With a drunkard heart
I’m just a soul
Eyes full of drugs
Who knows himself
And owns his shits
That speaks the truth
With poor words but
Emotions that soothe
I’m me here, naked
Open, and lost in the world
You may not want anything or
You may end up having me all
My arms
My love
My attention
My time
Everything that is left,
Take it until it burn your
heart to embers.
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Oohhh!! Your words are so intense. This is so genuine. You always love people with all that you’ve got and that’s the best thing about you. ♥️ Love this deep poem.
Embers, huh? Sir’s love is like fire. Super intense and wild and carefree. Jo beech me aaya usko aag laga denge. 🤣😈
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Because love is the only language that I know na. Thank you for such love of yours too.
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So deep! Wish I could write like you. Loved it❤️
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Hey, thanks a lot for loving it, Divya.
I hope you’re doing well.
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I am doing well Thank you😊 I hope you are doing good too!
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Nice post
On Mon, 5 Oct, 2020, 11:37 pm SumitOfficial’s Blog, wrote:
> SumitOfficial posted: “With a drunkard heart I’m just a soul Eyes full of > drugs Who knows himself And owns his shits That speaks the truth With poor > words but Emotions that soothe I’m me here, naked Open, and lost in the > world You may not want anything or You may en” >
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Thank you, Rakesh.
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Beautiful words with meanings to dig. Love it. 🌟🌟
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Thank you so much for stopping by. I’m glad you loved it.
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This was quite inetnse.
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Thank you for loving it, Moushmi.
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This is such a beautiful composition!
I really like your thoughts where it is said that take all of me, my time, my attention and thing (as that’s a deal for a busy person like you, just kidding!)
And most of all the ending!
Ending was extremely extremely beautiful!
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Good morning, Rashmi.
It’s important to surrender what’s difficult, easy things can be taken out effortlessly. Cannot it?
And I’m so happy that you, as usual, liked the ending of the prose.
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Hey, I guess in your latest post, “the” is extra in the last line.
Typo I guess. Check it.
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Hey, yes! Thanks for the correction. The extra ‘the’ is there.
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Hey.. Is this a premium site?
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Hi! What made you ask that?
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I wanted to convert my site but have no required knowledge. So felt like asking.
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Thank you for asking but mine is the free version only.
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Okay.🌻
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Sumit you’re always a person who loves unconditionally. I think that makes your poem beautiful. It’s really nice to give us completely to the love. I love this poem a lot.
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You’re very kind to say that, Mitty. Thank you.
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Second last line*
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So glad, Rashmi!
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I’m just a soul
Who knows himself.
This is already a great achievement.
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One of the greatest achievements of my life when I got to know someone so personally- that was myself.
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I totally agree with this. This was one of my greatest achievement, or lets say the joy of my life yet.
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I love the wholeness in you that you carry.
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Thats a beautiful thing you said to me. 😇
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