It was a time to come back home. It was an uphill task. I needed to get back to something else, I guess. Life is too precious to spend on things which are waste, isn’t it?
Something flashed on the screen as I see. It was a shocked for me. It was Her. The shock numbed my senses for a while. Her name flashed on the screen. But what was flashing before my eyes was the sour fight we had had a year and a half ago. I disconnected myself from the phone. And later from her. From that mincing sweet touch of her.
It was love, I guess. I never uttered a harsh words with Her. But this has become the problem. It was a high time now. Soon the problems grew worst. I had to finish it. I really had to. Those feelings. Those senses. Those memories. I had to get rid of it. It took me so much time to do that…
I don’t know what it was back then, but there was something which I could not resist. There were eyelids which were so not ready to even blink. They were still. It was that beautiful. I wanted to know the truth from Her eyes. Those aesthetically pleasant cheeks.
My lips’ dying wish was to feel those cheeks of her. Ears, those ears were so rounded, those fumbles with my heavy breathings. I still remember how she loved it. My Lips wanted to whisper something to those cunning ears. And they did. I was in disbelief. I was young. I don’t know why did I feel that way with Her for the first time.
Those feeling were new. There were spark off in the whole body. I don’t know when did it all happen. I don’t know who operated my soul that time. I was sure that the control of this body was now in Her control. I was helpless in her hands. In Her passion for me.
There were butterflies flying in my stomach and heart beating real fast than ever.
The background noises vanished by now. I just smile thinking of that love even till now.
I wanted to stop but I couldn’t.
I wanted more but I couldn’t.
And that Kiss just happened!
Her lips taste like the first drop of rain on a cursed land…
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Aww, that was sooo lovely! Such heartfelt emotions, the first kiss! That’s really special for anybody! 🙂
Loved the description, it was very pure! Straight through the heart. 😀
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Chandu, you wrote it exactly how I want. Thank you, I’ll send you the money in your account 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Sir!! Maine kya likha haan? 🙍🙍
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Haha.. Just jokking re.
I respect your comment, you appraised it from the heart. Thank you 😂😂
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Abi bhi hass rahe ho, huhh! 😒
Haa toh I commented from the HEART, trust hi nai karte Sir toh Chandu par. 😑😑
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Sorry sorry bas!! 😆😅
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Nai sorry nai bolo abi. 😅
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Accha tell me is this really good?
Because I was so not sure about this one to post, but I posted it anyway!!
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Haan, I told you na this is beautiful! It’s OKAY to post such things, haha, I got to know aap kitne keen observer ho, kitne detail me cheezo ko describe kar sakte ho, aur kitna achhe se aapne compare kiya, that last wali line, “her lips were like the first drop of rain” wali line!
These are the qualities of a poet+story writer! ✌😇
Aur worda kaunse use karna aisi cheezo me, aapne vo bhi perfect likhe hai.
Abi mujhe pata chala na mere Sir kitna achha likh sakte hai, haha! Bohot potential hai abi toh. ☺☺☺☺☺☺
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Haha.. Your kind comments are making me write another one Chandu!! I’ll wait for those feelings when I get these kinda thinking. 😉
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Hahah, chalo abi jyada chadhaao mat firse! Kind comments and all!! 😂😂😂😂
Haan, I’ll wait for another post, let’s see aapka mind aur kya kya imagine karta hai! 😜😜
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Chandu, for that I just need to open my diary which I’ve been started from 2012-present. It has a lot of emotions, which are hidden inside. I’ll expose them one by one.
All the chapters will be read again. All the love stories will live again. All the pain will get healed again.
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Aww! Wow, aap diary bhi likhte ho? That’s a good thing. ☺☺
Haan, mere Sir ka dusra side bhi pata chale na achhe se! 😂
I’ll love to know about your Love Story! 😍 The most awaited story abi tak ki! I’m excited. 😄😄😄
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Haha… Yeah I’ve started writing on July 07, 2012 🙂
I’ll do that very soon. 🙂
An Erotic Story of mine. Haha;)
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Hahah, I like that word, EROTIC! 😂😂😂😂😂😂
Abi excitement is growing more! 😁
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Oye, do not excite me paglu. I’ve lot of things to do. Mera event mere bharose hain. Unki lag jaegi me avar likhne me reh gaya to 😂
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Haha, achha achha samajh gayi yaar. 23rd ke baad likhna bas? 😄
Aur vo logo designs bhi toh dikhaao na baaki bloggers ko, they should also know na aapka talent. ☺☺☺☺
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Accha esa kya? Haa yaar, that’s a very good idea. After all you all are my family too 🙂
All fellow bloggers support me through their kind comments 🙂
Karta hoon Chandu, 🙂
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Hehe, haan, that’s like my Sir. ☺☺☺
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☺☺☺
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Huh, bas yahin par active rehte ho aap, haina? 😞😞
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Hahaha.. You know nah re! See my WhatsApp status. I’ve already warned people. Kindly DND. But for few people including you I come often. I don’t want it to control me, you know 😷
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Haan haan okay theek hai. 😐
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Haha 😉
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Beautiful emotions
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Thank you Freda. ☺
This is my first post in which I have opened up myself so much. And I am thankful to you that you liked it. 😃
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My name is Ritu 😄
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Kyaaaaaa??? To me aapko Freda Freda kyu kar raha hoon itne waqt Se😂😂… I’m sorry huh😅😅
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Haha. It’s ok. 😄
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Ritu from now on, I will never forget huh. Thank you for reminding me. Haha 😅😅😁
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Beautifully explained👍
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Thank you so much Parul. ☺☺
I was so not sure of posting this, it has been residing in my local draft from so long.
I am glad that you liked it. 😇
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Lovely ..I just loved the last phrase”Her lips taste like the first drop of rain on a cursed land..”💑
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Really?! Thanks ..
Haha.. I hope you like the whole lost as well 😅☺
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Yeah 😅
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Thank you Asik 😀😀
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Beautifully written 🙂
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Thank you Freda. 😊😊
From now on I will not suppress my feeling of writing what I feel. As it was my first post which was out of the box for me. At least officially. 😜😜
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True!! one of the aspects of blogging 🙂
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Yes. That’s very true. 🙂
Have a nice day Freda. ☺☺
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You too Sumit 🙂
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True, passionate and beautiful❤
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The credit goes to you Miss Aishwarya. 🙂
It was you who inspired me to pen down my emotions in this way. A big thanks to you Aish :*
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Awww it’s a pleaure, I just gave you an idea maybe the rest was all you!
Sumit, I am eager to know what actually happened after her name flashed on the scree..
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It was something unexpected. It was not meant to happened. I was perplexed after seeing Her. I could not understand why? How? I mean why? Was it a dream? A lot of questions were stricken all of a sudden. It was hard to accept the fact. Her arrival. Her presence.
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Oh okay!:)
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☺☺
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Weaved your emotions into words..Beautiful that is 🙂
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I’m so glad that you find my first time penned down emotions. Your comment made my day. Thank you soo much ☺☺☺
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Sometimes a kiss is worth a thousand words for sure! Lovely thoughts! 🙂
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Yeah it it. When words are not enough, the kiss say it all.
Thank you for your appreciation. 🙂
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So romantic! loved it 🙂
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It was my first attempt. Thanks so much Sanghamitra that you loved it. 🙂
I appreciate that.
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really well expressed… my pleasure!
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☺☺
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Sounds so beautiful. A pure emotion. I felt the love in this one.
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Thank you very much Vidisha 🙂
It is my pleasure that you could relate to my feelings and felt the love in this. Thank you 🙂
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It deserves to be felt the way you felt it. A pleasure on my part. 🙂
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😊😊😊
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Kya likha hai aapne!! Ekdum dil choo liya!!
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Thank you Antara. Accha laga jaan kar Ki logo ke dilo tak pahuchane me kaabil raha ye post. 🙂
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Excellent boss! Best of three posts of yours I have read so far. 👌
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Wow! This is beautiful Sumit,really.After reading all this,m like…Kissing feels this good?😍
Why haven’t i kissed anyone yet then? 😂😂😂😂😂
Jokes apart,i loved it. 😊
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Haha…. You should now 😁😂😂
Thank you Pratishtha. 😉☺
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😂😂😂 yeah but lemme find a guy first,jo deserve kare😉🙈
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That should be done under some researches. You need to find the deserving one.😁😂😂😂
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😂😂😂Yes yes yes!
Can’t wait😂🙈
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Oye! Don’t get excited. Time lagta hain 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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😂😂😂😂😂😂 nai nai mae kahan excited hui! 😂😂😂
Wese bhi m not so interested in relationships as yet,my man has to wait.😂😂😂
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Haan… Meinu pata hain wo to 😂😂
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😂 haha vadiyaa ji 😊😉
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I have learn something from Taranjeet. 😉😂😂😁
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Heheh great! baki mae sikha dungi 😂😂😂😂
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Yay!!!!! Pinky promise? 😉
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Yesss! Pinky,reddy,bluey,greeny promise!! 😊
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Accha. 🙂
We’ll start soon. When mum’s concern ended. 😉
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Surely! 😊😊😊
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*little bit
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wowww!!gajabbbbb
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Thank you. ☺
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Oh ! Loved it … especially this line 👉 “Her lips taste like the first drop of rain on a cursed land…”
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Thank you Mahesh. 🙂
Ab samja Ki har writer ek baar kyun likhta hain 😂😂😂
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Kyun ? 😂😂
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Frustration Nikal jata hain 😂😂😂😂
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😝😝😝
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It was more than amazing! Exactly how you want it to be!☺
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It was more than amazing! Exactly like you want it to be. ☺
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haha… yes Vinisha.😉
It was beyond expectations. 😉
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I justtt love reading this!!!!!! How come u write such beautiful words!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Awww…. the answer is simple Jinjin. The love of my beautiful readers make me write like this. 😘😘💓😍
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Awww xoxo 😘
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I truly loved the conversation in comment section😂😂😂
Btw post was beautiful😍
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Hahahahh! Really 😀
Thank you Amiot. 😀 🙂
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Very Good!! 😉 😉
Poured out in words, superb Mr. Official!
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The ending was fantastic!
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Yeah? It was originally written in 2016 on my blog. I re-posted it today.
I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you for reading, Riya.
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Oh! I see. You’re welcome 🙂
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🙂
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I am so glad you repost it so I got to take part in this story . I’ll be back for more on your blog….
You are amazing with your ink🦋
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Thank you for always keeping an eye on my blog, Lillian. ❤
You’re Amazing.
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Beautifully described 😘
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After a long time someone is here.
Thank you, Shimpi. 😘❤
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Hatts off to your explanation power SumitBhaiya! 🙌
How do you explain like this way, it’s just straight through in heart.❤️
Beautiful, I’m touched.🌸
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That’s the beauty of readers like you, Vivek.
It was not the words but your heart which could connect with me. Thank you.
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