See You Around!

I went into her life when
She was numb,
People took her for granted
But she was not dumb.

She had her choice of things
And everything’s proper time,
She is marvelously wonderful
That she does wonder with rhymes.

Fake, double-faced, irresponsible
People she hates the most,
She is so much flexible
That she’s changed the timing of her posts.

I wish, I could write more about the care,
Affection, and your innocence,
Your heart is as pure as gold
That we’re always open for discussion.

This is nothing but an appreciation
Poetry to tell I’m grateful for the rhyme,
I know there’s nothing new I’m going to
Hear from you, as you want me to shine.

Out of all the chaos in the world
Your voice has the most beautiful sound,
I’ll meet you in my next poem
till then ‘See you around’.

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Published by: SumitOfficial

Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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94 thoughts on “See You Around!”

    1. That’s kind of you to name her this beautiful, Arshnoor.
      But let me tell you the work could be mine, but the magic of rhymes are not. It’s her talent that I’ve got as a gift.

      She’s just wonderful and this is a dedication post.

      But I’m glad you loved it. 🙂

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      1. Hahah! You’re smart! And really kind of you to guess her. She’s a sweetheart soul. And I’ve been taught to be grateful for things/people who mean most for you, she’s one of them.

        I really hope that whomsoever you’ve guessed like it too. Fingers crossed. 🙂🤞

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      1. This is not just about the words, but a kind heart who reads and appreciate the efforts. That’s you.

        I wish you have a productive smiling day. ☀

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  1. Good morning Sumit 💛
    Coming to the post, so a dedication to my Bonbon🙈..
    What could I say?
    She is amazing and so are you.

    I told you na…i have fallen in love with your poetry, and it’s growing by each passing day.
    I really liked the way…how you described the people, she don’t like.
    Her care and affection is just like her…so pure and genuine.
    And the last two line was a lit Sumit.
    It was the soul of this poem, that you still want to write more for her.
    Amazing 💙
    Much love to you.

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    1. Good morning, Anushka! Happy to see you again.
      And how are you all guessing it like so obvious that it’s for your Bonbon? 🤷🏾‍♂️

      You always say that to make me smile for how you love them so much. And to be honest, I wanted to write more about it for she’s taught me this rhyming game so well, thoughts were just coming so flawlessly that I could not control being grateful for. I really hope she likes this little present.

      You’re amazing to say that.
      Much more love Anushka.

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      1. I know my bff Sumit😉
        You guys are rocking.
        She will definitely like this, infact she will love it.
        And I am loving this rhyming game of you both.
        It’s really beautiful.💙

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  2. He came into my life
    When I was numb
    People took me for granted
    But I wasn’t dumb

    He came and I saw
    A lot of difference in me
    He did it with all love
    The love you can see

    He told me once
    He’ll write about me
    But he said it’ll take time
    And here he is with a rhyme

    Ohhh Sumit✨✨
    I fall short of words here. This poem has casted a spell on me that I don’t want to break at any cost. I am just smiling and smiling. Okay wait let me be honest, I am blushing 🙈

    You know how much I love your work, I read it like crazy. Till now as many poems you have written were all generic, people would never make out for whom it’s written. Only you knew the inspiration behind.
    But today with this poem you seem to break your own record, half your readers are able to guess for whom it’s written.
    I feel on cloud 9 with this poem. I am not really able to tell you what this means to me✨✨
    I have read it for like 10 times since past night before coming here and commenting on it.
    The way you began with it, the way you know her, the way you know what she likes and dislikes. You know her really well.

    And the best of all you wanted to write more about it. Her innocence, her personality you covered everything in this poem full of gratitude. You showed her,her importance.

    Now let’s talk about your rhyme.
    It was near to perfect.
    You know why I don’t say perfect. Because you still are a learner.
    And I know soon you’ll make it to perfection. It’s you afterall….

    The way it ended on a positive note-
    See you in my next poem
    Till then see you around

    This took my heart💛
    Because we say bye to meet again, there is a hope to see each other once again with a new day.

    Rating- 10 on 10

    I loved it to the core
    And I wish I could say more💛

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    1. Oh Miss Awtani! Look the appreciation with a poem itself. Isn’t it the most beautiful poetic way to appreciate someone?

      You’re cent percent right. I asked a few of them that how come you’re sure about the inspiration behind it. And they were pretty sure about it. Huh, smart people! 💞

      Also, I loved the fact that you said near to perfect as I know it was just a 8th standard rhyming which I expressed here, but you asked me to be better. That makes you unique that you want to read better and better. The pro level of rhymes. ☺

      More than the ratings, I’m glad the gratitude has reached where it should, and I’m extremely happy for that. ✨

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      1. Let’s make you more happy.
        I’ll see you with my next post…
        See you around ✨

        Don’t underestimate my favorites blogger, you don’t know what wonders this rhyme did…

        Till then keep smiling 🙂
        It does suit you✨

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      2. Oh, I shouldn’t? Haha! As you say, Ma’am.

        This is inspiring that you get your work already in your head. Quite impressive and makes me proud.

        Waiting for the same to read from you. Keep smiling and see you around, Rashmi. 🙂

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  3. I don’t know why…!! But this feels incomplete… to me…!!! Don’t take it personal…!! But you play with words very well…!!! Its awesome

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    1. Those are really big words. I’m grateful for them that you think my words could inspire you in any way. 🙂

      I’m looking forward to read your work. Keep writing, Ava.

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