The moon has always been a great love for the people of Earth. We always give it a name for various reasons, for some of us it’s Chanda Mama, others write songs on it, a few looks at the flaw of it, and then there are a few ones who fall it love with it, who consider romantic.
I’ve always been a lover of the moon. On my stressful day, I find the place nowhere else but on the terrace of my apartment, and the first thing I see is my love, my moon.
It causes the tide to rise and drop it down to fall, and all the time lights up our darkest soul. The moon has fascinated me ever since I was a little child; I’ve heard from my Mum that if you dream to reach at the Moon, you’ll surely be on heights in life, where you’ll feel on top of the world, beside your moon.
In this National Poetry Writing Month, I could not think of anything but my love for the Moon, and here goes my artwork below:
At the end of the day,
I go upstairs on the terrace,
Amongst great huge trees I gaze
At the great moon rise,
The clouds are flooded with darkness
And my thoughts with surmise.
While staring at the long lost orb
Flaws and insecurities are what it seem
Moon is my only lady love,
Which knows my darkest dreams.
As if it’s a docile child, look at it
The way it’s shining up there,
Revolving around the universe,
Shining like a mobile lamp in the air.
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You’re a natural
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Hey, thanks a lot Gottfried.
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You’re welcome man. You owe me likes btw 😅
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Great poem, and what a cool photo! Thanks!
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Thanks for stopping by, Susank.
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Great post
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Thank you for reading it, Freddie.
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My pleasure 😊
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A lovely poem. I’m also a huge fan of the moon. She’s beautiful. ❤
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and this was a wonderful start to napowrimo. cant wait for the upcoming poetries !!!
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Hey Muskan! You’ve been reading all thr poems of NaPoWriMo 2020, and here I have you again for this year.
To be honest, reading honest reviews from you are always expected, and appreciated.
Thank you for the inspiring words.
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always welcome!!
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Hey, just read your work.
What a wonderful use of imagery, comparing moon to a docile child, or a mobile lamp. It’s unique.
We as writers definitely love moon and for most of us it works as our muse sometimes.
I loved your poetry, but again I’m a little more bent towards the back end story.
See you around ✨
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Hey, Rashmi!
It’s good to see you on the blog with your reviews. It’s always been fun.
And how truly you said it, we, as writers, love to make love to Moon.
The story! Of yes, that’s going to be fun this season.
See you around! ✨
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This season I’m sure you’ll nail it.
Looking forward for tomorrow’s magic✨
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And here we go!
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Beautifully written 💚💚💚
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Hey Anurag! Thanks so much for stopping by!
I hope you’re doing well.
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Looks like you’re a selenophile (moon lover) just like me 😀😀
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Hah! Undoubtedly, I am.
Good to know that you’re one of them too.
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I am definitely one…been so since I was a little child….it’s just the most beautiful amazing thing 💖💖
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True that. It’s that kind of one sided love where we fulfill the other person’s love from within.
As Moon can’t speak to us, hence we talk on behalf of moon. How beautiful!
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Couldn’t agree more…crazy much? 😀
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Truly.
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After a long read one of yours and it’s very different
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Oh yes, Sangbad! It’s been very long but here we are for our favorite month.
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Yeah…April is sort of Reunion Month…
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Undoubtedly!
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Oh God, you’ve started NaPoWriMo with a bang!! 😻 Such a beautiful poem on one of my favourite topics of all time. Love the way you perceive Moon. 💙😃
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Yes Chandu! Most importantly, this way at least you’re here to read my work. You ought to be here for a month now.
Of course, that’s going to be your favorite one no, moon!
I’m so glad you loved it.
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Haha, right. I’ve left this place but I’m happy you’re giving me a reason to be back here. 😃
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Of course, you have to come back. There’s no going back, Miss Chandu.
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Lovely to read this!:)
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Thank you, Devika. It’s pleasure to have you here after a long.
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Reblogged this on Love and Love Alone.
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You know what, collect all of these prompts, merge them ,print them and publish them. I’d absolutely love to read these in a hard copy.
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Hahah! You’re sweet to say that Shree.
You’d be shocked to know that I’ve been continuously writing for more than 1200 days in row and nobody knows about what is inside it.
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In my journal*
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