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Astound (NSFW)

The hue of her

Existence,

Becoming deeper with

each minute together.

Peeling it off,

Layer by layer.

Sliding it down,

Slow but leisurely.

Discovering all the shades,

Of her pure soul.

Astound by her surrender

Towards me.

I hear my name with each

Moan of hers.

The desire that let

Me fall for this,

I touch and devour

Everything for once and all.

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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57 thoughts on “Astound (NSFW)”

  2. It’s beautiful ✨
    Each and every line that has been said is so easy to understand and accept at the same time. Everything is so pure in this.

    “Discovering all the shades”
    “Astound by her surrender”

    It’s like Exuberance of youthful love and innocence.

    The best of all is poet is able to hear his name with each moan…
    And also the line which said it gets deeper with each minute together….

    I liked it to the core✨

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    1. You know the best part about you, Rashmi?

      You always find the best from whatever you read. No matter for which context it is written for you’ll extract which suits with your thought process and it’s amazing.

      After all, a writer never writes for one particular emotion but he writes everything and then leave it to their readers to take the meaning out of it.

      And here you are doing the best justice, isn’t it? ✨

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      1. No, I did not know the best part about me..
        But yaa agree to what you just said
        We as writers derive our inspiration from our surroundings, people connect to it on their own level.
        We might not write it on a personal level, but people connect as per what they going through…

        And you justify everything you write.
        Let readers take out their own meaning if this is what that comforts them..
        Our purpose is to make them smile and connect..
        Isn’t it?
        Good job Sumit
        I am always a proud reader✨

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  5. OMG! Sir, you’re killing ittt! WordPress is on fire today, haha. Your writing seems the most powerful and striking when you write in your natural zone, the erotic and sensual poems zone. Yesterday, one of your followers said something and I totally agree with her on the fact that your sensual poems never appear to be vulgar or anywhere near that line. The way you present your desires for her in such a delicate and romantically charged way, haha. I can’t stop admiring. 🌟 I reallly like the beginning lines here. ‘The hues of her existence’- what an enrapturing phrase.

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    1. That’s really kind of you to consider my work in non-sexual but sensual works. My motive is never to defame anything or anyone, it’s just I actually like to give my power to the one who deserves everything. And on that moment, I become an artist and observe as a third person.

      And when we reach that level, the only thing which comes out is love and respect. And sex is never a taboo for me. The more I raise my voice the better you all can listen and when we look deeply it’s in the purest form.

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  8. Hey sumit,
    You are making erotica as beautiful to the extent. These lines
    Discovering all the shades
    Of her pure soul.
    I loved it. This shows the depth of passion.

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  9. As they spend time together, the muse unfolds herself and he reaches to her soul through her body or maybe even before the surrender is the trust and the devouring her beauty her soul and body all at once.
    So passionately beautiful and an actual intimacy
    Loved it

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    1. Correct, Anamika.
      To be honest, it’s never the body but her scars which he opens up while unbuttoning her.
      And her surrender is nothing but the permission she gives him for doing that.

      Thanks for loving it.

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  10. Damn..!!
    This is so…so beautiful Sumit.
    I am amazed.
    So, the poet is on with his liveliness of imagination in the erotic art.
    I am loving this Sumit.

    The ebullience of high spirited love and sparking passion is beautiful. I can feel this in each and every line.
    Result of which is making the poet hear his name in every moan of her.
    This is amazing✨

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    1. Anushka! Hi!
      Haha! I’ve always been known for my eroticas everywhere and I’m all set to show some more of these works with amazing people like you.

      I’ve tried different things too. But for the time being, we’ll explore this more. What say Anushka?

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