Let’s hold the hand and
walk inside the forest.
The orange and yellowish
liberating light touches us gently.
Let’s dance while being drunk
On the night under the moonlight.
Until we’re tired and end up sleeping
in the arms of each other.
Let’s wake up,
wrapped up in the arms
Entwined around each other
Until the soft embers
ignite the light again.
Copyright © 2015-2020 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
The last stanza was so spotless!
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Hey, thanks, Devika!
Glad you felt that way.
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The forest of love, drunk in love under the moonlight, waking up in love❤️❤️.. just loveedddd it Sumit!!!
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I need morreee of these… always excited to read love poems written by you
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And the same way I am excited to always read your beautiful POV.
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I love sharing it too..
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You got them in sync. Wow. Thanks for reading and loving it, Anu.
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Haha.. Yessss!! My pleasure!! Thank you for such a beautiful read
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So so beautiful, the words, the moments. Lovely ❤❤
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Thank you very much, Anamika.
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Wow Sumit
This was soo passionate and romantic
I really enjoyed reading this one
Your other poems are amazing but this one is REALLY good
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Hey, thanks a lot for such immense love for this piece.
It was just a random thought which I tried to make a poem of..
Thank you for your encouraging words. I wish you a great day ahead.
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You are most welcome
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Soothing.
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Just like your beautiful comment.
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Wow. This is beautiful. 👌
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Hey, Kendi! Thanks a lot for reading!
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2nd stanza was just too good!
Though you being a nature lover would love to spend time under the moon light, in the forest being in beloved’s arms but the idea of dancing while being drunk was something out of the box today!
Good one!
See you around ✨
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You loved the second one? Guess what? I loved the third one, when the night is gone, and the dawn is there, the little fire ignites the light of love in between them and they make out in the morning in the open sky, around the huge trees.
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Haha Needless to say that because I like the part where everything goes smoothly like dance and all and you like a different idea.
But here we are cherishing the difference!
Haina!
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Hana? Hahah! Chalo you are right.
Ab main jau?
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Wow man. This one’s really good.
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Hey, Sameera! Thank you so much for liking it.
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It’s really beautiful .💚
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Hey, thanks Anurag!
How are you doing?
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Most welcome sir . I am doing good. And hope you too!
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Yes, thank you!
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The words that linger in your mind is inexplicably beautiful! ❤️
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That is a huge compliment coming from you, Melanie. Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome 😊
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Here comes the great lover of nature. So beautiful work Sumit. It definitely an extraordinary feel to be with lover in forest under moonlight. And I loved your metaphor.
I loved it 🙂
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Nature+Lover+Deep intimacy = Pure Bliss
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Absolutely sumit. It would be out of world.
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Absolutely.
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Nothing better than intimate love in the nature. Waking up to the chirping birds, cool breeze and love in your arms. The best feeling!
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Well, I can just imagine them but I have the person with me who lives all of them! Oh, Nanchi! The lucky you.
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Beautifully penned, Sumit 😃
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Hey, Shweta! Thanks a ton!
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You’re very welcome
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This piece absolutely has “nasha” in it!
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