याद हैं। (दिल्ली की एक कहानी, मेरी जुबानी)

यह कहानी/कविता मैंने 2 साल पहले लिखी थी, जिसका आज तक कभी जिक्र नहीं हुआ…

(Earphones suggested)

उस सदी में जी मैंने तेरे साथ, वो कसम याद है,
मेरे इस दिल को तेरी सूरत कुछ इस कदर याद है।

हाथों में पकड़ा तेरे हाथों का एहसास है
कस कर तुमने हथेली को जो दिया था
वो भरोसा अब भी मुझे याद है।

लब से लब हमारे मिलने पर अाई थी जो वो मिठास है,
तुम्हारे गालों को अपने हाथों में थाम तुम्हें चूमना आज भी मुझे याद हैं।

सट कर, उस दीवार पर लग कर, मिटाई थी हमने कभी वो बेबाक सी प्यास है,
बदन को तेरे तराशते हुए खो जाना आज भी मुझे याद है।

डूबता रहा तेरे ख्यालों में क्या दिन, क्या रात है
की गहराई तेरी आंखों के समंदर कि आज भी मुझे याद हैं।

तेरे जाने से मानों थम सी गई हो ज़िन्दगी और बन गई उदास है,
दिल्ली में बिताई चार शामें तेरे नाम मुझे अपनी तमाम उम्र से कुछ ज्यादा याद हैं।

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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42 thoughts on “याद हैं। (दिल्ली की एक कहानी, मेरी जुबानी)”

  1. Sumit💛💛
    I wonder if it was real. You know when you recite it, it seems you are living those moments again.
    So much passion in your voice, the way it is in your love…
    From the beginning to the end
    I never wanted it to end..
    You would have kept reciting and I would have kept listening on and on…
    You are blessed with a beautiful voice.
    Okay I’ll tell you what for the first time ever I did not mind if it had an erotic touch in it..
    The last second stanza
    Kya din, kya raat☺️☺️

    Wow man
    2nd para and 2nd last para were the life of this poem…
    Would you like to listen more?

    I am not able to get over it… Give me my homework later for now I am into it completely….
    It is more than what I call beautiful 🙂🙂
    And for you 💛

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    1. Oh, Rashmi!
      Let me begin with how it started, for me when the gloomy night come, my art comes out in this form. As mentioned, it was written almost 2 years back at midnight.

      Beautiful things come out in the silence, after all. It was so closed to me that I never felt like sharing it. But I did today. Although, I had no plan to share on the blog, but when you asked, I did it without a single thought.

      About erotica? Well, I must appreciate your capacity which is increasing everyday to bear my work as it’s completely based upon humans and humans have everything from attraction to sex. I’m glad you did talk about it this time.

      Kya din kya raat! I’m smiling.

      Okay, Ma’am. Till midnight, you won’t be getting any prompt or suggestion, you can enjoy this as much as you like. Thank you, Rashmi. I’m extremely happy to listen from you. 🤗

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      1. I was waiting for your back-end story. And as expected you have your own days and own nights when you get the best of you.. and you kept awake till 4 for this nah, it was all worth. Your efforts and your dedication is visible in your art..

        And you see nowadays I am reading your work, I see you are tilted more towards this erotic stuff, I cannot ignore it as I respect you, I respect your art..
        I want to read everything that comes from you..
        I would love to see you smiling always. You know I’ve already heard it 6 times and then there will be many more times before sleeping..

        Thank you for being kind Sir. Let me enjoy my Sunday with a wonderful voice and keep it with me always 🙂🙂

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      2. You’re always interested in the backstory, Rashmi. That makes you more genuine. And yes, I had recorded it since days but this morning till 4 I created this with subtitles. If you say you loved it, it’s surely worthy. I’m assured of that.

        I’m really proud to see such a beautiful gestures by you.

        I’m constantly smiling because of your words. Enjoy, Ma’am. 🤗

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    1. How beautiful calculation you’ve shown and accurate too.

      The harder we love, the more passion generates, the deeper we go, difficult is the divorce.

      And at last, what comes out is an art also known as deadly combination. 💞

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  2. This is so beautiful and passionate!! Just loved it. You should write and share more poems in Hindi if you feel to.
    Surely waiting for your next Hindi poem, if you post it!😃❤️

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      1. Well I hardly go out of my room so physically I am becoming a panda😂 and my brain isn’t working anymore😂
        But so far so good.
        I hope you too are taking good care of yourself and your family.

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      2. Hahahah! This quarantine will end up making us fat and lazy.
        But at least, you’re writing that itself is a brain exercise. Keep that always up.

        And yes, we’re doing good here. Thanks for asking. 🙂

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      3. Thank you for offering your help. You are very kind.🙂
        I hope to continue writing. Because of the lockdown I started writing more again. I hope I can continue when things get back to normal.

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  3. Let me start this now…

    After hearing it after 4 times…now I guess…I am ready to tell you how much I loved this.

    This is so fascinating Sumit. I am still not able to get over it. And your voice is so peaceful yet mystical.
    The first two stanza… hitted me somewhere…I got reminder of few things…
    But, the way u depicted each and every thing, it’s angelic.
    And the last stanza….was the soul of this poetry💙 I loved it from tip to toe. The feeling that you have potrayed in here is esoteric.
    I don’t have any right to ask you…if their is any inspiration behind this poem. But, if it is…then I would say..just two word….damn lucky!

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    1. Anushka, 4 times? Seriously? 😃
      Wow.

      Thanks to Rashmi for motivating me to post here too. I’m genuinely so joyful that I did and here I am listening to the views by you.

      I’m absolutely loving how you loved it so much.

      Umm.. As I have written, it’s been written 2 years back and some or the other things go disturbed and it just came out in the flow.

      I had no intention to make it poetic but when I recorded it, I kinda relive those moments too.

      You can understand if an artist love someone he puts everything in his art to make the best in the world. Maybe, what you heard is a part of that. 💞

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      1. So…thank you to Rashmi then. If she had not motivated you to post such a wonderful poem…we would have missed reading such an amazing creation.

        I can understand your feelings Sumit…somewhere…
        And that’s true..when a artist loves somebody…they put their everything to make the best of it.
        This is amazing.💙

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  4. There is so much to say but I am not finding the right words. As always it’s making my heart throb but this time the smile on my face is a waaaaaayyyyyyyy bigger. Thought your english ones are good but hindi ones are great. I think my mind has been blown away with this……………And listening to it constantly makes me feel serene….
    Lovely words encrypted to describe the best of your emotions…💕👍

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    1. Your words hit the heart directly with such descriptive review. It’s always good to wake up with a smile, but to read something after waking up, is a bliss.

      I’m really glad that it made you smile wide. And I pray and wish that you keep on smiling. 🙂

      English ones are mostly shared, now after listening to your views, I guess I need to put up more of my Hindi work + Recitals too. ☺

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      1. It’s my pleasure that it made you happy, after all you deserve it after putting so much effort in it……

        Ohhhh!!!! That’s a wonderful wish and I hope the same for me as well as you. 💕

        Yahh!!!! I think so tooo…….😄😄

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  5. Waah waah waah! So heart touching. ♥️ Very beautifully penned, Sir. I’m glad you’re publishing those hidden poems from your box too. 😁 Delhi ko toh kaise bhuloge aap huh? It’s just impossible. 🤭

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