Underneath

I’m the one
That you need
I’m the hunger
That speaks
Inside my heart
A lot of seeds
That grows, smiles
And trying out to meet.
I’m the one
that you need
To your heart beat
I wanna meet.
You’re not alone
Over there to sit
I’ve always loved
Your craziness and wit.
You’re the picture
That I wanna click.
I care for you now
Here I admit.
The sensation that
Goes around and itch.
Out of so many things
There’s only a bit I revealed,
But you’re someone
I always wanna be with.
On some nights,
While my head rests on your lap,
Your hands on my head
And heart underneath.

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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46 thoughts on “Underneath”

  1. I am sure you were not trying to rhyme in this. You needed to let it flow today.

    “It’s unrhythemic like heartbeat, sometimes high, at times low.
    But it did go best with the flow”

    This poem of yours becomes my favorite today. I loved each bit of it.
    Most importantly how without a second thought he says I accept it today. And then how innocently it is said there’s less that is revealed but how it said everything.

    There is an ecstasy in the last stanza. How beautiful it will be o lie on lap and be loved throughout…!

    Sumit! This is WOW!
    In such compressed sentences, the poet seem to say a lot!

    I loved it to the core!

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    1. I was actually blabbering. Would you believe me? There was nothing in my head but was just going with the flow.

      Maybe everything came out so effortlessly that it became an art piece.

      You love it, Rashmi. I’m glad to know that. I can clearly sense how much you loved it. Thank you for such love. ✨

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      1. I’ll believe you for sure!

        But see now you can get the best pieces through blabbering also.
        You have come a long way Sumit!

        I am proud of you really!
        You could sense how much I loved it, I really did!

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  2. Awww! Look at you! You’ve changed so much in the past few days. Your rhymes, huh. So effortless. Please tell me how are you achieving such perfection. I’m loving it. 🤠
    Kitni pyaari sweet si poem likhi.

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  3. Hey sumit,
    This poem of yours is so effortless but very much beautiful. Like when the poet write his heart thoughts without any make over will also be beautiful.
    You did magic in this poem by dipping it in lot of love.
    Wish you to have this much love in your life forever.

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