Palliate My Pain!

Come here,
Palliate my pain.
Inject your calmness
Into my chaos,
Make my blood
Flow faster
In this body
Touch me until you
Feel my breath
With yours
Take me to
The safest place
Hug me till I fall
Asleep. Forever.
Ramble your hands
On my hair and
Make me feel lost.
All over again.
Claim me as yours,
And make this
Scattered mind sustain.

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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63 thoughts on “Palliate My Pain!”

  1. Hey sumit,
    Just now I commented that I enjoy reading your post. Here comes another one from you.
    I loved it you crafted this with so much care and love. Longing of chaotic mind for love. It’s amazing as always.

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  2. I don’t know why I feel like you wrote thing when you were high. 🤣 I once had bhaang and it had the same wffect on me. Such chaotic and messy thoughts! Like we’re trying to make sense of things, or trying to find something to hold onto between all the changing things. Like finding peace within chaos. I loved this poem toooo much.

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  3. It is so cute a poem. How poet is innocently asking her to come and be with him. All the emotions expressed here are so raw.

    This is so easy to interpret. I liked everything about this poem.
    The way he asks her to inject calmness into his chaos, the way he asks her to play with his hair.

    How he wants to be lost in her arms and he there all along and how he wishes to sleep as if he is longing for that sleep since ages. And that only she can satisfy that.

    The best of all Claim me yours. The poet is ready to be of his beloved forever.

    I really really appreciate your efforts. How in such a simple poetry you depicted thousands of emotions..
    I loved it to the core!

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    1. A cute girl appreciating the cute poem. I knew there’d be no one than you who’d love and appreciate this one so much. And here you are.

      At times, the best thing come when we close our eyes and open it. And in between whatever happens, is known as Poetry.

      Like

      1. I totally agree to you. But sometimes it takes a lot of time to happen. Sometimes poetry takes time. But I think if it comes without effort it’s beautiful than the ones in which we ponder for hours.

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