Watch
How slowly
She makes you
Tell about your wounds that
You’ve been hiding since long
And then she invades your heart
To get inside it for giving
the cure for a lifetime
To everything you’ve been
Feeling all these years.
she holds your face gently and
How she traces every inch
Of your soul while making
A room in your life while
looking at your eyes that only
Echoes her name.
Clear and louder.
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A beautiful piece ❤
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Thank you for reading it, my friend.
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I am liking this poetry very much as it explains with unknowable words that space inside saved for a true love. It gave me goosebumps 🙏💋💋❤️
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Goosebumps. Mm! My motive is done with the post now. Haha!
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I am glad my goosebumps served a good purpose 😁😁🤗❤️
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Really amazing. Loved it
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Thank you for loving it. Really!
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Yeah 😀🤝
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I just read something so soothing!
The way poet depicts the beloved, as how she takes care of him. How she wants to know what is there inside that heart. What is there that is unknown to the world. And how the poet reveals everything to her and trusts her that she will calm the storms he carries and that she will be applying balm to all the wounds and that there will be no scars of the same.
And how it ended looking in her eyes which speaks her name clear and louder. Just beautiful!
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Thank you for loving it deeply, Rashmi.
Come soon.
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This poem has warmth, love, and care. Lovely!
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And the appreciation of yours.
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It’s so beautiful and romantic Sumit.
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Thank you for reading, Mitty!
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some people are like that, they make others instantly comfortable and you just open your heart in front of them.Beautifully penned
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Truly said, Anamika.
At times, it feels good to get that comfort and other times it’s good to give that comfort to someone else.
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💔
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Hi Arshnoor! Where were you? We missed you.
Hope you’re doing fine.
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This is so genuinely written Sumit.
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