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I Fall!

I won’t write about her tonight.
Or maybe I won’t even write about love.

Words are less, I saw your face.

I fall.

Feelings came out, even without us talking.
Eyes spoke a lot in that silence,
Our heartbeats were trapped as if it all stopped.

I fall.

Craving to be around your existence, I attract my spirit inside your body.

I fall.

I love the gut in your voice, that in the end, for your attention

I fall.

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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30 thoughts on “I Fall!”

  7. WOW! You said you’ll not write about her or about love but indirectly you did!

    Ah, I loved the description when you must have saw her. How you said eyes did what words couldn’t. I so loved it! It actually happens, sometimes eyes tell more than words do.
    The line I loved the most was-

    “I attract my spirit inside your body”
    Just wow!

    You shall rise in love! Mark my words!

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    1. Hi Nanchi! I apologize for the delay. I’m extremely busy since June 8 when my work started from the office and since today it’s a new office as we’ve shifted here.
      So I’m not really getting time to interact with you, but I do miss you and your posts.

      I’ve yet not replied anyone but seeing your concern, I thought of sharing with you. I’ll read yours for sure by this weekend.

      Hope you’re keeping well.

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  12. Woww Sumit! This poem is so lovely and romantic. It’s really beautiful to have conversation with eyes right. Eyes could convey our heart to the love. I loved it 🙂
    Stay safe!

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      1. Absolutely Sumit.
        Eyes are window for our heart.Eyes make our thoughts naked for one who look into that. So it could be sexiest.
        No wonder such a good post from aesthatic person like you.

        Like

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