Your memories
have splattered
my heart
In such a
manner that
I took refuge
In a nightclub
where weed,
firewater,
and poetry
is trying to
ruin me
with your
name on my lips.
–SumitOfficial
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Weed, Firewater & Poetry!
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Bravo. Such memories.
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Thank you so much Asha. 🙂
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Great imagery!
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Thank you Jaonna. 🙂
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👏👏Wallah… exotic bhaijaan!!! the idea of refuge in a nightclub was amazing👏🌹❤
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Hahah! Thank you my little Shivee. Love you. :* 🙂
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Welcome😇❄😘Love u too bhai😘😁
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kyu … KYU.. akhir kyu ant me waha pe refuge lena pada .. haha ..very nice poem sumit .. i felt you could have added few more lines..
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I would definitely share the entire poem Sup. 🙂
Hahah! I felt the need to writing on this refuge, so just did it Sup. 🙂
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Go on buddy.. I’ll await for that.
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Soon. 🙂
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Weed (kharpatwar) firewater and poetry,
What else you need to accomplish
Ha ha ha
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Hahah! Aapke iss ek mayne ne Kharpatwar(Weed, I did not know the translation before) I could not resist writing something on this word.
Do read it Rakesh sahab. 🙂
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The refuge that
I took was
just a beginning
What ruined
me the most
Was seeing
you laugh in
someone else’s arms.
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I again changed the sense of your poem.😂😂😉😜😜
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Wow…beautiful re-sensing of the poem…liked it…
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Thanks😊
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Following you…will go through your posts soon..
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I hope you like my posts😊😊
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Meanwhile you can go through mine…if you want…
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Yeah sure..😀
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Wow, man! How do you do that all the time haan? >D
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Andar se aata h..😂
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Laya kar ese hee.. Hahah! 🙂
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😂😂
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मेरी अक्लो-होश की सब हालतें
तुमने साँचे में जूनून के ढाल दीं
कर लिया था मैंने अहदे-तर्क़े-इश्क़
तुमने फिर बाहें गले में डाल दीं
Jaun aulia
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Bahut hee umda.
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Beautiful. I’m so happy to see you posting again. I’ve missed you! I hope you are doing well.
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awww.. I missed you too Kaw. 🙂
I have been doing good, how are you?
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Awww thank you. I’m glad to hear that. I’m doing well. Everything is going well.
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That’s great. ☺
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Thanks!
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Sire you strike the bulls eye again…
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Thank you Sangbad. 🙂
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Not to mention bhaiyaji…today my serialized novella Captive started…please let me know your review…
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Bilkul. 🙂
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Nice Mr. Official but what happened, are you alright?
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Hahah! It is just a poetry re, muje kya hona hain 😉
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😂 that’s what I was thinking!
Mr. Official 😎😺
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Hahha! new poetry just posted. 🙂
Usko padh ke muje stoner mat declare kar dena. 🙂 😀
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Hehehehehe!
Let me check😂
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😍😍😍
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🙂
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My kind of fun. Gteat poem.
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Haha! I am glad.
Thank you Vinny. 🙂
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No problem, sir. You do great work.
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Thank you Vinny for saying that. 😊
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No problem, bro.
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No imagination has no limits!!!! This makes you the best writer 😍
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That’s really sweet of you to say that Deepu. 😘😍😊
Thank you. 🙃🙃
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nice one
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Thank you, Ranjeeta. 🙂
I don’t know why but I always feel so connected with such topics. 🙂
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It’s gud….dikhta hai connection😂
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Hahah! I am not a stoner, but I feel connected to people who take it. Haha! 🙂
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Just had an event here at delhi…awesome response I got…isliye pooch rahi thi…marketing strategies😊
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Wow! Aur karo na fir ese 😀
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Kar hi rahi hoon…observing u keenly😊
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Hahah! Muje? Wo kyun? 🙂
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Kafi fan following hai …😉
Ur articles r chatpati chaat
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Hahaha! Chatpati chat! I love this word, what does it mean?
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U r hopefully Indian…and u must hav tried Indian chaats. .. spicy and magical…
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Awww.. 😍
Wo wala we call it Pani Puri in Indore. 😄😍😘😆
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Hey…sumit indori…I m ranjeeta bhopali..😂😂😂…MP wale ho kya…
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Arre wah yaar.. bataya nahi kabhi. 😁
Haa apan MP wale. 😅😅
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😂😂😂
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😅😅😅😆
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Mera kal hee Bhopal aane ka ho raha Tha. But me for nahi gaya😅
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M army officer’s wife ..presently posted in Delhi…will b going to bhopal soon😊
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Oh wow.. ☺
That’s so great. 🙂
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Hats off to your imagination, your skills, your expression, your words, I mean everything. Wow, Sumit.
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Woah! Look who’s saying this, Sanskriti your words have always made me appreciate you. :*
I loved that you love everything. Thank you, sanskriti. 🙂 :*
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Hehe . Hush😘
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❤😙😘
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❤ this!
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Thank you, Tamara.❤😍😘
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You’re quite welcome ❤
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🙂
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Ha…you never fail to surprise me! Loved it!
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Aww.. is it so? 😍😘☺
Thanks so much for saying that. 😇
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Oh wow.. I love it!. I was just able to fully read it and reflect.. Nice!!
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Thank you Jenn. 😅😄😘
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No one can ruin u if u want to be saved, from oneself
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I agree with you!
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Huzzah, love this!! 💖
And the new avatar is amazing. Do you model at all? Curious. You should.
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Hahahah! Umm no no. I don’t. 😉
Btw I have posted a blog in which I have shared a picture of a model who looks like me. 😉
Give it a read-
https://sumitofficial.wordpress.com/2017/02/10/what-happens-when-you-see-yourself-in-an-advertisement/
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Divine, Sir!
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Thank you so much, Ma’am. 🙂
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Wow 😍👌
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