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Temple kiss

With a gentle touch he held her face,
And a stroke that lift her chin up
Eyes full of despair.
Unable to even look up.
Hands spanning into the head,
Putting hair behind the ear;
With a warm kiss on her temple,
He heard everything which
she could not even tell.

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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      2. That’s such a sweet of you to say, but you know what Anushka. I was never into bragging my work by being a part of anthologies or to writing a book.

        It has not attracted me much till now, the reason could be the love that you already shower here that I don’t look for any other validation to my work.

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      3. This is so sweet Sumit..💙

        That’s why I say…your poetry is magical…. because you yourself is such a good person..

        I am glad I met you here…and got an opportunity to read your poetries…🤗💙

        I really admire your work.

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      4. I feel the same Anushka and we’ll make sure to make this place a beautiful and a long lasting platform to keep sharing the work, bond, and love that we have for each other.

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      5. Definitely…💙

        Always here to share, admire, care and protect each other…and most importantly love each other work… because that’s what keeps us motivated ..when our fellow bloggers appreciate our work and connect though…

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      6. Truly. Prolly, this is one of the reasons that even being in the era of Social Media and fake stuff all around, we tend to be old school and come here to post our work.

        WordPress has given us a platform where we can do that. It’s thousand times better than any Tinder or Facebook apps.

        Where connection are built on the basis of intellectual and intelligence. We don’t try to impress anyone with how we look or what we wear, but how we speak and stay gentle.

        And guess what, you’re one of the examples of those people. 🙂

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      7. Thank you so much Sumit…for saying this…
        Trust me..by saying this, somewhere you have unburden me…
        I have never been an admirer of social media things…infact my real life friends use to sarcastically say sometimes of me not being active on social media …
        I never want to be part of that fake world… were people are judged and liked by the way how they look…what they wear…or where they go..

        And this a place..where you can be a real you😊💙and I am glad…here I have met people who really understand this❤️

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      8. You always have us being your back, Anushka. You can always rely on us here and we love you for who you are and for what you write.

        Be true to yourself and the world will be yours.

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  9. He heard. What better it could be…
    It’s such a soothing post. I mean each description how he held her, how he cupped her face in his hands, how her eyes were full of despair….
    And most of all he heard it.
    What better she could ask….

    How gentle are the emotions here. I loved it🙂🙂

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    1. You know Rashmi, this was way too instant. Like every night, I was sitting beside the bed, opening my journal, looking at the pen, and wondered am I not going to write anything?

      And answer came out, hell yes! We are!

      And then the journey started with a kiss on the most beautiful part of a human body. Temple.

      I went with the flow and this is what came out. Guess what, you got into the depth of where I wanted you to.

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      1. I found it beautiful and I love how you give me those details which made you write it… I read it in one of comments that you wrote it in no time. That is you. You bring out the best in no time…
        I really enjoyed reading it …

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      7. Acha you know what Sumit. I woke up to a dream today and it is so alike to your content of today… I mean when I saw your post I was like this is what I also want to write after a dream…

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  14. Hey your words are too beautiful. Literally it is like visualising a scene. Just a little words but says a lot. You’re too good. Beautifully penned. Hope to get still many magical words like this from you. Stay safe and be happy always

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    1. Thank you Mitty. I’m glad you could feel them so well that you could imagine them too. It’s always a big thing for a writer. ☺

      I wish you the same. Stay healthy and safe at home.

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