I love that heart
The way it feels
My uncured bruises
Are now being healed.
The moment I look up
In the cerulean sky
To leave you here alone
In this lifetime
It’s going to be the
Most difficult bye
I can sense the way
you look at the moon
And the heartbeats of yours
fluctuates like sea tides.
I hope and I know there’s
A forest inside that mind,
You’ll find me in there
To always know who’s behind.
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All Rights Reserved.
Deep and lovely penned words! 😊
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Glad you loved it, Darell.
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Another lovely poem!
“the most difficult bye”? Are you sure it’s correct? Bye?
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To leave you alone, when I’m gone. When I’ll be dead. It’s gonna be most difficult bye is what I meant.
Mmm..You think there should be something else?
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Yea, okay! Makes sense now.
I thought something was missing.
This is itself a beautiful poem.
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Ah! I see! Thank you for stopping by, Devika. I’m glad you love it.
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Always!:)
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Lovely and deep!!
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Hey, thanks a lot for reading, Harsh.
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The moment I look up
In the cerulean sky
To leave you here alone
In this lifetime
It’s going to be the
Most difficult bye
These lines…….melted my heart away indeed. What a beautiful tribute to those left behind. Lovely and amazing as usual.💖😊
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Thank you Arshnoor. You always extract a beautiful meaning out of the poem. You’re amazing. Thank you for loving it.
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This is amazing !
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Hey, thanks a lot, Silent Pen.
Glad you liked it.
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How lovely
love the way it unfolds
from the way that heart feels my bruises to I know there is a forest behind that mind.
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Truly, Anamika.
I’m glad you loved it. Thanks for reading it.
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❤❤
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Beautiful poem as usual 😊😊
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Hey, thanks for reading and loving it, Era.
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☺☺😊
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I had a wonderful read today. What a magic you’re doing with your words sumit. I loved the title more today cerulean, this word giving more and more depth perceptions for me. You narrated the break up of two souls with such a grace and emotional words.
And the heart beats of yours
Fluctuates like sea tides
I hope and I know there’s
A forest inside that mind,
You’ll find me in there.
What to say these line are amazing..
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Is it so? It seems you loved the title more than the poem.
I’m happy for way.
And listening to your perspective is always great, Mitty.
Thank you for loving it so much.
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I loved your poem too. But today your title captivates me lot.
My perspective is like cerulean sky here the good bye was more clear and depth as well.The two hearts need to accept that partition completely with calm and serenity. Obviously it must be painful but no other way, that should be done.
The strongest emotion is when we submerge us in a worse situation our heart tends to feel a numb expression like certain calm in deeper grief. So I could feel your poem in this way Sumit. That’s why today I might attracted to your title more. Somehow your title justified this poem.
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I’m just speechless for how wonderfully you have perceived everything.
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Is this relatable?
You may have something in your mind while writing this right.
This was my perception 🙂
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Either it matches with the same or not, I don’t care. What I care is for how my readers are feeling. And how you described is marvellous.
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There you’re kind hearted sumit. This made me to say all views 😊
Stay happy.
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🙂
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Such soothing and reassuring words. I loved the imagery and similes that you used in this poem. Bruises, cerulean sky, heartbeats like sea tides, moon, forest, OMG! It’s like a carefully plucked and arranged bouquet of nature. 😍
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Hahahah! Beautiful words in a single poem. I’m implementing a lot of things na Chandu.
Are you loving it all?
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I certainly am. Please continue to write and grow everyday. 🥳
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Pakka Chandu. Mil kar we’ll do more.
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Lovely lines as usual ❤️
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Thanks a lot for reading and loving it, little Mermaid.
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Hey!
You seem to enhance your reader’s vocabulary through your posts. I never knew deep blue is known as Cerulean! But now I know!
Talking about poem, as always it’s very soothing to read and understand the nature through your words. At times your poem give an inkling of end of existence, which is a bit saddening. You know it!
Otherwise it’s always a beautiful read. In last how you said there’s a forest inside and you should know who’s behind. It made the poem take a turn from chaos to calm…
I liked it!
Good work Sumit!
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Hah! Rather I should say, I’m improving mine and whatever I have, I always share and so did the words.
I’m glad you loved the word.
Yes, it is a mixture of softness and pain both. It depends on the mood that you’re reading it. It’ll make you more of what you feel.
Forest is my love. You know that. A tree is love, and forest is a bunch of love.
Thank you for loving it, Rashmi. ✨
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I agree to what you said, it does depend on reader’s mentality to derive the meaning as per his or her state.
I know how much love you hold for nature in your heart.. no wait you do not hold you share it with readers and it’s always beautiful to see!
Anytime ✨
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Always. Hain na. ✨
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Lovely ❤….. Your words are pure magic 😇
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More than my words, the reader has a magic in her heart to feel it.
Thank you, Komal.
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Aap kahin pe bhi shabdon se khelne me chuukte nahi hain…. 🥰🥰
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Words are my life, they’re my wife.
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You have a very special wife then 😆 😇
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Very loving one! Always in my head, always ready to pen down, always ready to share the love.
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Very true. 😍💓…. I can feel it 😂
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Hah! Thank you, Komal.
You’re sweet.
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And you are free 😆😆😆 every time to clear my silly doubts or to talk with me… I guess you daily receive a lot of messages…. But you still take out time to reply to everyone…. That’s really 😊 very sweet and loving❤️
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Always there. 🙂
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Me too😇….. But there a bit less what U can learn from me than i can from you 🌹
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That’s wrong. We all teach each other something or the other. For instance, I thought I was always kind. But look at you, you’re kinder. I gotta learn that from you. See!
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Now you are making me blush 😊 …. But thanks…. And what I learned from blogging community….. Is love and support….. Here everyone has been so kind and gentle to my stupid queries (example you and Rashmi didi)…. That I feel as we all are A family…. And we all actually are…. But without seeing or talking in person… That makes it A bit difficult….. But you all are amazing😍…. To come over all materialistic things…. And to make others feel around you special and important 😍😍
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Your Rashmi didi and I are always there for you. Always be happy. And keep writing.
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Do you and Rashmi didi know each other personally….. I mean besides blogging?
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A few connections are made somewhere else, but you meet at a particular point of time.
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Aap mujhe seeedhe seedhe kuch kyu ni batate 😆😆….. Chalo koi ni….
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Hahah! Go and sleep now, Komal.
Wait for my next post tomorrow. Good night!
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Okay ☺
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I have written 2 thank you notes…. A hindi poem and one English one….. Till I write more….. You can read them.. 😇
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Surely, I’ll read them.
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No even in the comments 😆😊
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Haha!
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Beautiful and deep💓💓
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Thank you for reading, A Curious Mind.
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Beautiful combination of words !!! You are amazing sir !!!
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Thank you for reading and loving it, Anurag.
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It’s my pleasure.😊
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