I love knowing what’s hidden from the world.
I love exploring the paths which I’ve never crossed.
I love knowing the part of you that makes you whole.
The one no one knows about,
The journey from being kind to wild,
From vicious to benevolent,
From sensuality to spirituality.
I want to have you all.
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What makes it erotic!
It’s beautiful in its own way. The poet’s description as always is out of the box.
His love is rare as we know it.
From kind to wild
From sensuality to spirituality.
Beautiful description!
I liked it!
See you around ✨
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That I’m not sure what we can consider it into but…
One thing I’m sure of that to get your comment at this time makes it beautiful in its own.
You get it all the emotions through the words, like humans have.
Thank you so much for your generous comment on this, Rashmi.
See you around. ✨
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What lovely projection of romance! Beautiful lines “I love knowing the part of you that makes you whole”.
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Thank you so much Nanchi, I’m glad you found romance at its peak with it.
I added that line, because many of the time we’re everything but not that one thing that make us instantly happy and content. I want to be that.
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Exquisitely romantic!!
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Thanks a lot for stopping by and reading, Nathi. Glad you loved it.
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It’s my pleasure, Sumit!
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🙂
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‘Sensualaity to spirituality’ lovely!!
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I’m glad you loved it, Devika.
Thanks a lot.
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OMG OMG. I love this. I am reading you after a long time. You never disappoint. What a beautiful creation Sumi 😘
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Look who’s here today!
It’s always great having you after months, J.
Thank you for your appreciations.
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😘
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I love this poem because it describes a complete person and all the hidden parts from kind to wild. Beautiful. Thank you. Sending you love.
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You certainly got my emotions in a right way. We as humans are the mixture of everything and that’s all I had tried to portray here. Thank you for reading, Summerhill Lane.
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🔥🔥🔥
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Thank you so much for reading. I can sense your love through the emoji.
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You sense well. In all seriousness though, I’m saving this one to read over whenever I want 🔥
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That’s such a beautiful gesture to show how you loved it. I’m deeply honoured with it.
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This poem is like burning of love in high passion. I loved the way you started, it says about how you longing for that love. After that it completely reveals the immense love.Love without lust couldn’t have this passion.And end you nailed it, last two lines were like jem on the crown.
From sensuality to spirituality
I want to have you all.
These lines make this poem immortal. I am not having enough words to say more. Wish you to have a good day.
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Hey Mitty!
How beautiful is that when I don’t think about much of these words until you come and give it a meaning. All the time.
And glad you loved the openness of the poem as I wanted to make it as clear as possible. I wanted to make it sensual to spiritual all. And see, you got them in no time.
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Obviously I loved it.I am always curious in getting ideas from others and expressing my views too. You’re giving me that comfort so I can say what I feel.The beautiful poem could give various imagination for persons according to their perspective. You’re poem is always like that makes me to express a lot. I am glad you’re accepting my views on that.
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I accept it from all my heart. Always. And you’re always welcome to put them here. You’re amazing, Mitty.
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Thank you sumit🙂 wish you to have a peaceful night.
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I wish you the same, my friend. Sleep tight.
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Ooohh!! Now this is sensually romantic. So deep, so passionate. 🔥 You have the traits of a researcher, huh. Craving to know what’s hidden. 🤣💙
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Hahahah! Chandudi! Chuuuup!
Don’t take advantage of knowing everything.
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Idhar Chandudi mat bolo naaa. Kachre karrahe. 🤭😼
You know na teasing you and interfering in your matters is my hobby. 🤣 Karungi mai.
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Hahahahahhah! You are my Chandudi and the world knows it.
And 5 saal se jhelta aaraha hoon, and I know, I have to for 50 More years. Huh!
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🤣🤣🤣 Jab mai Old dadima ho jaungi na tab bhi apne grandchildren ko bolungi Sumit Sir ke grandchildren ko jaake pareshan karke aao. 🤭
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Noooooo! I can imagine you teasing me in my old age. Huh!
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No naaaaaa!!
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*Imagine that big wild laughing smiley.*
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Arey that gandaa walaa sticker. Ewwww. But I love him.
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Hahahah! Imagine a frog one now! 🐸
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Braces wala mendhak huh. I’ll die laughing.
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Let me just WhatsApp you right away.
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❤️❤️❤️
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Hey, thanks a lot, Harsh. 🙂
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Wonderful morning Sumit✨
How you doing?
This poem is so beautiful..!!
I loved it all over. This is a beauty of you that makes it more beautiful.
The poem is all over the treat to read.
Specially these lines..
From vicious to benevolent,
From sensuality to spirituality
This is on fire. From being a Savage to manifesting love…💙
From being preoccupied with sensuality to being incorporeal and pure.
Amazing..!!✨
Take care Sumit.
Have a great day ahead..!!
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Hi Anushka! Good evening, loved one.
I always love how you look at the poems of mine in your way. At times, I’m waiting for you to describe them. It’s always a great treat for me.
And why would I not get it? You know love for you nah.
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Hey Sumit..😊
How you doing?
It’s your poem that makes all, I am doing nothing..
It’s my treat to read your posts Sumit✨
I know…your love for me💙and you know mine.
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Yes! I do know. And guess what made me happy today?
You posted something after a long time.
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Sumit 💙 you are amazing.
I am waiting for you on my post.
I am happy because I have you and Rashmi…always around ✨
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Thank you for waiting for me to come. I’m already done reading the beautiful answers of yours.
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Thank you Sumit.
You know what…I always wait to hear you from both💙
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Thank you Sumit.
You know what…I always wait to hear from you both💙
That’s friendship right?
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Absolutely that’s more than friendship. That’s the love amongst us.
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And it will keep growing by each passing day..💙💙
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Undoubtedly we will.
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🤗
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I love the touch of romance in all your poems Sumit! ❤️
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Do you? So glad to have this feedback from you. I’m sure it’s going to motivate me to try more. Thank you, A Curious Mind.
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You are most welcome! 🙂
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🙂
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Yeah… ☺️
If you’re pls do check my blog
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I did. I need to be aware that your posting time is in the morning. Noted.
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Hahaha.. Thanks again 🙂
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If you’re free* pls do check my blog
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To read your blog, I don’t need to be free. I need to go and read it. It’s always good.
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I am smiling🙂 my friend. Then you have a chance to read another one. I posted it just now
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Let me run.
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And whenever I read you. It reminds me how I started to read you
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And it makes me happy ever after we had enjoyed a lot. From reading blogs, discussing books to meeting for real.
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Oh yes😊makes me smile as I read you and recollect all the moments
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We’re gonna have all the great time again once we’re out of this Covid-19.
I hope I’m alive for that to meet you again.
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Aeyyy yess for sure. You and me here only. I was thinking maybe this place has some warmth l, nostalgia about it, that I connect same way like before
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Yes, blogging is beyond everything. Not even Tinder can beat out blogosphere.
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Oh nothing can beat. Can’t compare at alllllllll. It’s like home made of words vibes connect.
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Absolutely. So promise yourself to come often here if not regularly. Your real place is here.
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Oh yes. I do come. Shall come more often. Promise
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Yes.
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Whenever I read your poems…… I feel that I am discovering a new phase of life 😇
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That’s one of the best things I’ve heard today. Thank you, Komal. I’m glad you’re loving them.
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