A few moment’s silence before
You start with soothing music.
You are like that favorite song
of mine which I’d keep on playing.
Listening to it by keeping
it on a repeat mode.
The cadence make me enjoy
Until I take a pause and go slow.
Just like your words.
I can listen to it all night long.
I’m pretty much sure that
nothing could go wrong
Just like the beat of your music,
There’s only one person
To whom you belong.
Baby, let’s get lost into the
Flow of music and keep it on.
I want only to play the music
That reminds me of you as
…my favorite song.
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You are like that favorite song of mine which I’d keep playing.
Beautiful beautiful ❤❤
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Oh Annu! Thank you. So glad that you liked it. 💞
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Beautiful ❣️
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Hey, Curious Mind. Thanks a lot. 😃
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Beautifully penned 👍🏻
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Hey, thanks a lot for reading, Anu.
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Very few people can be described like that. Beautifully written, Sumit. I loved this one.
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That’s really kind of you to say, Shweta. When we feel something deeply, it comes out in any way. ☺
Thank you for your appreciation. 💞
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So, here you are ..with another inspiration and so much of compassion in your favourite song.
This is so fascinating Sumit✨
The way you have connected it with a song…and all the things that we do when we like any particular song a lot and listen to it on a repeat. You can listen it all day, all night without even having a thought.
I just loved it.
And the last lines, which says..
I want only to play the music
That reminds me of you as
my favorite song.
This is so good. Actually..it’s relatable..see..when we listen any song…and we think of any particular people.
The last lines was so good.💙
You are amazing… Sumit..!!
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And with that, here you are Anushka, with as usual your wonderful point of views filled with love.
You got it so right, because songs are our heart’s unheard desires which comes out when we listen to it. Right? The more we listen the more we feel as if it’s composed for us.
And this way we keep on repeating it. Again and again. I remember once in my office (I created a culture in my office to play songs in the break time on loud speakers🙈) I was playing a particular song for so many times that they end up getting bored.
But, for me it was still the same. That’s why I thought of comparing the love with a song. Unconditional love. 💞
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You know what Sumit… sometimes..your comment seems so poetic💙
And that office thing.. hilarious..I too sometimes do that.. playing the same song again n again..and people around me get irritated..but I don’t 😁 because of that bond with the song may be.
You are amazing again 💙
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Hahah! That shows how crazy we are na! 😂
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Without a doubt🤚😉
Do check out my today’s post…have posted something for my favorite blogger friends here…and you are one of them💙
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Oh my my! Really? Would you believe since yesterday I checked twice if you have posted anything and I found none.
Let me run now
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I can..like you said to me…you wanted to read something from me.
And thank you for saying this Sumit💙I hope u’ll like it
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You can’t even imagine how happy you made me with that. I left a comment for you there.
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Sooo romantic and cute. 😍 I loved the way it flowed effortlessly, just like my favourite song, haha. 🥳 Rhymes bhi kitni mast hain. I love rhythmic wale poems, and this is definitely one of them. 💙
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And you know how bad I was in making those rhymes.. Thanks to special people who make me rhyme better now. 🤭
Thank you so much Chandudi for loving it. 🤗
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Who are these special people? 😿 Nobody tells me anything. Meko bhi sikhaao good rhymes.
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Look who’s saying this 😹🙈
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🙄🙄
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🙈
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Good morning Dear one✨
As usual you came up with something fantastic and I am really late in viewing the same.
Sumit I could so connect to it. It seemed yesterday only I was listening to songs on Terrace and this thought came in my mind. And as usual whatever is on my mind, I always find it here on my favorite platform and to be more precise on the blog of my favorite blogger.
Everything everyline soothed me.
Favourite lines-
Song I would listen again and again on repeat mode.
One person to whom you belong
Let’s get lost and listen to my favorite song..
All beautiful and all relatable.
It is a very simple idea and everyone must be feeling it. But you know what it’s you who could frame it so well. And if you notice it was rhyming somewhere… Long, wrong, song… Not bad haa!
You made my morning, it’s such a beautiful post to begin my day with…
Your blogs have So much love to offer…
All in all it comes up to be one of my favorite posts of yours✨
I could relate to it to the core☺️
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Come on, you’re never late. You’re on time, to be precise, earlier than usual.
Should I say I was in your head, on the terrace. Took inspiration already. 🤗
Thank you for always telling what you like the most.
Your favourite lines is also beautiful.
Agh! You caught me red-handed haan! 🙈
I tried to give them a rhyme but I know it wasn’t as flawless as yours, but more of a forceful act of putting them. But important thing is, you got it, Rashmi.
That’s because I am lucky enough to have you here on this sunny day. I’m lucky nah!
Yay! Favourite of yours! And that makes me smile. ☺
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Only if people don’t find me trying on to you, you’re always in my head.
When I was on Terrace I was listening to music only, and I was thinking about you, as if conversing to you through lyrics.
Off lately they are favorite because they come from you..
No it wasn’t anything forceful , it actually seem to fit in there. You made it to fit in there. And I am proud of you.✨
I am lucky to have you in this beautiful morning to make it even more beautiful with your words that are all dipped in love and warmth.
Undoubtedly you are my most favorite ✨✨
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I’m such a blessed one to be in a person’s head like you, inside your thoughts, having your precious time with me. Even without being there physically.
When it comes that it wasn’t forceful from a Rhyming Queen like you, then I got to believe it even with closed eyes.
It’s never the day but feelings and people make it the best, whom we love and care for, and we’re here on this journey with that compassion. May the love that you’ve read keep it in you throughout the day, and for a lifetime. Keep smiling, Rashmi.
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You’re worth all love dear one 🤗
Have a wonderful morning.
Let me quickly complete my work now and see you on my blog.. I gotta read your love and care in the form of comment a few more times before I actually respond back.
But that would take time.
See you by the noon.
Before you miss me, I’ll be there.
Keep around ✨
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I wanna share something
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I’m all ears 👀
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But that’s eyes😅
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Hahaha! I’m listening while eyes are being conscious too.
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Umm.. Means?
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You received any comment by me on any of my posts?
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No. I didn’t at least till now.
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Beautiful!!❤️
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Thanks a lot, Harsh. 😃
I’m sure sitting at home food is accompanied by good music.
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Oh yes!! Good music is basically a need now.
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Absolutely. 😃
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Beautiful, beautiful poem.
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So glad you loved it, Moushmi. 😃
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An unwritten song ~ written in someones heart ~ repeat after the life ~
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Damn, Anuruddhika! You are a poetess who sums up everything in a few words.
Lovely.
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Boom!
I finally completed writing it.
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Abhi I read Anushka’s post for us and then it reminded me of you. And look who’s here with her completed task.
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Sumit listen it’s done. But you gotta help me with title
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Umm! Okay, let’s brainstorm something.
What’s in your head?
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My mind is not working.
It’s upset since my morning post😅
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Morning post? Which one?
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I mean the one I Posted last night..
Okay I’ll tell you a cheesy line that came to me right now-
It said my mind isn’t working it says you always seek help from your heart nah, then go take its help and thus I came to you ..
Only if you get this😅
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You did right. Let it be with me here.
First that heart, and then the latter.
Now come to the point before your mum knocks the door and asks you to sleep.
What about “My Top 10 Favorites” Or related to that?
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It’s cool. Complete the same.
My top 10 favourite YouTube channels? Or leave it till favourite only..
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” My Top 10 Favorite YouTube Channels of All Time”
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Done. I’ll post it Abhi?
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I’m toh more than happy to read it. 🤷🏾♂️
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Okay I’ll post it in 5 min.
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Today you’ll be able to read the comments before you sleep no?
How are you feeling now
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I was intending to do that.
I will see your comment before sleeping. I’ll sleep better you know…
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And guess what, I was writing something already (and you know where I could be right now) but I stopped that and went to read yours.
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You could be beside your bed holding journal in hand.
And you don’t want anyone in between.
But I popped up. And you would visit it anyway.
Am I right?
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Well, I was on the bed but then what I’m writing today is a gratitude note and for that I needed silence. Pin drop silence. And I came to terrace.
Would I visit? Well, I’ve already gone through it thoroughly, and left something for you. Go and check, Cuteheart.
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Okay I’ll not disturb you now. I’ll just bid you a very peaceful good night ✨
I am excited to read it.
I’ll read you tomorrow.
Sleep well✨
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So relatable 😄
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I’m glad to read that, Dakshali.
Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure, I have read your so beautifully penned thoughts ☺️
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You’re being really kind to say that. I hope and wish that you read other ones and find them good too. 🙂
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Yes, of course..why not..and btw you write so good stuffs😄
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Oh did you read? I’m honoured by your appreciation, Dakshali.
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Yeah! ..but it’s my pleasure to read your so wonderfully encrypted words to such a beautiful poem.
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I’d love to have your words on the favorite ones of yours. You seem to have a deep sense of poetry. I liked that.
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A very good morning to my Wildflower✨
I was up early but I did not want to disturb your sleep. You know I could imagine you sleeping peacefully..
Have a happy day ahead ✨
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Hello, Sunshine!
You could see? I did sleep for a long as it was a Sunday.
I’ll be waiting for your words on your gift.
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I just began to write on it.
And you know what Sumit, I was so expecting you to address me the way you just did.
Sending you smiles✨
You’ll find me on your post soon✨
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You wanted, and I did it. Nothing matters.
*Smiles back at you*
See you around. ✨
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Good night Sumit ✨
I’ll see you tomorrow morning!
Sleep on time, okay!
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I am just done writing a little piece.
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How your little pieces have so much in them!
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Because the one who sees through them has a lot in her heart.
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May be!
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You sleep on time once done playing and having great time with family.
Good night, Bougainville. ✨
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You are the last one I text before sleeping, I don’t play after that, I sleep.
I was exhausted yesterday so slept early.. but then somehow I managed to read what you wrote at night only
It’s beautiful!
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Oh is it? The reason for your exhaustion must be the work you completed yesterday.
I wish I could tell you not to stress much to your eyes by reading at night before sleep. Read in the morning nah. But I wish I could tell, and you’d implement that. Haha!
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You know it’s not just once that I read, I read and re read.
It’s never happened before. I don’t let anyone come in between my sleep. I sleep and get up straight in the morning. I don’t use phone as well.
But now it’s different. I don’t know how many times I get up in between night and then read you.
I don’t know what I search in between those words.
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You’re sure your mum is not gonna kill me if she finds me making you awake at night?
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If we care for someone, we only focus on them first. The rest is anyway hurt.
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I got it!
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Wow that poem was simply- wonderful, I am feeling at a loss for words right now. Pls check out a poem I wrote if you have time-
https://stabbedpages.wordpress.com/2020/05/17/love/
I am open to constructive criticism .
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Thanks a lot, Manya.
Surely, I’ll check it out.
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Geeeeee Thanks
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