Barren Land!

And then there’d come

a day when all my words

would lay on your back,

making it my reality for

everything they want to do.

To be engraved in your

soul through my lips.

I want to make a tattoo

below your neck,

to fill the barren land

with my presence on it.

Forever.


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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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59 thoughts on “Barren Land!”

  1. Let’s not get into the words. I found this poem cute.

    Sumit is working on something else than erotica for really long now.
    I connect to the words been said here….

    The best of all
    ” To be engraved in your soul through my lips”
    And the ending which had a promise of forever…

    I liked it✨

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    1. What more I can expect if you could connect with them. I’m happy.
      And I wanna get into the depth of Erotic ones that which is going in my head and I hope it comes out soon so I can share here.

      Your favorite ones are beautiful. See you around, Rashmi.

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  2. Good to read erotica from you after a while.
    And what to say I already told you, no one makes this so beautiful and divine as you do.
    The desires of a lover are beautifully described through metaphors and a lot of passions.
    Loved it

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    1. Oh did you miss them Anamika?
      You could have WhatsApped me, I’d post it sooner.
      Yes, I remember you telling me always that it doesn’t sound filthy or dirty but it comes out like a magic.

      Because, I find sex is an art form which is gifted by the Almighty. Filth is in people’s mind to only see it as a taboo.

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      1. Oh, yes I did miss them because this is something I see as your unique style of writing.
        And faith and dirt come from someone who doesn’t know how to treat his lady, they just know to objectify woman that shows up in write-ups, but the way your muse is treated in your write-ups, lusting over her and treating her like a Goddess goes hand in hand and that’s what makes it divine.

        I have never seen your erotica objectifying woman even in the intense stuff may be because personally you are the man who treats women around her like a Goddess and reflects in your art.

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      2. I just said what I have seen over years, Sumit as a reader, as a fellow writer and somewhere on a personal level too ❤🤗.
        You are amazing with your words and your women including all the lovely soul who reads you regularly ❤.

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  3. Beautiful as always!!!
    Awesome lines….
    I want to make a tattoo

    below your neck,

    to fill the barren land

    with my presence on it.

    Like

  4. Hey Sumit 💙
    Sorry for being late.

    This is divinely beautiful. You never fail to find love in every way. It is full of affection, romance, passion. And these lines..
    To be engraved in your
    soul through my lips.

    So fascinating Sumit✨
    I loved it..!!

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    1. You’re never late, Anushka.
      As long as you come, it’s always great to see.
      You loved it? Oh, thank you, Anushka. Mainly the thought was to make love with the things which are always ignored by others. Barren land.

      And then here you are appreciating the love.

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  5. Okay so this is for the very first time I am commenting on a blog ever in my life… I am glad I came across your poems Sumit.. I never ever had read such intense poems… I just get lost in them.. and as I had said I will for sure comment one day on your blog.. yay!! And that day is🤔🤔.. It’s today!! ☺️ Over to the poem.. your poems have ‘A promise of a lifetime’ that I guess every woman desires no matter what age she is or what circumstances through she has been or going through.. that FOREVER love feelings.. although it may seem unrealistic but it does exist.. Thank you for writing such beautiful poems..

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    1. I had thought you’d comment one day but who knew it would be today. I’d just like to thank you for always connecting with my words. They’re nothing but your own reality that one sees in themselves.

      You’ve always been a great reader and listening from you today made me smile wide. Thank you so much for all the appreciations, Anu. 🙂

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      1. I still remember the day I said to you I am not good with words.. I don’t know how to write or express something.. I was hesitant but here I am today.. a changed person… yeah!! my own reality.. but words are yours.. ☺️

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