“She becomes the back of him
She touched the bruises of his broken heart
She let him free from all the guiltHe just reinvented himself with the aid of her
She healed his heart once again
And dragged him back into the world of dreams
Into the world of fantasies.”
–SumitOfficial
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who is that insane “she’.. 😉
beautiful poem sumit..
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She could be an imagination
or someone…. 😉
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😉😉
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You’re someone for me, who’s comments are always faadu😂😂😂
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Beautiful
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Thank you Rekha 🙂
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🙂
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🙂
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Scintillating poem
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Thank you very much for reading it 🙂
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Can say just a sentence for this… That’s powerful !
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I am really happy that just a little description made you call it powerful, thank you bvery much 🙂
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Saying a little but worth a while is an art in itself….and you seem to have mastered it !
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Can share your Instagram profile ?
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Yes. 🙂
It’s @sumitofficial3
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So nice….
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Thnka you Kaju
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👌
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Thank you
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That’s so beautiful 🙂
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Awww, thank you very much 🙂
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So unique,that feeling is!
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Yees! I completely agree. 🙂
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quite lovely!
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Thank you very much for reading it 🙂
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She’s completely insane. You’ve been warned.
On Sun, Sep 25, 2016 at 7:15 AM, SumitOfficial’s Blog wrote:
> SumitOfficial posted: ” “She becomes the back of him She touched the > bruises of his broken heart She let him free from all the guilt He just > reinvented himself with the aid of her She healed his heart once again And > dragged him back into the world of dreams Into the world o” >
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Yes Catherine! He has been completely warned that she will always behave like this and she will never let him go anywhere. She has trapped him in her shelter of love. There is only flow of love between them now, she is insane. 🙂
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She is completely like you Sumit. So beautiful and just the way you always write and the feeling is too good.
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I am really touched by your point of view Kamal =. I could sesne that you must have read it so deeply to understand what I was trying to convey.
Yes, your interpretations are absolutely right Kamal. He has made her like him. He has loved her in such a way that she can never forget, she has a beautiful world in front of her. She became a part of him.. She completely belongs to him now.
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Thanks Sumit for your beautiful explanation 😊😊😊😊
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Now are you both going to come out of that DREAM WORLD and give us some yummy pics to LICK ?
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Hahaha, you are so funny Cattie. Please let my characters stay in freams only, at times, the most beautiful things happen in dreams only. 🙂
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I loved reading this post 🙂
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Thank you very much Niyati. 🙂
I really like your name I guess it means nature, isn’t it? 🙂
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Thank you Sumit 🙂 It means destiny 🙂
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Oops😅
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As I said you get better every time. You’re one of the best poets on wordpress great job. I love this piece of art
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Morgan you are such an inspiration to me now. Every time you drop a comment by saying this is better, every time I work harder to make it the best.
I really appreatiate your words Mora=gan, thank you so much. 🙂
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You’re welcome Sumit. All of your work is a beautiful piece of art full of your natural talent. Yes I have my favorites that you write but all of them are devine. You my friend will be known and remembered for your heart and talent. Much love blessings and hugs to you
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I am really awestruck now Morgan.
Lots of love!
God bless you 🙂
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🙂
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Did she heal a heart broken by another…or the world? Then what a beautiful description love at its most unselfish level.
Or did she break his heart, then heal it just so she could drag him back into despair ince again? Then this is a perfect description of how easily our hearts…and minds…can be deceived.
Either way, it is beautifully written, Sumit.
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The damage to his heart was not given by anyone else than his own heart. She could just felt the bruise inside his heart and tried to heal it.
She has just changed the way if loving a particular thing completely. She is a magician, she filled his heart guilt free. And in return what does he do? He rejuvinated her hee heart by loving her the way nobody has ever loved her. 🙂
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Ahhhh…so hers is the unconditional healing power of love…my first impression. Wonderful poem, Sumit.
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That’s true Pearl. 🙂
I’m so happy that you liked it deeply. 😃
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I will say that, as I was reading it, my hand went to my heart…I’m sure you have seen people do that when they are touched by something, yes? Well, that was my reaction 🙂
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I’m so glad that you are touched by these words. I’m really really very happy for this Pearl. 😇
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You have earned the accolades!
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Another well written poem that I came across with. Awesome!
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Thank you very much 🙂
I’m glad that you liked it. 😃
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I remember when I read it for the first time, I got goosebumps!! Your writing skills are so evocative Sumit. I can see you turning into a professional writer day by day. 🙂 ❤
PS: Please advice me to get better. (Except than write by heart) 😛
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That is true because you were the first person who read this when I wrote it. I don’t know if they are evocative or not but what I do know is I wrote it purposley and I am happy now. 🙂
Advice? well, I don’t think I need to give you any advice, since you ALREADY are a prolific writer Shreya. 🙂
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Thank you Sumit for your kind words. ❤ 🙂 You are amazing!
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And so are you. Thank you!
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more than you :p
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Yes. 😉
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yayy!! ❤ 😛
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Lovely post Sumit ji.
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Thank you Sagar 🙂
I am glad that you liked it
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There aren’t many things that hit my soul in a way that this does, but something about it makes me feel something that I haven’t in a while. Thank you.
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Thank you Sarah. I’m elated to make you feel in that way. 🙂
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A good piece of work that I enjoyed it.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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I am an abecedarian poet and I really need some like you. Wonderful poem
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I’m not a pro either. 🙂
But you can follow my blog to read more. 😊
Thank you.
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☺🙃😉 head spinning… Beautiful🙂
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woah! Thanks Jenn. 🙂
Glad you are loving the poetries. 🙂
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❤️
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Sanskriti. :* :* 🙂
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Sumit,Simply amazing..Love is bruises,healing,dreams,
fantasies, all the noise and silence and two souls bonded as one.
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Bounded as one, and make another world. 🙂
Thank you, Medha. 🙂
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I loved it. It’s beautiful. Great job!
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Thanks!
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You’re welcome.
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Did she just fix him to be broken away? 😛
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Oh, definitely not Asha. 🙂
She has given him a new life, a life where there are people, there is love, where there is she to love him the way he is. 🙂
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Wow… positive. And just how willing is he to take it on? Is he worried? Holding a reservation? Or just accepting her open-hearted?
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Both are at a place where they accept the flaws and loving the similarities.
Now, you can imagine if the settlement takes place this way in their love. How amazing it would be for them to enjoy the beauties of world. World of fantasies. ❤
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My idea of Elysium I so long for. That is.
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Word art, amazing
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Wow…veri nic… Bhai
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Thanks Jeetu. 😉😊
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😍😍😍😍 and she becomes his life forever 😍😍😍
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Who😍😍😍😍
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Jiski baat hori 😂
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Heheh! Haan 🙂
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😋
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My imagination is my love.
Naked, blunt, erotic, full of emotions, filled with bruises which makes me write.
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Hey that was nicely penned. …😙😚😗☺🙂🤗
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Hey, thanks so much Eliza. 🙂
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That photo is hot on its simplicity. My husband has long hair and a beard and its sexy as all get!
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Bhai Bhai what are you transforming into!!!! Surprisingly pleasant.
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Yayyyyy😍😍😍😍😍
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😊😊😊😊
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Wonderful 🙂 🙂 x x
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Hey thanks, 😊
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Your welcome ❤ ❤ x x
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Stunning….
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Thanks so much. 🙂
I am glad you liked it. 🙂
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