If you ask me how does the moon
look like tonight, I won’t tell you
That it shines brighter.
Rather I’d ask you to offer me a pen and paper so I draw pictures of galaxy,
Of the distance between you and the moon.
For how much does it crave to be loved by you.
With a smile, I’d let you look up
at the beauty until
you fall in love all over again.
Copyright© 2015-2020 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
Perfect post to read before sleep 💖💖💖💖💖
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And this is such a good thing to read in the morning.
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Beautiful!
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Hey, thank you for loving it.
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You’re welcome 😇
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Thanks for checking out my blog recently!
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It was worth going through.
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Good evening Sumit!
You know I did not find your post for two days and I was about to ask you where are you and here you are!
Talking about your poem, well it’s so good to read a poem by you after so so long, it’s been a long time really!
I really liked the idea where it said instead of asking me to explain about moon, give me a pen and paper, but you know what will happen after that, the composition that will come out will be more beautiful than the moon itself!
I liked it really!
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That’s so sweet of you. It reminded me of one of the conversations that we had on the terrace where the moon was being appreciated.
Listening to your views are always precious, Rashmi.
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Or say your poems are precious to attract audience!
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You’re kind enough to say that.
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How have you been?
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I am good.
Well, more often we talk about me, tell me about you. How have you been?
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You are being asked because you are being concerned.
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I know that, Right!
And I love being asked, you know that!
Anyways don’t Dodge the thing, tell me how are things at your end, other than the fact that it keeps you really really busy?
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Hah! Yes. You got me.
Things are fine. These days I’m having a bit difficult time with my heart. I’ve never felt the anxiety in my heart, the unreasonable pumping in my heart.
Very unusual.
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You wanna talk about it?
I’m all ears.
May be we can fix it.
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Thank you for being q good listener as usual, Rashmi.
It’s just that uneasiness at the corner of heart. I’m not even able to find out what’s exactly hurting.
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Okay I don’t wanna impart any “Gyan” over here, but you know what you know what’s wrong, titbits of your mind’s state is reflected in your recent post.
Under any case, know that you can always talk, I am here if you want.
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Yes, I know you’re there. I guess, there’s nothing to speak but you know at times we feel heavy for no reason. And being a human we feel like this many a times. This is one of the phases I’m going through right now.
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You’re Stronger than your circumstances, remember that always!
Take care!
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I’ll remember that.
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That’s like Sumit!
Now cheer up and smile😊
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Yes! You tell me how is everyday writing going on?
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Everything is really hectic these days, construction is going on, all day machinery’s sound is hampering my creativity..! So I just end up writing day to day stuff.
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Why hectic? The outer disturbance or the inner?
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Hey no, no troubles from within by God’s grace, all’s well! No worries.
Bas thoda construction chal RHA h, studies going on sidewise so just not able to spend time on writing.
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Oh I’m relaxed to know that.
Outer chaos is always manageable.
I understand things are keeping you busy but don’t let it affect your writing pattern no.
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Haina, now since I relaxed you already, it’s time to pay back.
I was tensed reading your latest post, and I wanted to reach you asap to know about you, par fir kaam me atak gyi…
But partner you know the drill, you write it down and you’ll feel better.
I’ll see you tomorrow!
And I hope you feel better than!
Take care!
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Talking to our people actually feels good. And your existence here made me feel that way. I’m better now.
Do anything but not to forget about writing. Words are life.
Take care of yourself, Rashmi.
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I am here for you!
Yes, I’ll write now.
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Yes. That’s what I wanted to hear.
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Ofcourse, who’s gonna refuse to write in front of a mentor!
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Because I want to read the one who taught me to rhyme.
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You’ll read her someday soon!
But hey, why am I sensing sad vibes here?
You shall be absolutely fine.
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You sense it, because you’re pretty good at assuming things for me through my words.
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So is my assumption right?
You still not easy?
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I’d not lie with you, but there’s this uneasiness going on inside my chest and that’s making me perplexed about what am I actually feeling.
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Sumit, Sumit listen to me, cut off from everyone including me and just go to your favorite park where you always go when you feel you need a break.
Your companions are there, that tree, that bench, your journal and your pen needs to see you there at that park.
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You know this fact so well. I actually need to spend a lot of time with myself. For myself. By myself.
I shall go to the place soon.
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I don’t know if I am really helping you out by talking to you or you want time alone..
So I’ll just assume and leave you by yourself.
Take care of yourself please.
And if you want, you can always speak up. I am here.
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You’re not at all bothering. Rather, I feel better being here. And I’m glad that you are here too. You always were. And you will always be. ✨
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I don’t know if this is gonna help you, but you should listen to this one song I am listening on loop today – Chak de from hum tum
I’ll sing 2 lines for you-
“Has ke to dekh tu ek baar
Khud hi aa jaegi fie Bahar”
Suno tum ek baar free hokar ya time nikalkar.
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I read it and then it made me smile immediately.
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Ah, in that case I’ll sing the whole song for you just to see you smile.
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I already heard it in your voice in my mind. Haha!
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Hah, but then don’t forget to hear it on your way down home. Especially the female part.
Ah, how I am still not over it!
You gonna like it for sure.
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By the way how are we doing today?
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I’ve been writing letters to myself. Just now I ended up writing one.
Self-discovery is what is going on of my lost existence.
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That’s the best you can do.
I’ve been doing that lately on a regular basis.
Hope you find yourself back soon!
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You do?
Isn’t it a great thing Rashmi. No matter how many people are around us, but the way words understand us, nobody would ever.
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Yes Sumit,
You know I’ve always told you nah, fortunately I’ve always been surrounded by people who really love and understand me, but off lately I have realized my diary is my best friend. And that not everyone needs to know what’s happening inside out.
Isn’t it?
And you know when I started doing it, I fell so at home. No judgement, nothing.
I am just me, the real me.
And therefore now each time I discover more about myself, I remember you because it’s you who inspired me to write a journal.
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Absolutely, Rashmi. When we’re talking or having a conversation with another person we need to put an efforts to present and convey the message of what our heart wants, but there are chances to be misjudged, and misunderstood.
On contrary, while writing, the pen and paper are so much at peace that ot listens and understands us. And that’s probably the best part.
Pouring the heart in front of someone, and penning it down, I’d always choose the latter.
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Exactly, and thus I’ll never leave writing as long as I am alive.
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Yes. If writing makes you remind you of something/someone worthy enough then you should not.
More than a reason to continue.
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Hey thanks haa!
You gave me a reason!
You’re the best, I am definitely not gonna leave it.
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I can sense it must have brought w smile on your face while reading that.
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You know it all!
It’s strange how we talk in oblivion and still underestand each other!
Unless it’s not misunderstood.
Anyways I want to see you smiling soon! It cannot be forced or else I’d have asked someone to tickle you. I’ll wait to sense a positive vibe from your end.
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Hahah! Why would you let anyone else do if you could have done by yourself. Haha!
But I’ll be back with my vibrant mood soon.
What’s the plan now? Any blog post on the way?
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True that.
Let covid end, I’ll come to Mumbai than! Thike.
Ah, I am so waiting for that.
I just loved this “haha” part itself coming from you! Hope you feel better.
I’ll do some padai abhi.
No, nothing yet.
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Yes! You’re gonna come with your gang and we’re toh gonna meet for sure.
You go study now and take care of yourself.
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How about you meeting my gang virtually? I’ve been thinking of writing about my clowns since long.. haha!
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Why not? I’d love to.
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Haina, so shall I write about all of them?
Hey how about adding their pictures in that.
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That’d be cherry on the cakem
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Done then.
I’ll write.
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I’m excited.
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How are we doing today?
Any better
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Hey, Rashmi! Thank you for checking on me. I’m doing fine now.
Writing helps. And of course the patience.
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That’s a good thing to know.
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Thank you. How have you been?
The day went well?
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Not good really!
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Well written!
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Thank you so much.
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❤
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Thank you, Diana.
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Beautiful lines
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Thank you Navin for your words.
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Love it
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Hey, thanks a lot Diana.
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I am so obsessed with constellations🖤
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And that’s probably the best thing to happen.
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This is amazing
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Thanks a lot, Afa.
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Awestruckkk with this, draw the distance and show me that please. I fall for it everyday.
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You’ll fall in love again and again, Shree.
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I do, every moment 😍
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That’s the best about you. You’re love in your own way.
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Im blushing again.
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Guess what, I can sense it till here.
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😊😊
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