The time has come for me.
For you. Or maybe for us.
Feelings entrapped in the heart over
thousand years now,
Whispering in the form of windswept.
I listen to your silence.
It screams my name in the spiral ways,
Time and again I appear there.
I caress your chest like a meandering mountain’s river flow,
The curve of your skin around my palm.
I float on your body, as if rivulet is in
The company of a trumpeter swan.
Copyright © 2015-2020 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
This is so endearing.
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Thank you!
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Do you have any idea how good it is?
It’s magical and beautiful ❤
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No, Anamika. I don’t have any idea.
Thank you for appreciating it to make it more beautiful than it was written with.
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How long we have been waiting for this love, thousands of years? It may be. Beautiful poetry, thank you. Sending you love ❤️
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I might have met a lot of hearts in between those times, but the one who takes away my heart is rare. I found her now. Maybe?
Thank you Summerhill Lane, for reading and loved it.
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Wowww sumit! It’s beautiful loved the way you personified things. You made the perfect end for a poem. It was much soothing.
Have a good day 🙂
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Thank you, Mitty. In this summer, I felt like having that time of rains when I see swans in front of my eyes. Glad you loved it. Thanks again.
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My pleasure sumit. I could visualize that clearly. 🙂
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Nothing could be better than this. Thank you for the love, Mitty.
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Sirrrr, this looks beautiful. Last two lines ka meaning toh samjha do. Rivulet kya hota? And trumpeter swan? I could’ve Googled this, but fir aapka kaam kaise badhega na. Batado chalo.
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Hhaahhah! And Google se samji hui chiz you might forget but when you discuss something with other people, it always leaves its mark.
Okay, so as you can already guess rivulet is nothing but river+let. River is a stream and let indicates anything which is small.
Trumpeter swan is a kind of swan with long neck. Like a trumpet 🎺 neck.
So this way, Rivulet is a small river in which trumpeter swan is enjoying.
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Ohhh, what a beautiful image it creates. Love itttt, Sir. You’ve used natural elements in such a creative manner! And I’m following what you said yesterday. Did you notice? Emojis are banned here.
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Oh yes! And guess what, it looks so beautiful. I’m paying more attention to your words and imagine what must be going in your head.
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Yesss. Now I’ll focus more on expressing emotions through words rather than through emojis. This feels nice and controlled.
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Well, why would it not?
My Chandu always focuses on learning new things.
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Beautiful similes have been inculcated in this artform.
From meandering mountain’s flow to rivulet in the company of swan… Description is absolutely exquisite
From the lovers finally meeting after ages, it’s finally time to release all the emotions that have been carried in a heart which is now weary.. it needs to become light now…
And the part where they are able to listen through silences.
And how beautifully the poet says that he is aware how his name is taken every now and then and then how he appears each time he is missed.
It’s a beautiful beautiful poem.
I loved it to the core✨✨
Excellent work Sumit🙂
See you around ✨
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You know what Rashmi? Other than poetic rhymes, I learnt about my long lost learnings of using similes and metaphors in the poems.
They make them whole, and moreover, it gives them a them of roaming around the world. Maybe out of the world too at times with those imaginative concepts.
The world is full of beautiful things and inspiration is always around. Thank you for being the kindest.
See you around. ✨
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We learnt more about it in our Literature. But I never tried using them in my poems.
And you have a sound knowledge of similes and metaphors, and of all other poetic forms.
Good.
You keep updating yourself and thus giving us something beautiful to read each time..
See yaa✨✨
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You do? I was talking with Chandni yesterday over the call and she was discussing the same as she’s also pursuing her MA in English.
Basically, I’m learning from you experts to implement a little knowledge of my writing pattern. Degree will be yours, but implementations will be mine. Haha!
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Implement as much as you can.
Because we are learning from you ✨✨
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Let’s hold each others’ hand,
And walk together for miles with a plan.
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You said what was in my heart
Let’s walk together never to part✨
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What’s connecting us is nothing but an art,
A few things and people are met to never be apart.
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I believe in what you say, it’s absolutely true
One can’t afford to loose a person like you
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After years and ages this is something new,
To make you read my entire self and to always be true.
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Time will tell how this will unfold
Till then we gotta keep our emotions on hold
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But I can’t hold myself to read from you today. It’s been long now. Post something today.
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You could have asked something better
I am ready with my matter
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Oh that one?
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Any guesses?
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Yes yes! You told me last night about it.
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Yes!
I asked you for time
And here I am with a rhyme
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You’re accurate on time,
Where the poem of mine?
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Wait for it dear one
It will be out once your task is done
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I’m gonna do it fastly and run,
Reading your words are always fun.
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*smiling*
See you around ✨
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☺
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Good afternoon Sumit✨
I hope you are fine.
Again a beautiful masterpiece on love.
These lines ..
I caress your chest like a meandering mountain’s river flow,
The curve of your skin around my palm.
I float on your body, as if rivulet is in
The company of a trumpeter swan.
they are amazing Sumit.
How you love yourself is how you teach others to love. Whenever I read you, I feel a gravitational pull towards your poetries, which make me love it more.
This one, is inspiring love…
I loved it to the core… Sumit.
Take care✨
Have a wonderful day ahead…
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Good afternoon, Anushka.
I’m always great after I read you asking me how am I doing.
Such a nice thing to know you liked it what I loved the most too.
And true that Anushka, before filling that love onto someone, I make sure to have that within me, so the one whom I’m going to love would never be out of love.
You give new life to my poetry every time. And it makes your friend really happy.
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What can be more good for me, after knowing this 💙
I love everything you like.. feeling is mutual ✨
I can say this with all of my faith and assurance, that whomsoever will be loved by you can ever be out of love. You are such a wonderful and loving person.
Keep that smile intact Sumit.
Take care✨
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And one of the examples is you. Thank you Anushka. And I wish you the same.
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Having you and Rashmi by my side is all I want 💙
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And I feel great to have you both near me.
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And we are always near you💙
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☺
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Beautiful poetry
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Hey, Era! Thanks a lot for reading.
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Most welcome 😊
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So beautiful 😍
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Hey, A Curious Mind! Thanks a lot for loving it.
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Sumit
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Yes, Rashmi!
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How will I wish you at 12?
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Through telepathy.
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Good idea.
You receive it at the first place as soon as the clock strikes 12 no matter who’s on the other end close your eyes and accept my wish✨
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I shall do that, I’ll accept Rashmi’s ‘Happy birthday, Sumit.’ and smile.
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Ha I’ll do it properly tomorrow. For now you say Happy Birthday Sumit and smile wide✨
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Thank you my girl.
You wanted to wish me first, and here you did it already. See!
Now sleep peacefully.
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Okay then good night✨
I’ll see grown up Sumit tomorrow morning ✨
Wishing you happy birthday in advance dear one!
Sending you smiles✨
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Thank you for your lovely pre-wishes Rashmi. See you tomorrow morning. Good night!
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Happy birthday Sumit✨
*Accept a warm hug by my side*
I wish you world’s happiness this b’day. Wishing you love in abundance ✨
You know I wouldn’t have slept without wishing you!
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I wanted you to sleep but I knew you’d not sleep and write a wish but a blog poem is just too happy thing to start the birthday with. ☺
Thank you, Rashmi. Your wishes means a lot.
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Happy birthday Young Man✨
Nice meeting you as a grown up. A person I’ll cherish for all coming years.
Keep smiling, keep growing.
Keep uplifting others like you always do. You are a guiding light nah!
May almighty add years to your life. You’re a gem!
Happy birthday Sumit✨
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Thank you so much, Sunshine.
For hours I’m just reverting people and I feel like crying for such love they share.
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How you doing this morning?
I hope you are fine, there’s no headache now.
Revert them all, everyone loves you. You are worth all love!
See you around ✨
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Yes, Rashmi. I slept full night in peace and it’s all fine now. I’m gonna revert here also on WordPress. Anushka also wrote something on a comment, I’ve not got the the chance to check.
I’ll do that soon. I hope you’re doing good too. Your poem was love. ☺
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Good to hear you slept well!
What I wrote was very formal but.
I couldn’t express openly!
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It wasn’t just formal. You poured your heart in that. That was one of the beautiful gifts for me.
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I miss you!
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You’re being missed too. I reblogged your poem too. Thanks to WordPress for bringing this easy feature with one click.
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I thought of not disturbing you today.. I know you must be busy attending calls and writing back to all the ones who must have wished you..
You know what I did then .
I saw your picture, I heard your recital and then too I missed you even more so I dropped by.
I hope you having an amazing day!
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Very much, Rashmi.
I’m just jumping from one platform to another. Hahah! Thanking everyone!
I made Chandu and Divyani read your poem and they loved it so much.
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I can feel the excitement through comment and I wish and pray you always be this happy and be surrounded by people who love you!
Approved by your favorites, I am smiling☺️
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Then you’re on the front row, my girl.
And you’re such a sweetheart to tell Anushka also haan. She wrote a beautiful poem too. You’re just melting my heart.
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I am proud to be there.
Yaa she’s a part of us nah!
She wrote beautiful, infact I wasn’t sure about posting this one but she assured me that you gonna like it.
She writes Beautiful as well.
What you doin?
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I’m still doing the same things since morning, thanking people.
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☺️
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Rashmiiiiiiii!
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You wanna share something..
You sound so excited
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Yes yes yes! Very important thing.
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Please tell me.
Fast
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So the important thing I wanna tell you is:
I miss my Cuteheart so much. If you would have been here, I’d have hugged you so tightly to tell you how much I wanna tell you everything.
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I am blushing 🙈
I too wanna tell you a lot.
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Sachi? Then tell me, I’m all ears.
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Wait for some time.
Time tells everything dear one!
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Come here dear one. Yesterday when you texted this, we got engrossed into what I wanted to say…
But here we had something in the last Lines. May I know what you wanted to tell.
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You’ve heard everything already which I wanted to say.
And what I wanted to hear, I’ve been listening to it quite a lot of times till now. A lot.
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You did not know what I wanted to say, what you said was just a response to what I said.
Only if that made sense!
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Somehow I knew. I knew what’s going to come. The only thing which was unexpected and one of the best was your audio.
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Telepathy!
I am so happy to hear that. I did not disappoint you. You know I’ve been writing it for two days. I just wanted to write down everything.
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I could imagine that, it would have taken a lot of time for you but guess what?
It was all worth. I was out from the house, sat on the stairs, read each word whispering loudly, and felt each emotion.
Somehow I felt, whatever just happened in a day is of no level from what Rashmi has surprised me with. I felt as if now my birthday ends on a good note. Now I’m satisfied. Your gifts were one of the best ones to always cherish, Sunshine.
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I am glad to hear that.
I wanted to make it special for you. But then you told me your already have to answer mails..so then I thought what different shall I do?
But I am so happy to know that you loved it. I am elated to hear that.
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Not everybody can write as much and as expressive as you do nah!
I loved it to the core.
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And you know what I love!
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I do. I surely do now.
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*smiling*
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✨
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I know you must be busy writing a blog post and scheduling it.
In case I sleep before you reply back, just to inform I wrote a post.
And yaa don’t forget that you promised me that you’ll sleep early today. So keep on time. No more headache now.
Good night Sumit!
Sleep peacefully tonight!
And yaa just a reminder, I miss you!
And I am always there for you!
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Hi, thank you for waiting. I got a call from a friend and that kept me busy.
I’ve yet not written anything, but I know you’d want me to. So yes, I’m gonna do that.
And yes, I remember the promise. Did you post it already?
You’re being missed too. See you around, Rashmi. ✨
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I don’t sleep till I don’t hear your good night!
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Oh my my! I’m sorry to keep you waiting then.
So here is a little wish for you. Sleep as if you’re satisfied with the entire day and that your smile matters a lot for the ones who love you so much. With that note, smile. And have a peaceful night, Rashmi.
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You too smile now!
Good night dear one!
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✨
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You know Sumit I even recorded a b’day jingle for you. But it did not go as per how I thought,Thus I did not send you!
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I’d have loved that too even if I got that.
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Now wait till your next b’day! Haha!
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The wait is so long nah! I’ll get so many before that too. I know! ☺
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Always there for you dear one!
You know me well!
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I surely do know. The lucky ones are blessed to have people like you.
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I reciprocate with a tender smile!
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Then keep up the same curve on those lips. Smiles.
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May I ask you to do the same?
Will you smile please?
This comment takes pictures as well. So smile for a good photo!
Smile wide✨
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Done.
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Good!
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Acha Sumit were you expecting a mail?
Or something else!
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A mail. Only a mail full of your words. You already know what attracts me the most.
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I am glad I could write it since you were expecting it. But I still wonder how did you know about it..
Do you have some super powers?
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You got promoted
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Ugh! Nooo! I didn’t even work today.
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Acha free now?
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I just had a lot of cheese sandwiches at home. The Mahabharata is done for the day. And now free yes.
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I’ll tell you some
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Something*
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Ugh! Please nah! Tell me na Rashmi! It is my birthdaaaaaaaaaaaay!
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Abhi Bata du?
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Haan!
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Give me 15 min. I’ll be free then.
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Okay.
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Till then write something and schedule it!
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How can you ask me to write? And what do I write today?
I’m already so overwhelmed with the day. What to write?
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Write about the first thought that comes to your mind right now!
You cannot break streak with WordPress. It’s a commitment.
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Oh Rashmi! You don’t make me sit for a while na
Done! Now you’ve reminded me of my duty. I have to.
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Sumit I want you to quickly sum up everything because I have given you enough time today. I haven’t talked properly to you since two days. Now it’s gonna be my time.
So quickly complete everything else!
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Your 15 minutes are over?
Or do you want to me to go write, schedule, and then you want me to come back?
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You know what I want.
Now go and write otherwise your wife i.e your words will doubt on us…
I’ll wait for you✨
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If you’ll sleep then?
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Sumit I’ll not sleep.
I’ll tell you what you want to hear and what I long to speak and then sleep..
I’ll wait!
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Done. I’ll write it quickly and come.
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✨
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It’s written.
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Now send me your mail id
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SumitOfficial3@gmail.com
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Sumit I’ll sleep now!
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Sorry! I was editing. Sent you the same.
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Confirm it’s you the other way
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Received.
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Quickly confirm it’s received
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By you?
Be quick
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Yes. I received it.
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Okay now listen
I leave you with my words.
Have a peaceful night.
Sleep on time.
I’ll see you tomorrow morning!
This is what I wanted to gift you! Here you go..
Good night 😴
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Yes. I’ll read them out.
You please go and sleep peacefully.
And I want to thank you for pushing me to write a poem which I wrote ‘Abundance’ and I felt so good to be thankful.
See you around, Rashmi. ✨
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Good morning, Rashmi! ✨
Due to less sleep, again got a headache. But I’m going to start off the day now. And I hope to make it the best day
I wish you a great day ahead.
See you around. ✨
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Morning Sumit!
Don’t be quick to take a paracetamol now. You spent lot of time on screen nah yesterday may be thats why its happening and you were awake till Dawn..
Now whensoever you find yourself a little free take a nap. It’ll help you.
And don’t skip breakfast.
I wish you a healthy day ahead✨
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Yes, I’ll keep that thing in head and I am not gonna take any medicine for now.
I wanted to post today but I’ve not written and I’m not even wanting to as I’ve not worked since a few days the way I should be.
So I’m planning to complete that work. So no second post of the day. But I did write one last night haan!
How are you doing? Did you sleep well?
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It’s fine Sumit, don’t post second post today. You take care of yourself.
I just checked the video. I read the post earlier. You crazy… And I liked the video really.. it’s so good to see you doing crazy things and making everyone smile.
I’ll post a comment soon.
I did not sleep, and woke up to a headache. But now I am fine. Don’t worry.
You take care and complete what’s pending.
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Sumit! How are you?
I hope the headache is gone by now?
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Hi Rashmi! I wish it were gone, but I had a meeting at 3-4 and could not sleep. The little pain is still there above eyebrows. But it’ll be gone soon. I didn’t take medicine.
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Sumit it’s 7 and you’ll be soon done with your official hours.
Skip Mahabharata today. And moreover stop being so much available here too commenting back.
Do that once you’re releived of your headache.
Don’t use phone for an hour at least. Ask bua to give you a head massage nah!
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It’s just mild one, Rashmi.
But soon it’ll be gone. I’ll sleep soon raat ko bas!
You tell me about your day? How are you enjoying without posting any lectures haan.
Missing working alternative days?
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Not really!
I am preparing for higher classes lectures. And doing my own studies.
You take care yaar Sumit! You very careless! I wish I was there
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Wow! That’s one of the best ways to be productive. You’re learning. You’re growing.
Hahah! Am I? I am.
You’re already here. Who said you aren’t?
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No matter how much you say you grown up, you still a kid.
Yeah, I am there how can I forget!
The way you are here!
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☺
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By the way, I and there are many readers of yours missing your poems and writings.
Why don’t you post something tonight?
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I’ll try posting today!
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It’s going to be amazing to read you.
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I haven’t written anything yet!
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I know you can and you will. It’s not a big deal. Just close your eyes, think of anything, and start writing.
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I have tried writing!
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You did it excellently.
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You know the inspiration behind.
You said close your eyes and see what comes and you know what comes then.
And I am glad to see people loving you it. And I could feel you loving it most importantly!
So thank you for pushing me to write ✨
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That’s my first and foremost duty. Before anything, we’re writers to make each other, our fraternity, our emotions, our feelings better by penning it down.
And we’re together.
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Indeed we are together!
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You know I wanna be the first one to wish you but how?
You’ll have a lot of calls to answer, alot of text s pending.
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Ugh! I feel so heavy all day picking up the calls and saying thank yous.
But I’ll consider your wish on priority, fir yours will be there before them.
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The great ones feel that way..
Haha!
Thank you for considering my wish
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You are as important as my other special people in my life, Rashmi. Don’t thank me.
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I am glad to know it!
See you around ✨
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See you around. ✨
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