Deluge

If I could find the way
Then I would put the
Lava of my heart and
Burn our surroundings.
The world that keeps us away.
I’d cross mountains,
I’d swim thousand kilometre oceans,
I’d disperse the atoms of
My body until it break into
Million fucking pieces.
I’d get deluged in my own
Self until I find the
Way that could make you
understand how my unspoken
words are screaming inside,
‘I love you’.

-SumitOfficial


Like every other night, I was roaming on the top of my house tonight. I usually spend time there in the silence of nowhere along with the dark night. Tonight, the moon was running under the dark clouds, and so was my heart. I wanted to write something destructive since a long time but wasn’t getting the feel but I did finally.

In this chaotic prose, the antagonist is a pure heart who’s keeping the love inside him for years and decades. He is so engrossed in the way of finding roads to express himself.

He’s even ready to break himself entirely just to prove his love. For how much he loves!

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Published by: SumitOfficial

Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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64 thoughts on “Deluge”

  1. Another masterpiece by you Sumit💙
    The intensity of this poetry is reaching were it has to…
    Each and every line full of sentiments.
    I just love the concept of ‘lava’ here..
    This is so alluring.

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    1. Thank you so much, Anushka.
      I guess when we want to love someone there’s something that’s always boiling in our heart for them in the form of love, that lave which is always erupting out.

      That form is so pure that can make a person love another so much. Glad you loved the metaphors here. 💞

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      1. Very true🤗💙
        I love everything u write…your passion about love…I see…you explain these things really well.

        I am in love with your poetry Sumit💙

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      2. Sure Sumit.
        I am working on one of my post. It might take little time…
        But soon😊
        Thank you for showing interest in my work. You have motivated me alot by saying this.

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  2. You’d be a bit surprised to know that I did not in the least found it destruction…
    It was so soothing to know that someone is ready to stake whatever he has to be with someone. And how he is screaming inside-
    The imagery of mountains and thousand kilometre oceans, and most of all the lava of my heart which will burn the surroundings.
    I mean it was all wonderful. Shows the intensity of lover…
    It shows how he can cross all the barriers to reach where his heart is…
    Wonderful 👍

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    1. It was self destructive nah maybe? No?
      I always find myself as a passionate lover, when it comes to love anything or anyone I put my everything.

      And I guess that what makes us human, isn’t it Rashmi? Human beings are created to love and make this world a better place.

      Happy to know that you loved the similes, Rashmi. Thank you very much. ☺

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      1. Don’t cross check your own thought. If you found it destructive, it was destructive. I had my own interpretations.
        I loved it. I love how passionate you are about love..
        Yes we are here to make world a better place and here we chose words to do that..

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      2. Good morning Sumit ✨
        Before I revert you back on my post or your post, I wanted to wish you a happy morning.
        I read everything you wrote back, I’ll revert you back soon.
        And your poem is beautiful like your smile✨✨
        I wish you a beautiful day ahead✨
        I wish you many more smiles ✨✨

        I made this comment on my blog, but I couldn’t find it later. In case it went missing, I thought of dropping it here.

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      3. Good morning, Rashmi! With a beautiful day, I wish you have a wonderful day.

        And take your time, I’m roaming outside right now. I was being crazy at home. But yes, it feels good to look at the people on the streets, trees, and a few essential opened shops.

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      4. Haha! Cheat day! I didn’t. I woke up by 10:30 and then I got a call that there’s a chance to do with our neighbor’s car for some work and I could not stop myself going out, as one of my colleagues cum friends stays here only, so I’m gonna meet and then go home.

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      5. Acha Sumit also cheats!

        Anyways this way you’ll get some fresh air, you’ll meet your friend also but don’t stay out for long, it’s already risky in Mumbai.
        Take care of yourself ✨

        I’ll see you around ✨

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      6. Yes, my girl!

        I’m inside the car with a mask on.
        I’ve seen a beggar girl who wanted to drink water and I gave her. I have also clicked her picture.

        How we can sit at home with all safety and precautions but there are people who are still concerned about their food than any virus. It hurts to see, Rashmi.

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      7. I understand.
        Thus your mumma gave this world a gift. You are there to help nah!
        You helping as many as you can..

        I am always proud of you✨

        Keep sanitising and keep wearing mask.

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      8. Nah! Actually my yesterday’s lecture was pending for upload. I struggled really to upload it and I was successful today morning.
        I don’t have it for today!

        As for now, I am speaking to you and kinda liking it.

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      9. Thankfully it’s uploading now. Good to know.
        I am also happy that you’re not having anything related to work.
        Having you here is always good. ☺

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  3. wow! Loved it! for some reason this poem reminded me of the song “Cold Water” ❤️Love that song!!!
    “If you feel you are sinking, i will jump right over in to cold cold water for you, although time may take us in to different places, i will still be patient with you!!! and I want you to know, I won’t let go.. ” Love love

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      1. I know right!! By the way I also don’t listen to english songs much… just the famous ones 😛 or from few singers. I love Selena Gomez and Taylor swift, so I listen to their songs. Other than them Justin Beiber (because have listened to him while growing up) lol

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      2. Of course, Baby was one of the all time favorite songs of our generation. Right?

        Also, I’ve heard a few of the songs my friend suggested me, Billie Ellish’s Bad Guy and all.

        Although, one of my all time favorite songs is Photograph by Ed Sheeran.

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