Sparkling eyes
Those pouty lips
Beauty from head to toe
On top of it, those thick hips

That naive giggle
Cheerful smile
I wanna keep looking at you
Because that’s always worthwhile

A walk under the moon
Or sundown hue
Every moment I spend
Is better with you

Lay down with me
Here on my chest,
My hand knows how
Your hair needs to be caressed

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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50 thoughts on “Effervescent”

  1. I don’t know whether to appreciate or to wonder. How beautiful is this!
    Lay down with me
    Here in my chest,
    My hand knows how
    Your hair needs to be caressed.
    I loved it.. 😊

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      1. Yeah sumit, sometimes it would happen. Our heart would emit beautiful words with less effort and that particular work will be the best art like this.


  2. This is beautiful again.
    Sumit you’re turning towards soft love nowadays.
    Everything that’s written here is so smooth like the way your love is!

    I liked each and every description.
    And look at you,you are pro at rhyming now. How effortlessly you doing it now!

    2nd and 4th stanza are my favorite ones. Not line but whole stanzas.

    It was a pleasure reading it!
    I am proud of you!

    See you around ✨

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    1. This has always been there in my writing schedule. I never stick myself with one particular genre of writing.

      But yes, it needs to come from within, and I’m glad I can feel and write on it. Thanks to my muse.

      Please don’t tell me I’m a pro, the teacher is always you. And my ma’am is the best.

      Let me read which ones are your favorite because you know how forgetful I am.

      See you around! ✨


  3. Wow..!!

    Another beautiful love poem.
    Sumit…you know what.. unintentionally or intentionally you are teaching us how to love….and more than that you are writing all what a woman wants from her man.

    And when you say ..lay down on my chest…my hands know how your hairs need to be caressed. This line is humming in my head. It’s so beautiful.

    It’s a treat and a pleasure to read your poems Sumit.
    This is enchanting ✨

    Take care Sumit.
    Have a beautiful day.


    1. I am no one to teach how to love, Anushka! Especially being a man, we can never teach how to love. It is you, women, who teach us how to love and to be loved.

      I am just trying to pour my heart for the one who teaches us need more than that.

      Thank you for loving it, Anushka!


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