It definitely hurts me when you doubt on my love, my self-less love. These insecurities are unwarranted and will damage everything deeply. I wish I could show you how much you live in me. If only you could stay in my heart for a day, you would know that you live perpetually in my heart. I want you to give it a try.
Take the dagger to my chest and you will see in every drop of my blood, I bleed you. Throw away your mistrust for there will never come a time when I say, I don’t love you. Even if I say, don’t believe in my words, because deep down there is love and care resides for you. Only for you.
Does the Moon get bored of kissing the lonely dark night? Never. Cast your possessiveness in the garbage for it is of no use. Don’t hold me back. Don’t try to catch me as I am not only this corporeal body, I am the one who is invisible. Don’t fall in love with the outer side, it is of no use either. You cannot see me, though I can be felt. I can be loved.
Fall in love with what is inside and not with the corpulent body, it will deceive you for sure. You should have known how to fall in love with a poet, you should have not fallen in love with me as it is not easy to cope us with them. They don’t think the way everyone else does, they don’t follow the stereotype either and the same way they don’t make love the way everyone makes. They make their own world of imagination where there would be love, care, blissful pain, hurt, lust, and sex resides. They have the power to make you atemporal.
They will not just kiss you on the lips instead they will pour your heart with lust and care. You will be teased for the single touch. A touch which can make you go crazy inside out. You will be disciplined. They will make you feel the fear of unfamiliar touch, and the moment you get it you will become a frenzy.
And that is how much I love you.
Copyright© 2015-2017 by SumitOfficial
All Rights Reserved.
💓 amazing
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Yayy! Thank you Richa. 🙂 ❤
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Absolutely! And the last paragraph! Just wow 😍
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Konsa wala, Richa?
The frenzy one? 😀
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“They will not just kiss you on the lips instead they will pour your heart with lust and care. You will be teased for the single touch. A touch which can make you go crazy inside out. You will be disciplined. They will make you feel the fear of unfamiliar touch, and the moment you get it you will become a frenzy”
This one!
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YES! This is one of my favorite lines too.
It has that deep meaning which one can feel while reading, haina. 🙂
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Haan! Your work is always amazing! English, hindi or urdu.. you are amazing
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Your words are too big, Richa.
But thank you so much for saying so. ❤
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Not too big! You deserve them 😋 keep shining
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Superb 😍 as ever
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Thanks a lot, Sumith! 🙂
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Lover that doubts does not love unconditionally. Beautiful!
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Doubts of becoming someone else’s is the problem.
Instead of this, there should be a moral support which lovers lack these days. Be it a girl or boy. No?
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People in general lack moral support in all aspects of their life. Even if they get the requisite support from a lover let’s say, there is lack of recognition. This problem arises because there is a difference in behavior and understanding for each person. These barriers can be ploughed down only with time, so kore important is faith in each other, the positivity and the intention to make the ends meet for being together.
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Completely agree and along with faith there should be “Acceptance” in a relationship. 🙂
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There cannot be a relationship without acceptance. However if you’re talking of acceptance towards the changes that a relationship goes through later on, that too comes along with faith in the other person. It’s a package always…
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Hahaha! Haan, one has to go for the combo pack 😉
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How affectionate and portrayed so well the meaning of love!!
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I am so happy that you liked the concept. 🙂
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Most welcome 😊
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🙂
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That was incredible man. Love how you distinguished that the external form isn’t the being that we love, and is of no use at the end of the day.
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Yes, Sheriff! People have this misconception that being good-looking from outside is all they need to do. But the reality is real love comes into existence the moment your outer beauty starts vanishing. 🙂
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Couldn’t agree with you more.
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Thank you Sherif. 🙂
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Mind blowing….👌👌👌
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Thank you so much AV 🙂
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My privilege sir…
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you. 🙂
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amazingly written, great way to pour the love out and yes be the poet or the author our way to make love to our loved one’s are completely different than the usual.
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Yes, thanks so much Manvi. 😊
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There is a seperate comment box. 🙂
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It’s beautiful, it’s sexy, and just fucking awesome. Well done Sumit. I have to say each piece your write gets better and better. Bravo to you my friend for you and your writing. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us!! I enjoyed it very much!!
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Really Kaw?Aww, I am so happy to hear that from you my love ❤
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Yep. I’m honored to comment on such a beautiful piece.
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❤
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Kuddos Summit…absolutely wonderful!
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Hey, thanks so much 🙂
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Yes it’s great!
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Oh my my…
Agree with your each and every line…
They have thier own imagination where they live..the pure love they give instead of fake one…thier touch can make you crazy ….
The warmth in ur words expressed you have xpressed beautifully…
Loved it alot❤
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Yes, Prachi, their way of thinking is way different from others. Like you. 😉
Thanks so much, I am glad that you liked it. 🙂
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How could i unlike ur words..they are much lovelier than anything😍❤
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Just like you. ❤
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Something new flavour u provided now😍
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Ahaaa! Did you like this new flavour? 😉
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Frenzically, beautifully, wonderfully written piece Sumit. Though edification of writers part liked a bit less. But Loved everything else. 😇
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I can get your point, Rohit. And I respect that. 🙂
Thanks so much for your lovely words. 🙂
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Loved it. ❤❤❤
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Hey, thanks so much Saaaaaaaaachi😍☺☺
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Lol!!! 😂😂😂 Welcome Suuuumit😜😜
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Yayyy! So happy to go to bed with a wide smile. Thank you Sacchi. 😍😘😊
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Same here have sweet dreams. 😊
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Morning Saachi. 🙂
Have a great day ahead. 🙂
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Good noon Friend.
Have a very nice day to you too. 😊
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Beautiful ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Thank you, Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaya 🙂
Thanks to tuje banta hain, this post is somewhat inspired by Maaya series too 😉
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Yes, I could sense that sensuality in your writing ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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🙂
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Wow! This is beautiful!
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Hey, Natasha! Thank you so much 🙂
I am glad that you liked it. 🙂
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Wonderful
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Thanks so much Marie. Do you agree with this? 😅💓
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Sure!
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I had goosebumps after reading this. Wow! Simply stunning! Magnificent! 👏
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Wohooo! Can we conclude that a poet just did that with you? 😅
Haha! Thanks so much Bhavika. 😍😊
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It was my pleasure!
You may conclude that. ☺️
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Yayyyy! Thank you Bhavika. 💓
It’s always good talking with you. God bless. 😊
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I feel no different! It was totally my pleasure. Stay blessed. ☺️
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Good night, Bhavika. 😘
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Good night dear. 😄
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Does the moon bored of kissing dark lonely night ❤❤❤ wos
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😍😍😍
No. It doesn’t. 😜😆💖
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Yes it doesn’t ❤❤
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Wow *
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Thank you, Faryal. 😇😍😜
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Thanks for reblog. 🙂
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Beautiful post!!
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Thank you so much, Leyla. 😘😍☺
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Take the dagger to my chest and you will see in every drop of my blood, I bleed you. Throw away your mistrust for there will never come a time when I say, I don’t love you. Even if I say, don’t believe in my words, because deep down there is love and care resides for you. Only for you.
Amazing 🙌
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Hey, thanks so much for reading 🙂
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Getting a peot in form of your beloved is the best thing !!! You can feel his love in his words
And as it is rightly said that- words play better then sword
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😍 lovely
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Thank you, Nidhi. 💓👼
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Beauty 🙂 keep writing beautiful lover! Stay Blessed!
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Hey JayShree, thanks for reading. 😉
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I agree with everything beautiful 🙂
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Wow…. This is just amazing 👏
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Hey, thanks a lot. 😘🌸
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Wow…no words.. beautiful 💞
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Does the Moon get bored of kissing the lonely dark night? Never
I fail to express how relatable it is…
Each and every line of it Sumit.
I am in awe right now
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Why do I get the feeling all of what you are reading is not me, but it’s a mirror where you’re finding yourself in front of you?
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Now trust your instincts. Because this is what is actually happening with me right now.
I feel I am there living in all your poems.
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You are.. I feel that!
Everyone can read me, but not everyone can live my words. You do that. You’re amazing.
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And you know what I feel -.
When I read you, I read what people write in comments too. And I feel their love and admiration for you ,for your art and I wonder what different can I say to put a smile on your face . I mean everything I wanna say is said already and in a more profound manner indeed.
So sometimes I leave it.
People love you so much Sumit.
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I understand the fact you’re being honest that people who love me put their words for how they love the art. Tell me, don’t you love my art form?
Should I not get the chance to hear your heart out?
Call me selfish, Miss Awtani, but I want that. In need you. ❤✨
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You deserve all love.
You’re such a turtledove ❤️
See I learnt a new word and before you turn up your Google to see what it means it means a beloved,a sweetheart.
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Turtlelove. Wow. What a beautiful word haan!
I will never forget this word, not that I got to learn it today.
Because, someone so beautiful with her heart, called me with that. ☺
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Ahhaaa, you see💛
Don’t you think we’re getting along a lot these days…..
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Ummm.. Mummy says, always be in a good company.
I think she must be talking about you when she says ‘good company’.
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Sumit but my mom says ladko se door rho😆 Ab🤔
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Rashmi, my friend, mum says, bure ladko se dur raho.
Mum is concerned na, that her daughter
Should be in a good company.
Haan, ab filhal unhe Sumit ke bare me nahi pata to, Rashmi can convince mumma about him. See, we have solved the mystery. 💁🏾♂
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Now I’ll go and tell Mumma I have talking to this guy who’s so smart in his talks , he is so convincing you know.
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Hahah! Don’t tell her that Sumit is a Salesperson. She’ll doubt on my skills, after all, being a mother she knows, a salesperson can sell out a comb even to a bald person. 😉
Mums are too smart. ❤
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Haha and you are too witty😂
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Hahahah!
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*Turtledove. 🙈
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Is Sumit smiling?
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Rashmi, the use of ‘Is’ is not right here.
Kindly use, ‘has been smiling?’ then probably you might get the answer.
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Ohh present perfect here…
Which means Sumit is smiling since…?
Chalo you only tell
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Keh ke bin kahe ka maza kirkira nahi karte na. ☺
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We have a poet here💛
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Because we have an explorer here. 🤷🏾♂
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