I was as hard as rock

But your gentle touch

destroyed my existence

My volcanic rock

Turned molten on my valley.

Your eye sight

Encroaching my body,

And I’m breaking in pieces

And turning into shambles.

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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36 thoughts on “Shambles”

  1. Hi sumit,
    I got to read this wonderful work in this morning. And this is full of overwhelming love. I enjoyed reading it. These lines
    My volcanic rock
    Turned molten on my valley
    hit my heart hardly.
    Have a good day😊

    Liked by 2 people

  2. So much is said in a few lines.
    I truly liked it.

    How you always do it, please help me with the same, the similes, the metaphor. Mostly the choice of words. How creatively the poet calls himself a hard Rock and how the touch of beloved is said to be gentle.

    It’s a cute one!
    It has to be saved!

    See you around ✨

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Hey Sumit.
    I hope you are doing amazing.

    This is such an amazing poem. Another masterpiece by Sumit.
    So much of love…use of phrases..words.. concepts….it’s a package.
    This is beautiful.
    Take care.

    Liked by 1 person

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