂
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A little dark but that’s how I like it – beautiful as always!
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Hahah! I like how people genuinely like dark things. As they’re the only truth. 💕
Thanks Ben, for your kind words. I’m glad to know you liked it. 😃
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I think part of a relationship is ‘giving up’ something for something else or giving the other party something you previously had sole control over. At least that’s what I got from this and I believe it’s true 🙂
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The subtle touch of passion, love and desire…. liked it… 🙂
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Thanks a lot for reading it Maniparna.
Yes, it was in my mind while writing. I wanted to portrayed it from all the aspects. ☺
I’m happy to know you liked it 💕
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Welcome… 🙂
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Beautiful. I love it. So sexy and just beautiful.
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Yes she is enough to handle your scars,if you give your 100 percent to her, she is the one who is down to earth and love you the same way if you respect her, she will make you and destroy you❤
You are amazing mr.official…loveyou❤
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Your understanding of a woman is so beautiful that it’s touched my heart.:-)
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And what can be the best compliment for an opposite sex writer. 🙂 ❤
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Damn!!! She is so much me😧
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💝💝
That can be any girl who has a high self-esteem. And I’m delighted to know that you’re one of them who could relate. 💕
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Oh yes!
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💞🔥
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Hmmmm
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Somewhere down the line I feel like the words that you’ve penned down resonates with mine too. Feel free to check out my poetic ramblings. You can find me at
http://www.ayshamuhammed92.wordpress.com
I don’t mean to pry but you do beckon with your words, mister. Such a great blog. Sending you all the love ❤
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That’s so nice to know that you could relate with them, Ayesha. ♥
Surely, I’d love to read your ramblings. 🙂
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I’d love to hear from you. ❤
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🙂
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U r such a superb writer… ❤
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Amazing… Amazing… Amazing…. The reality framed into best of words. ❤️
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Thanks so much Bhavika.
You never forget to leave your wonderful words. ❤❤❤
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Emotions emoted so well❤️🌸
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Thanks so much Michelle. ❤❤❤❤
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Emotions emoted so well❤️🌸
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Bro this is true really
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Thanks so much for reading, Jitendra. 😃
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Well said👍
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Thanks a lot Shayra. 🙂
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Well said. Glad you touched upon the concept of “ownership”.
You have a nice blog here! I will be back again. 🙂
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Hey, thanks Sindhuja.
Thanks for stopping by and reading my work. Glad that you liked it. I’d be happy to have to back again. 🙂
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😘😍😍 superb, u have variants in writing as always
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Thank you Bhavyaaaaaa. ♡❤
That is because I have beautiful readers like you to support me in whatever I write. 😘
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😉😀🤗
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It’s true. If you love and respect women they will do anything and everything for you. Beautiful poem.
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On contrary, it’s also true that if your intentions are not clear towards her, she won’t give you anything.
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Trust is the key of positive relationships.
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If that’s broken from one side? Or maybe from both the sides then?
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Than relationship will be broken.
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True
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Amazing! I have praised you for your earlier write ups and i dont know what to say now. For a new blogger like me its an good lesson to take from. You write from the bottomest part of your heart and this makes each post more and more beautiful. Do visit my blog and please feel free to give suggestions.
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Thanks so kuch Anjali for the kindest words you have just said. It’s not always about the one who writes but also who reads it with a pure heart. And you’re surely one of them. ❤❤
And no writer is a new writer. Zee all are just learners. I’ll surely have a look. 🌼
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Its very touching.. And true she would surrender everything and against that revert she want loyality and… Just one.. Thing… But is very rare to find in todays generation… 💞💞💞💞💞.. But i love it… Seriosly too goo.d..😍😍😍
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Yes, it’s required for a man to understand what his girl wants amd if he gets succeeded in that, it’s love.
Thank you for reading, Mansi.
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That is so true, Sir. Nobody can be ours forcefully. Just like butterfly. We might run behind it for hours, but it doesn’t come to us, but if we leave it free, it might come and rest on our palm. 😻
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This is really well portrayed. Brilliant!
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There are really a few people who can actually understand this and live upto the same.
I’m so hlad you liked it, Riya.
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LOOVE this! Amazing writing.♥️
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Beautiful! 💖
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Hey, thanks Bhavya
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My pleasure!😃
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🤗
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Beautifully put Sumit ❣️
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Thank you, Shreya. ☺
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Most welcome ❣️
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If you’re loyal and lucky enough
She might surrender herself to you
You know women so well Sumit. No doubt you respect them in your work and I bet in reality too💛
You’re gem of a person.
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Hearing this from a woman herself take years to earn this. I appreciate that, Rashmi.
I’d love to give this credit to my mum as she’s always made me respect and love women for who they are and why are they so much important.
Growing up, I encountered with all kinda women across the globe and one thing which I found in them is, love.
They are love. Women can only seek love in return nothing else.
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The world will turn to be a better place if men around the globe start thinking alike you.
I have a certain liking towards people who listen to their moms.
You truly justify her upbringing.
The world needs people like you.
Give regards to your Mom from my side.
Much love to you and your Mom too💛💛🤗🤗
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Would you like to meet my mum here?
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I would love to
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https://sumitofficial.wordpress.com/2019/05/07/a-letter-to-my-mum-happy-birthday-mum/amp/
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I will get back to you on this. Let me get out of the this whole thing that I read. Let me overcome my emotions once and I’ll write to you.
Till then know one thing you are what you are because of your Mom and you are making her proud for sure💛
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Thank you for your words which will always remind me for what you’ve said.
You’ll know her better with my words when you’ll read them.
😇
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I have read it all Sumit. And I was sobbing when I was going through it. I am emotionally weak, it takes me time to get over something I connect to. I loved it, I loved the way you presented it. You say nah, that your words are your power. I think there is some positive energy that is working on you, to improve you with everything that you write.
You are a blessed soul. And you are making each and everyone you meet proud of the fact that they met you. I personally adore you as a human.
Much love to you💛💛
I respect you a lot🤗
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No. You’re wrong to say that you’re emotionally weak; rather you’re emotionally so strong that you sense the love that needs to be loved. And to love someone, one needs power. You are powerful to read my vulnerability and still there to love me for who I am.
Your words speak the truth undoubtedly. Thank you Rashmi for the uncountable love that you always share with me. I’m blessed to have you here.
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Let me not make any promises here. Buy you’ll find me here by your side always. I am fortunate to have met someone like you.
Sumit do I need to clear my side saying trust me I am not fawning you or trying to flirt…
Or that I genuinely respect you🙂🙂
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Absolutely not. Your genuine appreciations are far better than any flirtatious talks.
I see the depth on everything you say. Believe me, that’s more attractive for a man.
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Lovely 🙂
Thank God, I didn’t end up feeling any embarrassment.
Your replies are always comfortable
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I’m a man who loves to give people space. A lot of space, where they can crawl, run, and fly. You’re one of them. ✨
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Lucky one🙂
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☺
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And true to your words
Your Mom is divinely beautiful ❤️
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Thank you for saying that, Rashmi. 🤗
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Lovely 💕
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Hey, thanks Susanne. ☺
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Very true…. Love ❤ is built not coerced 😊
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Truly!
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