Because you don’t want to let someone
look inside you deeply,
For what’s going inside that mind
What’s wrong with that bruised heart.
The pain, the sadness which stays there
on the parched lips in the form of a constant smile,
Because you’re afraid
To let them read you through your eyes.
Eyes which speaks the truth with
Memories of your bad past,
Paper on which love was written once
Are scrambled out of frustration now.
The pages of your old diary
Carry a name which hurts you.
Still.
But you are over it now.
Over her.
Maybe?
You fall for the kind of silence
That makes you love sad endings.
The end.
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All Rights Reserved.
Ooooooh the shivers of pain it brings yet that scarred smile still fights to make its way to the surface…Yes I know that feeling like it only lies in my yester-evening….Yes it does.
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I’m glad that you could connect to the words after all, that’s what make a writer and reader get on one track.
Thank you so much.
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Anytime SumitOfficial.You are a blessed poet…..
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So kind of you to say. 🙏
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Anytime bro. 🤗🤗🤗💪💪
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Sensational
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So nice to hear it from you, Neha. Thank you for reading 🙏🙂
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😊❤
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It was sooo touching when the writer announced as if in sort of final tone, that he is over her.
And then the word, maybe.
.
Damn, this maybe is what fills the silence in between. Like a rope of hope that ties you to your past that you wish you could forget but you keep holding onto the knot.
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That’s the thing about love. Isn’t it?
That no matter how much you try to fool yourself by saying you’re over her, part of your heart screams “You’re not” and that’s how maybe comes into the picture.
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Truly, and the diary and all… Your writing was really aesthetic. 😊
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Thank you, my friend.
The journal writing has made me a writer day by day. A polished one.
This is my Day 458 that I’m constantly writing. And everyday there’s a new flow of energy that puts on the paper.
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That’s great! Even though I tried keeping a diary when my friends asked me to, and that too on my 17th birthday. I just wrote a page that night, just to keep my promise.
.
And to this day, that diary is with me, with all the pages blank but the first one.
.
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Maybe, today is the day you should start writing on it once again. Maybe?
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Truly loved it, especially that ending!!
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Thank you, Devika.
I had written this 3 months back but could not gather the guts to put them in front of the world I’m glad today I did. 🙂
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I am glad too.
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I’m happy to see a connection of in between the individual poems we have shared. Thank you for sharing that too.❤🙂
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So heartfelting, and I lost my word🦋
You are much talented🦋
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Your words mean a lot, my friend. 🙏
Thank you!
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Always my pleasure🦋thank you🦋
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💕
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Ek no yar….👌
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Thank you so much, Kajal. ❤🙂
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This is beautiful and very touching, Sirrr. Sometimes endings don’t matter huh, we just need to appreciate that it happened maybe! ♥
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Exactly. At times, it’s not about the endings but the way it’s been carried away till now.
Thank you, my little love.
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You have indeed all rights reserved to sad endings.
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That’s so beautiful way of complimenting. Thank you.
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Don’t get too happy about it or you might risk to lose your creative drive.
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Thanks for the advice!
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And sometimes we are afraid of people,
So that we abondoned ourselves in a different world,
Where no one can enter and break us again…
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Exactly. A moment of solitude where we don’t let anyone come in between what’s going inside us.
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Ap touched! ❤️
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*So
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Thanks a lot Vivek.
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Loved it.
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Thanks a lot for reading, Deepika.
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So well expressed..you have very beautifully putted into words.
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That’s because you have good vision to catch them. Thank you for reading. 🧡
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You fall for the kind of silence
That makes you love sad endings.
Maybe this is the reason I love sad endings.
Wow man👍
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Silence is always speechless. And so is the ending. You don’t communicate when you leave. It’s silent when you leave.
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Do we have a catch here?
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It’s you who can tell that
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Let’s not complicate.
I have a lot to say.
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I’m listening, go ahead.
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