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Glistening Hair (18+)

Beyond any distance
Heart is beating
Across the space
in between
You’re really being missed
This dark rainy night
And the endless aching
On the bed, our bodies will
roll and start love making
The neck of mine meeting yours
My fingers entwined
Your lean thighs now spreading
Bit by bit, when I get inside you
I feel your nails dig inside my back
And your moans become breathtaking
Until we’re done, again half-lying on the bed
Your open glistening hair
And your head on my chest resting
I lit my cigarette, took a long drag
The same I shared with you
Watching outside the window
We talked, laughed, made love again
Until the dawn kept us reminiscing.

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Sumit Yadav(25), popularly known as SumitOfficial, is a blogger from Mumbai who has been writing since 5 years, and has posted 600+ Blog Posts till now. He is an MBA and works in an Educational Industry in Mumbai as a Senior Career Consultant. His spare-time activities include creative things like -- Acting, Photographing, mimicking, singing. He has worked with Radios, appeared on National TV, interviewed authors, appeared on newspapers for multiple activities, and has written reviews for magazines. Also, he's been consistently writing offline in his journals for more than 875+ days now. He believes in Continuous Progression, and Exponential Growth. 

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33 thoughts on “Glistening Hair (18+)”

    1. I have worked my ass off for years to come this far Muskan.

      As I have mentioned in my earlier blogs that I do one practice of writing everyday in my journal everyday for around 886 Days now, continuously.

      And about the topic, the more I read other people’s work the more inspiration I get to write it in my way. And the journey keeps on going.

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  2. Hey sumit,
    It’s so sweet. Longing for lover in a rainy night very romantic. This is like the best love scene. I Could feel more love rather than lust in your words.
    Wish to have a good day 😊

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    1. Hey Mitty,
      A very good morning to you!
      Rains always make people fall in love deeply, intimacy becomes the need, the closeness turn into a good sex, and the morning fills with happiness.

      I just tried to portray that and through your words I can sense, it reached the way it should have.

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      1. Hi sumit,
        I am sorry little bit busy today.
        Sumit do you know this comment is also poetic.
        Yeah your words justified your thought 😊
        Have a good night Sumit.

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  4. This is so beautiful and can evoke the longings of such moments within anyone specially that last scene where she rests her head on his chest while they share cigarette and look outside the window.
    Wow! just wow!

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    1. Hey, Anamika!
      I always love your post-reading description. You always get things perfectly.

      And with that being said, when he cares for her after sex means she does mean a lot for him.
      Thanks for reading!

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  6. I have always liked your idea of love making. It’s always so soothing to read. What was different in this piece was litting of a cigarette and how it’s not been dragged just by the poet but shared with the partner.

    Rest all was beautiful as always.
    Erotic cum platonic. I loved the concept of neck meeting and fingers entwined.

    And ending as always is so comforting like talking, laughing and making love all over again.

    I am sure you gonna be the best Lover for your beloved. How romantic are your thoughts!

    See yaa ✨

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    1. Absolutely, just like love, the drug should be shared too no? It makes them love even harder.

      Hah! About the love making, I’m a lover who loves to enjoy the journey of her body rather than reach at the destination.

      As the song says, “Safar khoobsurat hain, manzil se bhi”

      Thanks for loving it, Rashmi! ✨

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      1. I agree to everything you said!
        It’s the journey that matters and not the destination.
        We don’t know what Is there ahead of us. So we gotta live in present and enjoy it to our fullest.

        See I am learning a lot from you has!

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      3. Haha, you know na I can’t write anything without actually feeling the emotions. 🤦🏾‍♀️ So, sensual poem tabhi aayegi when I’ll feel that way for someone. I hope I get to experience that feeling someday. 😹

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