Caffeinated

Close your eyes and open your
heart’s sight,
That’s us baby, who are hugging each other tight.
Our bond isn’t based upon a random couple who just cuddle and sleep,
We’ve got each other’s back and and goals to meet,
It’s our duty to remind us what made us together,
This friendship has a crux of love, and more of understanding as soft as a feather.
There are really less words to appreciate your words and the beautiful bond we’ve created,
I’m blessed to have my girl near me,
as if she’s raw coffee,
and I wanna get fully caffeinated.

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Published by: SumitOfficial

Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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38 thoughts on “Caffeinated”

  1. Good noon Sumit!

    The title goes apt with the poem. It’s a beautiful one. I liked how you compared beloved with coffee and how the poet says he wants to be caffeinated. I so liked the concept. It’s always fresh.
    Then I liked how they got each other’s back and goals to chase. Of course loving someone does not in the least mean just hugs and kisses and making love all the time. Besides this its more of understanding each other, standing by each other’s side and being friends before being lovers.

    I so liked the whole poem.
    Beautiful one!

    See you around ✨
    Take care!

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    1. Hey, Rashmi!

      I’m glad you loved it. I was so addicted to coffee once that my office desk use to have 4 glass bottles of different coffees and people used to ignore office coffee and come to me for the coffee. Hahah! It was fun.

      Then I thought let’s get into it more bg writing about it.

      And truly, a good relationship starts with great friendship. And I’m happy you believe in the same.

      See you around. ✨

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  2. Hi sumit,
    I hope you’re doing good.
    I loved this poem. It’s like refreshing as coffee. The way you chose your metaphors is always capturing my heart. Here too I loved that a lot,the cute one.
    With coffee you Poured love which made this poem addictive 😊
    Stay safe.

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    1. Hey, Mitty!

      I’m absolutely great and I hope that you’re too at your end.

      A mug of coffee and a lover beside, makes everything alright.
      Hah!

      Guess what, Mumbai is opening tomorrow. And I’ll be resuming my service. Just hope that I can make time for you all here.

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      1. I am good sumit 😊
        Obviously coffee and lover beside could make that feel.
        After long days you’re resuming back to your service, it’s good to hear. This lockdown made us frustrated in home na..
        I am happy you’re going back to your work. Wish you to have great time.
        And pls be safe Sumit.

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      2. I could feel that now. It’s being complicate here too. Day by day cases are increasing.
        Try to be safe Sumit. We don’t have any other option. We were forced to survive with this pandemic.
        Stay safe 😊

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  3. Good evening Sumit.
    I hope you are doing absolutely fine.

    My life’s personal philosophy is peace…love and coffee. We can’t live without these three things in our life. For some people coffee can be switched with other drinks as well. The way you have compared the girl with a coffee and how the poet says he wants to get caffeinated…wow Sumit.
    Amazing.

    Your poetry is giving me coffeegasm…and I am going to make it right away.

    The lines were you say…we are not random couples who just cuddle and sleep..but we have each others back because we have so many goals to meet.
    These expressions are too good.

    I loved it all over.
    Take care Sumit ✨

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    1. Hey, Anushkaaaaa! (I hope you heard me the way I always call you)
      I’m doing better now. From tomorrow I’ll be resuming my service.
      How are you doing?

      Absolutely true. The three things you mentioned and a lover beside. God, that’s heaven already.

      And guess, who’s a coffee lover too here. I’m already happy.

      Coffeegasm! Haha! Anushka, you’re too cute.

      Glad you loved the expression of loving and pushing each other towards the goal because I love when both of them understand each other so well that growing together is the only will both should have.

      Thanks for always being there. And you know how your presence is always important to me.

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