With a gentle touch he held her face,
And a stroke that lift her chin up
Eyes full of despair.
Unable to even look up.
Hands spanning into the head,
Putting hair behind the ear;
With a warm kiss on her temple,
He heard everything which
she could not even tell.
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All Rights Reserved.
Lovely 💕💕
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It was written in less than 2 minutes just a few moments ago.
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Wow that’s brilliant 😍
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Thank you for your appreciation, A Curious Mind. 😍☺
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Haha you are welcome Sumit 🙏💓
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May you have a beautiful day ahead. Stay safe. 🙂
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You too!! 😊😊
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Intimately good…
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Thank you so much, Andrei. 😃
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Very good lines…
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Thank you for stopping by Ameet. 🙂
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Beautiful emotion! Wonderful and simple use of words. 😊👌
P.S: New Post is up! 😀
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Thank you very much Nanchi. Glad you loved it.
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You alright!? Seems not in a good mood?
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Is it so? Why do you think so? 🤷🏾♂
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Just felt so. Vibes!
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Agh! No, I just woke up na.
I want to sleep a bit more but have an office work so cannot.
I’m all good my friend. 😊
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Oh…good to know that everything is fine! 🙂
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This is so assuring❤️
I could feel every word of it …Sumit..
Your poetry is magical💙
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I’m happy for the fact that with the kind of intention ot was written, it could reach the same way to your heart. Thank you, Anushka. 💜❤
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It actually…👍💙
Why don’t you try writing your own poetry book…😀
I m learning a lot from u ..
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That’s such a sweet of you to say, but you know what Anushka. I was never into bragging my work by being a part of anthologies or to writing a book.
It has not attracted me much till now, the reason could be the love that you already shower here that I don’t look for any other validation to my work.
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This is so sweet Sumit..💙
That’s why I say…your poetry is magical…. because you yourself is such a good person..
I am glad I met you here…and got an opportunity to read your poetries…🤗💙
I really admire your work.
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I feel the same Anushka and we’ll make sure to make this place a beautiful and a long lasting platform to keep sharing the work, bond, and love that we have for each other.
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Definitely…💙
Always here to share, admire, care and protect each other…and most importantly love each other work… because that’s what keeps us motivated ..when our fellow bloggers appreciate our work and connect though…
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Truly. Prolly, this is one of the reasons that even being in the era of Social Media and fake stuff all around, we tend to be old school and come here to post our work.
WordPress has given us a platform where we can do that. It’s thousand times better than any Tinder or Facebook apps.
Where connection are built on the basis of intellectual and intelligence. We don’t try to impress anyone with how we look or what we wear, but how we speak and stay gentle.
And guess what, you’re one of the examples of those people. 🙂
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Thank you so much Sumit…for saying this…
Trust me..by saying this, somewhere you have unburden me…
I have never been an admirer of social media things…infact my real life friends use to sarcastically say sometimes of me not being active on social media …
I never want to be part of that fake world… were people are judged and liked by the way how they look…what they wear…or where they go..
And this a place..where you can be a real you😊💙and I am glad…here I have met people who really understand this❤️
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You always have us being your back, Anushka. You can always rely on us here and we love you for who you are and for what you write.
Be true to yourself and the world will be yours.
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Thank you so much Sumit for saying this🤗♥️
This means a lot me…really..!!
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I love this two words . Temple kiss
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Glad you did!
Between forehead and lips they’re completely ignored to be kissed.
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Splendid..💕😄
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Thank you so much. ❤🙂
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Wonderful!
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation, Harsh. 🙂
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He heard. What better it could be…
It’s such a soothing post. I mean each description how he held her, how he cupped her face in his hands, how her eyes were full of despair….
And most of all he heard it.
What better she could ask….
How gentle are the emotions here. I loved it🙂🙂
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You know Rashmi, this was way too instant. Like every night, I was sitting beside the bed, opening my journal, looking at the pen, and wondered am I not going to write anything?
And answer came out, hell yes! We are!
And then the journey started with a kiss on the most beautiful part of a human body. Temple.
I went with the flow and this is what came out. Guess what, you got into the depth of where I wanted you to.
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I found it beautiful and I love how you give me those details which made you write it… I read it in one of comments that you wrote it in no time. That is you. You bring out the best in no time…
I really enjoyed reading it …
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Quite an observant haan! Thank you for always interested in knowing the back story of each work. ☺
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You know some great mind said-
A writer is first an observer
😅
So yaa trying to imitate that in my life
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You’re not imitating, you’re already a pro now.
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I wish what you say comes true.
Even if it doesn’t, I have you…
It just rhymed😅
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Oh my my! Oh yes! It did.
See how wonderful you are Miss Awtani.
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Acha you know what Sumit. I woke up to a dream today and it is so alike to your content of today… I mean when I saw your post I was like this is what I also want to write after a dream…
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Are you serious? That’s so nice and strange. Did I come in that dream to steal your thoughts 😝
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Yaa isn’t it strange…
But Wise men think alike young man😅
Theme is same but context is completely different..
I am quite eager to post…
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Please. I’m extremely waiting for that to read.
Also, I’m working on the summary of my 12 books I read this year.
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Let’s make it instant then
And now I am eager to read the rest of your art
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Let’s start with yours!
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Here you go
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♥
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation, Ashish. 🙂
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Yes bro… You penned it beautifully 😊
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I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Really lovely post ❤️
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Thank you so much, Meetali❤
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Thanks a lot, my friend.
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Hey your words are too beautiful. Literally it is like visualising a scene. Just a little words but says a lot. You’re too good. Beautifully penned. Hope to get still many magical words like this from you. Stay safe and be happy always
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Thank you Mitty. I’m glad you could feel them so well that you could imagine them too. It’s always a big thing for a writer. ☺
I wish you the same. Stay healthy and safe at home.
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Yeah, but all the words can’t give us that imagination. It’s bcos of your words. Indeed thanks for that.
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I’m honoured with your love, Mitty.🙏😊
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Ha ha.. Big words I think so. Write more, will say good things often in the most humbled way
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I’m already on my way for that. When I have a reader like you, why would I not.
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He heard everything which she could not even tell…. This line just took my heart 💕 away
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That’s love right?
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Yes 😇….. I believe it is 😍
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